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四、提升题 书面表达。
校报的英语版块正在开展以“The Power of Music”为主题的征文活动，邀请同学们分享音乐在生活中的作用与影响。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先谈谈音乐对你生活的重要性，再详细说说它在不同情境下对你的影响，最后讲述音乐对人们的作用。
写作要点：
1. What role does music play in your daily life?
2. How does music change your emotions or help you in different situations?
3. What do you think of the power of music in people's lives?
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Music is an important part of our daily lives, and it has great power to help us live a better life.
校报的英语版块正在开展以“The Power of Music”为主题的征文活动，邀请同学们分享音乐在生活中的作用与影响。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先谈谈音乐对你生活的重要性，再详细说说它在不同情境下对你的影响，最后讲述音乐对人们的作用。
写作要点：
1. What role does music play in your daily life?
2. How does music change your emotions or help you in different situations?
3. What do you think of the power of music in people's lives?
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Music is an important part of our daily lives, and it has great power to help us live a better life.
答案
Music is my closest partner in my daily life, and it stays with me in almost every moment. When I feel stressed, soft piano music calms me down quickly. When I am upset, lively pop music makes me energetic again. It also helps me focus better while studying.
I think music is a magical language that can touch people's hearts and bring people together easily. It not only makes our daily lives more colourful but also gives us the courage to face difficulties. Let's enjoy music and feel its great power in our lives.
I think music is a magical language that can touch people's hearts and bring people together easily. It not only makes our daily lives more colourful but also gives us the courage to face difficulties. Let's enjoy music and feel its great power in our lives.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：需涵盖三个指定要点，开头已给出，词数控制在80-120，不能出现真实人名、校名、地名。第一步承接开头，说明音乐在自己日常生活中的角色；第二步分不同情境（如压力大、情绪低落、学习时）阐述音乐对自己的具体影响；第三步升华主题，说明音乐对人们整体的作用，确保条理清晰、行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，说明音乐在自己生活中的角色：Music is my closest partner in my daily life, and it stays with me in almost every moment.
2. 分不同情境写音乐的影响：When I feel stressed, soft piano music calms me down quickly. When I am upset, lively pop music makes me energetic again. It also helps me focus better while studying.
3. 升华主题，说明音乐对人们的作用：I think music is a magical language that can touch people's hearts and bring people together easily. It not only makes our daily lives more colourful but also gives us the courage to face difficulties. Let's enjoy music and feel its great power in our lives.
【答案】
Music is my closest partner in my daily life, and it stays with me in almost every moment. When I feel stressed, soft piano music calms me down quickly. When I am upset, lively pop music makes me energetic again. It also helps me focus better while studying.
I think music is a magical language that can touch people's hearts and bring people together easily. It not only makes our daily lives more colourful but also gives us the courage to face difficulties. Let's enjoy music and feel its great power in our lives.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“The Power of Music”主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，行文连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作要求：需涵盖三个指定要点，开头已给出，词数控制在80-120，不能出现真实人名、校名、地名。第一步承接开头，说明音乐在自己日常生活中的角色；第二步分不同情境（如压力大、情绪低落、学习时）阐述音乐对自己的具体影响；第三步升华主题，说明音乐对人们整体的作用，确保条理清晰、行文连贯。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，说明音乐在自己生活中的角色：Music is my closest partner in my daily life, and it stays with me in almost every moment.
2. 分不同情境写音乐的影响：When I feel stressed, soft piano music calms me down quickly. When I am upset, lively pop music makes me energetic again. It also helps me focus better while studying.
3. 升华主题，说明音乐对人们的作用：I think music is a magical language that can touch people's hearts and bring people together easily. It not only makes our daily lives more colourful but also gives us the courage to face difficulties. Let's enjoy music and feel its great power in our lives.
【答案】
Music is my closest partner in my daily life, and it stays with me in almost every moment. When I feel stressed, soft piano music calms me down quickly. When I am upset, lively pop music makes me energetic again. It also helps me focus better while studying.
I think music is a magical language that can touch people's hearts and bring people together easily. It not only makes our daily lives more colourful but also gives us the courage to face difficulties. Let's enjoy music and feel its great power in our lives.
【知识点】
英语主题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“The Power of Music”主题，完整覆盖所有写作要点，结构清晰，行文连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
