Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to make
I hope you will take my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
I am writing to make
suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school should add more sports facilities. Many students love sports and sports are good for us.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can broaden our horizons.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with those who have shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
First, I would like to suggest that our school should add more sports facilities. Many students love sports and sports are good for us.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can broaden our horizons.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with those who have shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will take my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school should add more sports facilities. Many students love sports and sports are good for us.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can broaden our horizons.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with those who have shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will take my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Mr Wang,
I am writing to make suggestions on how to improve some parts of our school life.
First, I would like to suggest that our school should add more sports facilities. Many students love sports and sports are good for us.
Second, I think that the library should be open until 6:00 p. m. We can borrow books after school. Reading books can broaden our horizons.
Third, students hope to join different clubs because they can make friends with those who have shared interests.
Finally, I think it will be a good idea to create a small garden. It can make our school look more beautiful. We can learn a lot from nature.
I hope you will take my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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