九、书面表达。
请写一篇短文介绍你的3个健康生活习惯以及1个不健康的生活习惯,并针对这个不健康的生活习惯给出合理的改善方式。不少于5句话。
请写一篇短文介绍你的3个健康生活习惯以及1个不健康的生活习惯,并针对这个不健康的生活习惯给出合理的改善方式。不少于5句话。
答案
Hello, I have some good living habits. First, I always go to bed before 9 o'clock and get up at 6:30 every day. Second, I eat a lot of vegetables and fruit every meal. Third, I often play ping-pong with my father after school. But I have a bad habit: I sometimes eat too many candies before going to bed. It's bad for my teeth. I decide to eat only one candy a day, and I will brush my teeth carefully before going to sleep every day.
解析
本题要求使用一般现在时完成写作,贴合五年级上册的词汇语法要求,写作思路参考:1. 开篇总述自己有多个健康习惯,也有一个需要改正的不健康习惯;2. 依次介绍3个健康生活习惯,选用学过的简单表达描述;3. 介绍1个不健康习惯,再给出对应的可落地的改善方法,保证语句通顺,不少于5句话,语法正确即可。
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