登录
二书面表达
在日常生活中，人们时常会遇到身体
的小不适。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，
以“A Dentist-Patient Conversation About
Toothache”为话题，编写一段牙科医生与
患者关于牙痛的英语对话。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础
上适当拓展信息；
(2) 语句连贯。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体：
人称：
(2) 思路构建
在日常生活中，人们时常会遇到身体
的小不适。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，
以“A Dentist-Patient Conversation About
Toothache”为话题，编写一段牙科医生与
患者关于牙痛的英语对话。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础
上适当拓展信息；
(2) 语句连贯。
写作指导
(1) 审题定调
文体：
场景对话
时态：一般现在时
人称：
各种人称
(2) 思路构建
答案
(1) 场景对话；一般现在时；各种人称
One possible version:
Patient: Good morning, dentist. I'm having a toothache.
Dentist: Good morning. Don't worry. Let me take a look. Which tooth is it?
Patient: It's this one on the lower right. It started hurting yesterday afternoon.
Dentist: Hmm, does it hurt when I touch it like this?
Patient: Ouch! Yes, that hurts a lot. And it also aches when I eat something cold or sweet.
Dentist: I see. Do you like eating sweets?
Patient: Well, I love chocolate and ice cream.
Dentist: That could be the reason. I'll need to clean and fill your tooth.
Patient: Will it hurt?
Dentist: You wouldn't feel much pain. But after the treatment, your tooth might feel a bit sensitive for a while.
Patient: Okay. What should I do after the treatment?
Dentist: Avoid eating hard foods for a day or two. And make sure to brush your teeth at least twice a day.
Patient: Got it, dentist. Thank you so much.
Dentist: You're welcome. If you still feel pain after a few days, come back and see me.
One possible version:
Patient: Good morning, dentist. I'm having a toothache.
Dentist: Good morning. Don't worry. Let me take a look. Which tooth is it?
Patient: It's this one on the lower right. It started hurting yesterday afternoon.
Dentist: Hmm, does it hurt when I touch it like this?
Patient: Ouch! Yes, that hurts a lot. And it also aches when I eat something cold or sweet.
Dentist: I see. Do you like eating sweets?
Patient: Well, I love chocolate and ice cream.
Dentist: That could be the reason. I'll need to clean and fill your tooth.
Patient: Will it hurt?
Dentist: You wouldn't feel much pain. But after the treatment, your tooth might feel a bit sensitive for a while.
Patient: Okay. What should I do after the treatment?
Dentist: Avoid eating hard foods for a day or two. And make sure to brush your teeth at least twice a day.
Patient: Got it, dentist. Thank you so much.
Dentist: You're welcome. If you still feel pain after a few days, come back and see me.
解析
【分析】
本题是牙科医生与患者关于牙痛的英语对话写作题，解题思路分三步：第一步审题定调，明确文体为场景对话，时态以一般现在时为主，人称可灵活使用；第二步构建对话逻辑，按照“双方问候→患者说明牙痛情况（部位、时间、诱因）→医生检查询问→诊断原因→给出治疗方案→告知术后注意事项→告别”的顺序展开；第三步编写对话时需结合日常就医情境，语句连贯自然，适当拓展细节使内容完整。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：根据题目要求，文体为场景对话，时态选用一般现在时（描述当前病情、日常习惯等），人称使用各种人称（患者用第一人称，医生用第二、第三人称等）。
2. 思路构建：围绕就医场景，依次设计以下环节：①双方礼貌问候；②患者陈述牙痛的具体情况（如疼痛部位、开始时间、诱发因素）；③医生进行检查并询问相关习惯（如是否爱吃甜食）；④医生诊断并说明治疗方案；⑤医生告知术后注意事项；⑥双方礼貌告别。
3. 编写对话：结合上述环节，用英语编写连贯的对话，确保符合语法规则和日常表达习惯，适当拓展细节使内容完整。
【答案】
(1) 场景对话；一般现在时；各种人称
One possible version:
Patient: Good morning, dentist. I'm having a toothache.
Dentist: Good morning. Don't worry. Let me take a look. Which tooth is it?
Patient: It's this one on the lower right. It started hurting yesterday afternoon.
Dentist: Hmm, does it hurt when I touch it like this?
Patient: Ouch! Yes, that hurts a lot. And it also aches when I eat something cold or sweet.
Dentist: I see. Do you like eating sweets?
Patient: Well, I love chocolate and ice cream.
Dentist: That could be the reason. I'll need to clean and fill your tooth.
Patient: Will it hurt?
Dentist: You wouldn't feel much pain. But after the treatment, your tooth might feel a bit sensitive for a while.
Patient: Okay. What should I do after the treatment?
Dentist: Avoid eating hard foods for a day or two. And make sure to brush your teeth at least twice a day.
Patient: Got it, dentist. Thank you so much.
Dentist: You're welcome. If you still feel pain after a few days, come back and see me.
【知识点】
英语对话写作、一般现在时运用、就医场景表达
【点评】
本题考查学生在特定生活场景下的英语书面表达能力，要求学生运用所学英语知识构建符合逻辑的对话，体现了英语的实际交际功能，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题是牙科医生与患者关于牙痛的英语对话写作题，解题思路分三步：第一步审题定调，明确文体为场景对话，时态以一般现在时为主，人称可灵活使用；第二步构建对话逻辑，按照“双方问候→患者说明牙痛情况（部位、时间、诱因）→医生检查询问→诊断原因→给出治疗方案→告知术后注意事项→告别”的顺序展开；第三步编写对话时需结合日常就医情境，语句连贯自然，适当拓展细节使内容完整。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：根据题目要求，文体为场景对话，时态选用一般现在时（描述当前病情、日常习惯等），人称使用各种人称（患者用第一人称，医生用第二、第三人称等）。
2. 思路构建：围绕就医场景，依次设计以下环节：①双方礼貌问候；②患者陈述牙痛的具体情况（如疼痛部位、开始时间、诱发因素）；③医生进行检查并询问相关习惯（如是否爱吃甜食）；④医生诊断并说明治疗方案；⑤医生告知术后注意事项；⑥双方礼貌告别。
3. 编写对话：结合上述环节，用英语编写连贯的对话，确保符合语法规则和日常表达习惯，适当拓展细节使内容完整。
【答案】
(1) 场景对话；一般现在时；各种人称
One possible version:
Patient: Good morning, dentist. I'm having a toothache.
Dentist: Good morning. Don't worry. Let me take a look. Which tooth is it?
Patient: It's this one on the lower right. It started hurting yesterday afternoon.
Dentist: Hmm, does it hurt when I touch it like this?
Patient: Ouch! Yes, that hurts a lot. And it also aches when I eat something cold or sweet.
Dentist: I see. Do you like eating sweets?
Patient: Well, I love chocolate and ice cream.
Dentist: That could be the reason. I'll need to clean and fill your tooth.
Patient: Will it hurt?
Dentist: You wouldn't feel much pain. But after the treatment, your tooth might feel a bit sensitive for a while.
Patient: Okay. What should I do after the treatment?
Dentist: Avoid eating hard foods for a day or two. And make sure to brush your teeth at least twice a day.
Patient: Got it, dentist. Thank you so much.
Dentist: You're welcome. If you still feel pain after a few days, come back and see me.
【知识点】
英语对话写作、一般现在时运用、就医场景表达
【点评】
本题考查学生在特定生活场景下的英语书面表达能力，要求学生运用所学英语知识构建符合逻辑的对话，体现了英语的实际交际功能，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
