【写作主题】本单元的话题是“初中生活的第一周”,要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇介绍自己初中生活第一周的文章。
【范文赏析】
My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.(开篇引入)I meet new teachers and classmates. The subjects are more difficult, but I try my best to learn them well. I have difficulty with English grammar at first. I can’t understand some of the sentences. But my teacher helps me and I improve quickly.(遇到的问题及解决方法)I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.(感受)I enjoy learning new things and making new friends. I’m looking forward to the coming weeks.(展望未来)
☑体裁:
☑佳词佳句积累:
1. 令人兴奋但又充满挑战
2. 尽某人最大的努力做某事
3. 在某方面有困难
5. 有点儿,稍微
7. 交朋友
9. 我初中的第一个星期令人兴奋但又充满挑战。
10. 在初中的第一天我感到有点儿紧张,不过我相信自己很快就能适应一切。
☑写作提升:使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子,根据中文提示,翻译句子。
1. 我学地理有困难。(have difficulty with)
2. 学生们盼望着这次学校旅行。(look forward to)
【范文赏析】
My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.(开篇引入)I meet new teachers and classmates. The subjects are more difficult, but I try my best to learn them well. I have difficulty with English grammar at first. I can’t understand some of the sentences. But my teacher helps me and I improve quickly.(遇到的问题及解决方法)I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.(感受)I enjoy learning new things and making new friends. I’m looking forward to the coming weeks.(展望未来)
☑体裁:
记叙文
☑人称:第一人称
☑时态:一般现在时
☑佳词佳句积累:
1. 令人兴奋但又充满挑战
exciting but challenging
2. 尽某人最大的努力做某事
try one’s best to do sth
3. 在某方面有困难
have difficulty with
4. 起初;首先 at first
5. 有点儿,稍微
a bit
6. 习惯于 get used to
7. 交朋友
make friends
8. 盼望 look forward to
9. 我初中的第一个星期令人兴奋但又充满挑战。
My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.
10. 在初中的第一天我感到有点儿紧张,不过我相信自己很快就能适应一切。
I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.
☑写作提升:使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子,根据中文提示,翻译句子。
1. 我学地理有困难。(have difficulty with)
I have difficulty with geography.
2. 学生们盼望着这次学校旅行。(look forward to)
The students look forward to this school trip.
答案
体裁:记叙文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
佳词佳句积累:
1. exciting but challenging
2. try one’s best to do sth
3. have difficulty with
4. at first
5. a bit
6. get used to
7. make friends
8. look forward to
9. My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.
10. I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.
写作提升:
1. I have difficulty with geography.
2. The students look forward to this school trip.
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
佳词佳句积累:
1. exciting but challenging
2. try one’s best to do sth
3. have difficulty with
4. at first
5. a bit
6. get used to
7. make friends
8. look forward to
9. My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.
10. I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.
写作提升:
1. I have difficulty with geography.
2. The students look forward to this school trip.
解析
【分析】
本题围绕初中英语单元话题“初中生活的第一周”设置练习,分为提取写作要素、积累核心短语、运用短语翻译句子三部分。解题时,先明确英语写作基础概念判断体裁、人称、时态;再对应范文提取固定短语;最后用指定短语完成汉译英,注意语法细节。
【解析】
1. 体裁:范文以叙述个人初中第一周的经历为主,属于记叙文;
2. 人称:全文以第一人称“I”展开叙述,故为第一人称;
3. 时态:描述当前初中生活状态,用一般现在时;
4. 佳词佳句积累:直接对应范文中的固定表达;
5. 写作提升:翻译时,第1题用“have difficulty with”后接学科名词geography,第2题用“look forward to”搭配主语复数the students。
【答案】
体裁:记叙文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
佳词佳句积累:
1. exciting but challenging
2. try one’s best to do sth
3. have difficulty with
4. at first
5. a bit
6. get used to
7. make friends
8. look forward to
9. My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.
10. I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.
写作提升:
1. I have difficulty with geography.
2. The students look forward to this school trip.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语固定短语、汉译英
【点评】
本题紧扣单元话题,考察基础写作要素掌握、核心短语积累与运用,是单元基础巩固题,帮助学生熟悉初中生活话题的英语表达,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.8
本题围绕初中英语单元话题“初中生活的第一周”设置练习,分为提取写作要素、积累核心短语、运用短语翻译句子三部分。解题时,先明确英语写作基础概念判断体裁、人称、时态;再对应范文提取固定短语;最后用指定短语完成汉译英,注意语法细节。
【解析】
1. 体裁:范文以叙述个人初中第一周的经历为主,属于记叙文;
2. 人称:全文以第一人称“I”展开叙述,故为第一人称;
3. 时态:描述当前初中生活状态,用一般现在时;
4. 佳词佳句积累:直接对应范文中的固定表达;
5. 写作提升:翻译时,第1题用“have difficulty with”后接学科名词geography,第2题用“look forward to”搭配主语复数the students。
【答案】
体裁:记叙文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
佳词佳句积累:
1. exciting but challenging
2. try one’s best to do sth
3. have difficulty with
4. at first
5. a bit
6. get used to
7. make friends
8. look forward to
9. My first week in junior high is exciting but challenging.
10. I feel a bit nervous on the first day of junior high, but I believe I will get used to everything soon.
写作提升:
1. I have difficulty with geography.
2. The students look forward to this school trip.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语固定短语、汉译英
【点评】
本题紧扣单元话题,考察基础写作要素掌握、核心短语积累与运用,是单元基础巩固题,帮助学生熟悉初中生活话题的英语表达,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.8
进入初中生活,我们能感受到前所未有的挑战,同时也充满期待。新的环境、新的同学和新的课程让我们既紧张又兴奋,我们期待着开启一段全新的学习旅程。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,用英文写一篇短文。

