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假如现在是周日上午10点,天气晴朗,公园里有很多人,他们玩得很开心。请你根据表格内容提示,用英语写一篇词数为80左右的短文,介绍他们正在进行的活动,内容可适当发挥。
|人物|活动|地点|
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|一些女孩|唱歌、跳舞|在公园的中心|
|一些男孩|
|在山上|
|Tom|看书|在湖边|
|Sally|听妈妈讲故事|那边|
假如现在是周日上午10点,天气晴朗,公园里有很多人,他们玩得很开心。请你根据表格内容提示,用英语写一篇词数为80左右的短文,介绍他们正在进行的活动,内容可适当发挥。
|人物|活动|地点|
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|一些女孩|唱歌、跳舞|在公园的中心|
|一些男孩|
|在山上||Tom|看书|在湖边|
|Sally|听妈妈讲故事|那边|
答案
One possible version:
It's 10 o'clock on Sunday. It's fine. There are many children in the park. They are playing happily. Some children are playing games under a big tree. Some girls are singing and dancing in the center of the park. Some boys are climbing up the hill.
Tom is sitting by the lake. He's reading a book. Where is Sally? She's over there. What is she doing? She's listening to a story. Her mother is telling her how to save the animals.
It's 10 o'clock on Sunday. It's fine. There are many children in the park. They are playing happily. Some children are playing games under a big tree. Some girls are singing and dancing in the center of the park. Some boys are climbing up the hill.
Tom is sitting by the lake. He's reading a book. Where is Sally? She's over there. What is she doing? She's listening to a story. Her mother is telling her how to save the animals.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语提示类写作题，解题思路为：1. 确定时态：题目明确时间为周日上午10点，描述正在进行的动作，需使用现在进行时（结构为“be + 动词现在分词”）；2. 提取表格关键信息：梳理人物、活动、地点三类信息，转化为符合英语表达的句子；3. 适当补充合理细节，使内容连贯，同时控制词数在80左右；4. 开头点明时间、天气、场景，结尾呼应“玩得开心”的主题。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头交代时间、天气与场景：It's 10 o'clock on Sunday. It's fine. There are many children in the park. They are playing happily.；2. 描述女孩活动：Some girls are singing and dancing in the center of the park.；3. 描述男孩活动：Some boys are climbing up the hill.；4. 描述Tom的活动：Tom is sitting by the lake. He's reading a book.；5. 描述Sally的活动：Where is Sally? She's over there. What is she doing? She's listening to a story. Her mother is telling her how to save the animals.；6. 整体调整语句流畅度，确保时态正确、词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
It's 10 o'clock on Sunday. It's fine. There are many children in the park. They are playing happily. Some children are playing games under a big tree. Some girls are singing and dancing in the center of the park. Some boys are climbing up the hill.
Tom is sitting by the lake. He's reading a book. Where is Sally? She's over there. What is she doing? She's listening to a story. Her mother is telling her how to save the animals.
【知识点】
现在进行时、英语写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础写作题，考查学生对现在进行时的掌握及信息整合能力，要求根据表格提示组织语言并适当发挥，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.4
这是一道英语提示类写作题，解题思路为：1. 确定时态：题目明确时间为周日上午10点，描述正在进行的动作，需使用现在进行时（结构为“be + 动词现在分词”）；2. 提取表格关键信息：梳理人物、活动、地点三类信息，转化为符合英语表达的句子；3. 适当补充合理细节，使内容连贯，同时控制词数在80左右；4. 开头点明时间、天气、场景，结尾呼应“玩得开心”的主题。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头交代时间、天气与场景：It's 10 o'clock on Sunday. It's fine. There are many children in the park. They are playing happily.；2. 描述女孩活动：Some girls are singing and dancing in the center of the park.；3. 描述男孩活动：Some boys are climbing up the hill.；4. 描述Tom的活动：Tom is sitting by the lake. He's reading a book.；5. 描述Sally的活动：Where is Sally? She's over there. What is she doing? She's listening to a story. Her mother is telling her how to save the animals.；6. 整体调整语句流畅度，确保时态正确、词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
It's 10 o'clock on Sunday. It's fine. There are many children in the park. They are playing happily. Some children are playing games under a big tree. Some girls are singing and dancing in the center of the park. Some boys are climbing up the hill.
Tom is sitting by the lake. He's reading a book. Where is Sally? She's over there. What is she doing? She's listening to a story. Her mother is telling her how to save the animals.
【知识点】
现在进行时、英语写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础写作题，考查学生对现在进行时的掌握及信息整合能力，要求根据表格提示组织语言并适当发挥，难度适中，适合基础阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.4
