第七课时 单元写作
一、单元主题
本单元以"Career talks"为话题，涉及"人与自我"和"人与社会"的主题。通过讨论学习"职业类型"，"工作带来的收益"，"理想的职业"以及"职业的变化发展"等让学生懂得人生中工作的重要性，从而使学生树立正确的劳动价值观，懂得尊重他人的劳动，珍惜劳动成果，从而提高自身的素质，以便未来通过劳动为社会创造价值。
二、词句积累
1. 有关职业或工作的表达
工人：worker 警官：police officer 牙科医生：dentist
歌手：singer 时装设计师：fashion designer 导游：tour guide
飞行员：pilot 收银员：cashier 新科技：new technology
窗户清理：window cleaning 成就感：a sense of achievement
2. 有关职业、工作或劳动的句子
◇选择一份你热爱的工作，那么你这辈子不需要为工作而劳累。
Choose a job you love, and you will never have to work a day in your life.
◇你的工作将会占据你生活的很大一部分，而要获得真正的满足感，唯一的途径就是去做你认为伟大的工作。
Your work is going to fill a large part of your life, and the only way to be truly satisfied is to do what you believe is great work.
◇劳动不会使任何人蒙羞；不幸的是，偶尔你会发现某些人让劳动蒙羞。
Labour disgraces no man; unfortunately, you occasionally find men who disgrace labour.
◇做出杰出的工作的唯一的办法就是热爱你所做的事。
The only way to do great work is to love what you do.
◇事业不仅仅是为了谋生，更是为了创造生活。
A career is not just about making a living, but making a life.
◇工作并非是人类的惩罚，而是其回报、其力量、其荣耀以及其乐趣。
Work is not man's punishment. It is his reward and his strength, his glory and his pleasure.
◇出色完成工作所获得的回报，是获得更多工作的机会。
The reward for work well done is the opportunity to do more.
三、谋篇布局
1. 开头句
(1)Everyone has a dream job.
(2)Labour is the primary need of human beings.
2. 主体典型句
(1)Work provides money to support our lives.
(2)Work can help people make friends and learn new skills.
(3)I think my job will be challenging but very meaningful.
3. 结尾句
(1)In conclusion, work is an important part of life.
(2)As long as everyone participates in labour, society will be even better.
四、读写迁移
阅读下面短文，完成句子。
Everyone has a dream job, and mine is to become a teacher. I love helping others, and teaching allows me to share knowledge and inspire students. 1. （它是一份有意义的工作）that can shape young minds and make a difference in society.
Work brings us many things. First, it provides money to support our lives. Second, 2. (它给我们带来一种成就感). When we work hard, we feel proud of ourselves. Lastly, work helps us make friends and learn new skills, which makes life more interesting.
Jobs have changed a lot over time. In the past, many people worked in factories. 3. （如今，科技创造了新的工作岗位）, like programmers and social media managers. Some jobs, such as drivers, may disappear in the future because of self-driving cars. As society develops, 4. （工作将会不断变化）, so we must keep learning new skills to adapt.
In conclusion, work is an important part of life. No matter what job we choose, we should work hard and enjoy it.
五、写作任务
本周英语课的学习围绕主题"Career talks"展开。请你以"My Future Job"为题，根据以下提示问题写一篇英语短文，描绘20年后你的职业。
1. What job will you do?
2. What do you think of your job?
3. Why do you like such a job?
4. What else do you want to say about your future job?
要求：1. 上述提示信息需全用上，可以适当发挥；2. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
·思维框架

·自我创作
My Future Job
In 20 years, I will be

四、1. It's a meaningful job 2. it gives us a sense of
achievement 3. Today, technology has created
new jobs 4. jobs will keep changing
五、Possible Version 1:
My Future Job
In 20 years, I will be a scientist. I love science
because it helps people and makes the world better.
I think I'm kind and I always see helping others as
my life goal. So my job will be to research new
medicines to cure diseases. I think my job will be
challenging but very meaningful.
I like this job because I can help sick people and
improve their lives. Also, I enjoy doing
experiments and discovering new things. Every day
will be exciting and full of surprises.
Besides my work, I hope to travel around the
world and share my research with other scientists. I
believe that with hard work, I can make a difference
in the future.
Possible Version 2:
My Future Job
In 20 years, I will be a robotics engineer. I
believe this job will be both exciting and meaningful
because robots will play a huge role in our daily
lives.
I will design and build robots to help people in
different ways, such as assisting doctors in
surgeries or helping the elderly at home. What
makes this job special is that I can use my creativity
to solve real-world problems. Not only will I work
with advanced technology, but I will also have the
chance to make a positive impact on society.
I love this job because it combines my passion
for science and my desire to help others. If I
succeed in creating useful robots, I will feel proud
of my contributions.
In the future, I hope my work will inspire more
young people to join this field. Together, we can
build a better tomorrow!

【分析】
本题是英语单元写作题，主题为“My Future Job”，要求描绘20年后的职业，需涵盖指定的四个问题，词数控制在80左右，且提供了清晰的写作框架和词句积累。解题思路：1. 开篇点题：利用给定的开头结构，明确20年后的具体职业；2. 主体部分：结合框架要求，说明喜欢该职业的原因、职业内容，补充相关细节；3. 结尾部分：表达通过努力实现职业目标的愿望。需紧扣主题，运用积累的词汇和句式，确保涵盖所有提示信息。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇：承接给定开头“In 20 years, I will be...”，补充具体职业（如a scientist）；2. 主体：先说明喜欢该职业的原因（如“I love science because it helps people and makes the world better”），再介绍职业内容（如“So my job will be to research new medicines to cure diseases”），接着补充喜欢的其他点（如“I enjoy doing experiments and discovering new things”）；3. 结尾：表达努力实现目标的愿望（如“I believe that with hard work, I can make a difference in the future”）。需确保所有提示信息都被覆盖，适当发挥，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
My Future Job
In 20 years, I will be a scientist. I love science because it helps people and makes the world better. I think I'm kind and I always see helping others as my life goal. So my job will be to research new medicines to cure diseases. I think my job will be challenging but very meaningful.
I like this job because I can help sick people and improve their lives. Also, I enjoy doing experiments and discovering new things. Every day will be exciting and full of surprises.
I believe that with hard work, I can make a difference in the future.
【知识点】
英语写作、职业话题表达、英语句式运用
【点评】
本题围绕“Career talks”单元主题，要求学生结合给定框架和提示完成英语短文，既锻炼了英语写作能力，又引导学生树立正确的劳动价值观，符合单元教学目标，是典型的单元写作训练题。
【难度系数】
0.6