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数60左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下
部分仅供参考,希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维)

【实战演练】
On the first day of junior high, I feel
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)

注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数60左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下
【实战演练】
On the first day of junior high, I feel
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)
答案
One possible version:
On the first day of junior high, I feel excited but a bit nervous.
In my first maths lesson, I give the wrong answer to a question and everyone is looking at me. But my maths teacher Miss Wang smiles kindly and says, " It’s OK. Everyone makes mistakes. " She then helps me solve the problem. I’m so lucky to have a teacher like her.
In the coming three years, I look forward to learning new things and making more friends. I’m sure my junior high years will be wonderful!
On the first day of junior high, I feel excited but a bit nervous.
In my first maths lesson, I give the wrong answer to a question and everyone is looking at me. But my maths teacher Miss Wang smiles kindly and says, " It’s OK. Everyone makes mistakes. " She then helps me solve the problem. I’m so lucky to have a teacher like her.
In the coming three years, I look forward to learning new things and making more friends. I’m sure my junior high years will be wonderful!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:需围绕初中新生活主题,结合提示(参考示例),以给定开头写60词左右短文,不能照抄原文,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 承接开头,选取贴近学生的初中第一天具体小事(如课堂经历);2. 表达对未来的期待;3. 调整语句,确保连贯、词数达标,符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:① 补全开头内容:描述初中第一天数学课堂的小插曲(答错问题后老师鼓励),体现温暖;② 接着表达对未来三年的期待(学新知识、交新朋友);③ 整合语句,使全文连贯,词数约60,无真实信息,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
On the first day of junior high, I feel excited but a bit nervous.
In my first maths lesson, I give the wrong answer to a question and everyone is looking at me. But my maths teacher Miss Wang smiles kindly and says, " It’s OK. Everyone makes mistakes. " She then helps me solve the problem. I’m so lucky to have a teacher like her.
In the coming three years, I look forward to learning new things and making more friends. I’m sure my junior high years will be wonderful!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、初中生活话题表达、语句连贯
【点评】
本题围绕初中新生活展开,贴近学生实际,考查学生英语写作能力,要求结合提示拓展内容,语句连贯,难度适中,适合初中学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求:需围绕初中新生活主题,结合提示(参考示例),以给定开头写60词左右短文,不能照抄原文,不得出现真实信息。解题思路:1. 承接开头,选取贴近学生的初中第一天具体小事(如课堂经历);2. 表达对未来的期待;3. 调整语句,确保连贯、词数达标,符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤:① 补全开头内容:描述初中第一天数学课堂的小插曲(答错问题后老师鼓励),体现温暖;② 接着表达对未来三年的期待(学新知识、交新朋友);③ 整合语句,使全文连贯,词数约60,无真实信息,符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
On the first day of junior high, I feel excited but a bit nervous.
In my first maths lesson, I give the wrong answer to a question and everyone is looking at me. But my maths teacher Miss Wang smiles kindly and says, " It’s OK. Everyone makes mistakes. " She then helps me solve the problem. I’m so lucky to have a teacher like her.
In the coming three years, I look forward to learning new things and making more friends. I’m sure my junior high years will be wonderful!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、初中生活话题表达、语句连贯
【点评】
本题围绕初中新生活展开,贴近学生实际,考查学生英语写作能力,要求结合提示拓展内容,语句连贯,难度适中,适合初中学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.7
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