分担家务有助于青少年提升自理能力,掌握必备的生活本领。请以“Doing Chores Makes Me Better”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:
1. 自己会做的家务;
2. 自己还打算学做哪些家务及原因;
3. 做家务对自己有哪些帮助或意义。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名;
2. 不少于80词。
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
要点提示:
1. 自己会做的家务;
2. 自己还打算学做哪些家务及原因;
3. 做家务对自己有哪些帮助或意义。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名;
2. 不少于80词。
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
I like doing chores at home. Now I can clean my room, wash my clothes and help my mom do the dishes. These things are easy for me, and I do them every weekend.
I want to learn to cook simple food, like eggs and tomatoes. Because my parents are busy and tired after work, I want to make dinner for them.
Doing chores helps me learn to look after myself. It also makes me responsible and happy. I think it really makes me a better kid.
答案
One possible version:
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
I like doing chores at home. Now I can clean my room, wash my clothes and help my mom do the dishes. These things are easy for me, and I do them every weekend.
I want to learn to cook simple food, like eggs and tomatoes. Because my parents are busy and tired after work, I want to make dinner for them.
Doing chores helps me learn to look after myself. It also makes me responsible and happy. I think it really makes me a better kid.
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
I like doing chores at home. Now I can clean my room, wash my clothes and help my mom do the dishes. These things are easy for me, and I do them every weekend.
I want to learn to cook simple food, like eggs and tomatoes. Because my parents are busy and tired after work, I want to make dinner for them.
Doing chores helps me learn to look after myself. It also makes me responsible and happy. I think it really makes me a better kid.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,主题为“Doing Chores Makes Me Better”,需紧扣三个核心要点写作:1. 自己已会做的家务;2. 打算学做的家务及原因;3. 做家务的意义。写作时需注意:不得出现真实校名、人名,词数不少于80,结构清晰、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
按照要点分三段组织内容:第一段介绍自己目前能完成的家务(如整理房间、洗衣服、洗碗),并说明完成频率;第二段说明想学的家务(如做简单饭菜),原因是父母工作忙碌疲惫,想为他们分担;第三段阐述做家务的意义,如提升自理能力、培养责任感,呼应主题“让自己更好”。
【答案】
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
I like doing chores at home. Now I can clean my room, wash my clothes and help my mom do the dishes. These things are easy for me, and I do them every weekend.
I want to learn to cook simple food, like eggs and tomatoes. Because my parents are busy and tired after work, I want to make dinner for them.
Doing chores helps me learn to look after myself. It also makes me responsible and happy. I think it really makes me a better kid.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目主题,覆盖所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁通顺,符合写作要求,是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,主题为“Doing Chores Makes Me Better”,需紧扣三个核心要点写作:1. 自己已会做的家务;2. 打算学做的家务及原因;3. 做家务的意义。写作时需注意:不得出现真实校名、人名,词数不少于80,结构清晰、逻辑通顺。
【解析】
按照要点分三段组织内容:第一段介绍自己目前能完成的家务(如整理房间、洗衣服、洗碗),并说明完成频率;第二段说明想学的家务(如做简单饭菜),原因是父母工作忙碌疲惫,想为他们分担;第三段阐述做家务的意义,如提升自理能力、培养责任感,呼应主题“让自己更好”。
【答案】
Doing Chores Makes Me Better
I like doing chores at home. Now I can clean my room, wash my clothes and help my mom do the dishes. These things are easy for me, and I do them every weekend.
I want to learn to cook simple food, like eggs and tomatoes. Because my parents are busy and tired after work, I want to make dinner for them.
Doing chores helps me learn to look after myself. It also makes me responsible and happy. I think it really makes me a better kid.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目主题,覆盖所有要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁通顺,符合写作要求,是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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