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三、提升题 书面表达。
在学习中,我们难免会遇到困难和挑战。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文,先介绍你曾遇到的一个学习上的困难,再分享你是如何克服这个困难的,最后谈谈你从这次经历中学到了什么。
写作要点:
1. What difficulty did you have with your studies?
2. How did you overcome the difficulty?
3. What have you learned from this experience?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Difficulties in learning are quite common. What matters is how we deal with them.
在学习中,我们难免会遇到困难和挑战。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文,先介绍你曾遇到的一个学习上的困难,再分享你是如何克服这个困难的,最后谈谈你从这次经历中学到了什么。
写作要点:
1. What difficulty did you have with your studies?
2. How did you overcome the difficulty?
3. What have you learned from this experience?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Difficulties in learning are quite common. What matters is how we deal with them.
答案
I once had trouble with English listening. I found it hard to understand what the speakers were saying, so I often got my answers wrong in listening tests. I felt upset, and then I decided to make a change.
First, I listened to English podcasts every morning for 20 minutes. I also watched English films and repeated the dialogues. Moreover, my English teacher recommended some listening websites to me.
Now my listening has improved a lot. I can understand most of what the speakers say, even when they speak fast. I feel more confident than before.
From this experience, I have learned practice makes perfect. If we keep trying and ask for help, we can overcome difficulties and make progress.
First, I listened to English podcasts every morning for 20 minutes. I also watched English films and repeated the dialogues. Moreover, my English teacher recommended some listening websites to me.
Now my listening has improved a lot. I can understand most of what the speakers say, even when they speak fast. I feel more confident than before.
From this experience, I have learned practice makes perfect. If we keep trying and ask for help, we can overcome difficulties and make progress.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需围绕“学习中的困难”写短文，包含三个要点：①遇到的学习困难；②克服困难的方法；③从经历中获得的感悟，开头已给出，词数80-120，不能出现真实信息。解题思路：1. 选择贴近学生生活的具体学习困难（如英语听力）；2. 详细描述克服困难的具体行动，确保内容具体；3. 总结感悟，贴合主题，保证行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】短文承接开头，先点明曾遇到英语听力困难（听不懂说话内容，考试常出错）；接着说明克服方法：每天听20分钟英语播客、看英文电影重复对话、求助老师获取听力网站；再写克服后的进步（听力提升，更自信）；最后总结感悟：熟能生巧，坚持和求助能克服困难。
【答案】I once had trouble with English listening. I found it hard to understand what the speakers were saying, so I often got my answers wrong in listening tests. I felt upset, and then I decided to make a change.
First, I listened to English podcasts every morning for 20 minutes. I also watched English films and repeated the dialogues. Moreover, my English teacher recommended some listening websites to me.
Now my listening has improved a lot. I can understand most of what the speakers say, even when they speak fast. I feel more confident than before.
From this experience, I have learned practice makes perfect. If we keep trying and ask for help, we can overcome difficulties and make progress.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】本题为英语书面表达提升题，考查学生围绕主题组织语言、叙述经历、表达感悟的能力，要求紧扣要点、行文连贯，贴近学生学习生活，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】短文承接开头，先点明曾遇到英语听力困难（听不懂说话内容，考试常出错）；接着说明克服方法：每天听20分钟英语播客、看英文电影重复对话、求助老师获取听力网站；再写克服后的进步（听力提升，更自信）；最后总结感悟：熟能生巧，坚持和求助能克服困难。
【答案】I once had trouble with English listening. I found it hard to understand what the speakers were saying, so I often got my answers wrong in listening tests. I felt upset, and then I decided to make a change.
First, I listened to English podcasts every morning for 20 minutes. I also watched English films and repeated the dialogues. Moreover, my English teacher recommended some listening websites to me.
Now my listening has improved a lot. I can understand most of what the speakers say, even when they speak fast. I feel more confident than before.
From this experience, I have learned practice makes perfect. If we keep trying and ask for help, we can overcome difficulties and make progress.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】本题为英语书面表达提升题，考查学生围绕主题组织语言、叙述经历、表达感悟的能力，要求紧扣要点、行文连贯，贴近学生学习生活，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
