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你校英语校报正在举办以“温暖瞬间”（Warm Moments）为主题的征文活动，邀请同学们分享自己亲身经历的温暖小事。请你根据以下提纲，用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数80左右。
内容要点：
1. 简述别人为你做的温暖小事。
2. 何时发生？当时你遇到什么困难？
3. 他/她如何帮你？
4. 你感受如何，学到了什么？
内容要点：
1. 简述别人为你做的温暖小事。
2. 何时发生？当时你遇到什么困难？
3. 他/她如何帮你？
4. 你感受如何，学到了什么？
Last month, I forgot to take my umbrella on a cold, rainy day. My parents were both on business trips, so nobody could pick me up. Standing at the school gate, I watched the heavy rain and felt helpless.
Just then, my deskmate Linda came over with her umbrella. “Let’s go together!” she said with a smile. She walked me all the way home, though her house was in the opposite direction. Along the way, she kept moving the umbrella towards me, and half of her coat got wet.
That small act of kindness touched me deeply. Now, whenever it rains, I think of Linda and her wet coat. I have learnt that true friendship is not about big words, but about small actions.
From then on, I have always tried to be ready to help others, just like Linda helped me.
答案
Last month, I forgot to take my umbrella on a cold, rainy day. My parents were both on business trips, so nobody could pick me up. Standing at the school gate, I watched the heavy rain and felt helpless.
Just then, my deskmate Linda came over with her umbrella. “Let’s go together!” she said with a smile. She walked me all the way home, though her house was in the opposite direction. Along the way, she kept moving the umbrella towards me, and half of her coat got wet.
That small act of kindness touched me deeply. Now, whenever it rains, I think of Linda and her wet coat. I have learnt that true friendship is not about big words, but about small actions. From then on, I have always tried to be ready to help others, just like Linda helped me.
Just then, my deskmate Linda came over with her umbrella. “Let’s go together!” she said with a smile. She walked me all the way home, though her house was in the opposite direction. Along the way, she kept moving the umbrella towards me, and half of her coat got wet.
That small act of kindness touched me deeply. Now, whenever it rains, I think of Linda and her wet coat. I have learnt that true friendship is not about big words, but about small actions. From then on, I have always tried to be ready to help others, just like Linda helped me.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“温暖瞬间”为主题撰写校报征文，需紧扣四个核心内容要点：简述他人为自己做的温暖小事、事件发生的时间与自身遇到的困难、他人的具体帮助行为、自身的感受与收获。写作时需以第一人称叙事，结合亲身经历，语言简洁流畅，词数控制在80左右，契合校报征文的语境要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇交代事件背景：明确时间（上个月）、天气（雨天）、自身困难（忘带伞，父母出差无法接送）；2. 描述帮助过程：同桌Linda主动撑伞同行，送“我”回家时将伞偏向“我”，自己半边衣服淋湿；3. 表达情感与收获：抒发被善意打动的心情，点明从事件中领悟到的道理（友谊体现在小事而非豪言），并说明自身的改变（主动帮助他人）；4. 调整语言，控制词数，确保符合征文要求。
【答案】
Last month, I forgot to take my umbrella on a cold, rainy day. My parents were both on business trips, so nobody could pick me up. Standing at the school gate, I watched the heavy rain and felt helpless.
Just then, my deskmate Linda came over with her umbrella. “Let’s go together!” she said with a smile. She walked me all the way home, though her house was in the opposite direction. Along the way, she kept moving the umbrella towards me, and half of her coat got wet.
That small act of kindness touched me deeply. Now, whenever it rains, I think of Linda and her wet coat. I have learnt that true friendship is not about big words, but about small actions. From then on, I have always tried to be ready to help others, just like Linda helped me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语应用文写作、英语征文表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，主题积极正向，既考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力，又引导学生感知生活中的善意，传递正能量，符合校报征文的活动宗旨，是一道兼具语言考查与情感引导的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以“温暖瞬间”为主题撰写校报征文，需紧扣四个核心内容要点：简述他人为自己做的温暖小事、事件发生的时间与自身遇到的困难、他人的具体帮助行为、自身的感受与收获。写作时需以第一人称叙事，结合亲身经历，语言简洁流畅，词数控制在80左右，契合校报征文的语境要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇交代事件背景：明确时间（上个月）、天气（雨天）、自身困难（忘带伞，父母出差无法接送）；2. 描述帮助过程：同桌Linda主动撑伞同行，送“我”回家时将伞偏向“我”，自己半边衣服淋湿；3. 表达情感与收获：抒发被善意打动的心情，点明从事件中领悟到的道理（友谊体现在小事而非豪言），并说明自身的改变（主动帮助他人）；4. 调整语言，控制词数，确保符合征文要求。
【答案】
Last month, I forgot to take my umbrella on a cold, rainy day. My parents were both on business trips, so nobody could pick me up. Standing at the school gate, I watched the heavy rain and felt helpless.
Just then, my deskmate Linda came over with her umbrella. “Let’s go together!” she said with a smile. She walked me all the way home, though her house was in the opposite direction. Along the way, she kept moving the umbrella towards me, and half of her coat got wet.
That small act of kindness touched me deeply. Now, whenever it rains, I think of Linda and her wet coat. I have learnt that true friendship is not about big words, but about small actions. From then on, I have always tried to be ready to help others, just like Linda helped me.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语应用文写作、英语征文表达
【点评】
本题贴近学生生活实际，主题积极正向，既考查学生的英语语言组织与表达能力，又引导学生感知生活中的善意，传递正能量，符合校报征文的活动宗旨，是一道兼具语言考查与情感引导的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.6
