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(2026·江苏扬州梅岭中学期末)你校正在举行“校园之星(School Star)”评选活动，假如你是Millie，请根据表格内容用英语写一封自荐信参加评选活动。
【要求】
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to recommend myself as this year's School Star.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
【要求】
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥。
3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to recommend myself as this year's School Star.
I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work.
In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories.
Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
答案
One possible version
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to recommend myself as this year's School Star. I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work.
In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories.
Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
Dear Sir,
I'm writing to recommend myself as this year's School Star. I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work.
In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories.
Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
解析
【分析】本题为英语自荐信写作题，要求根据表格信息完成竞选“校园之星”的自荐信。解题思路：首先结合开头已给内容，先点明自身身份（九年级3班的Millie）；接着依次介绍表格中的基本情况（喜欢蓝色及原因）、个人偶像（奥黛丽·赫本及欣赏原因）；然后阐述兴趣爱好的三个方面，每个方面补充合理原因；再说明优秀事迹（帮助警方破绑架案、获奖）；最后表达当选愿望及后续计划，确保覆盖所有要求，语言连贯、语法正确，词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 补充身份与基本情况：I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. 2. 介绍偶像：My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work. 3. 描述兴趣爱好：In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories. 4. 说明优秀事迹：Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. 5. 表达愿望与计划：I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example. 最后加上结尾，确保内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Sir,
I'm writing to recommend myself as this year's School Star. I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work.
In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories.
Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点整合、原因状语从句
【点评】本文完整覆盖表格所有信息点，语言流畅自然，语法正确，适当添加合理原因丰富内容，符合自荐信的写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 补充身份与基本情况：I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. 2. 介绍偶像：My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work. 3. 描述兴趣爱好：In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories. 4. 说明优秀事迹：Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. 5. 表达愿望与计划：I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example. 最后加上结尾，确保内容连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Sir,
I'm writing to recommend myself as this year's School Star. I'm Millie from Class 3, Grade 9. My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel peaceful. My idol is Audrey Hepburn, and I admire her achievements in films and charity work.
In my free time, I enjoy listening to pop music as it brings me joy. On weekends, I like watching talent shows because they are exciting. I also love movies, especially action films, for their exciting stories.
Last year, I helped the police solve a kidnapping case and received the school's Award for Bravery. I hope to be chosen as the School Star. If I win, I will work harder to help others and set a good example.
Yours sincerely,
Millie
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点整合、原因状语从句
【点评】本文完整覆盖表格所有信息点，语言流畅自然，语法正确，适当添加合理原因丰富内容，符合自荐信的写作要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
