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六、书面表达
健康是幸福生活的基石，尤其是青少年的健康更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应学校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全俱乐部成员做一个有关“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。
提示：exercise,a regular life,a balanced diet
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名与校名。
Dear Friends,
It's a great honour to speak here. My topic is “The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”.
Thanks for listening.
健康是幸福生活的基石，尤其是青少年的健康更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应学校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全俱乐部成员做一个有关“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示，完成报告。
提示：exercise,a regular life,a balanced diet
要求：
1.词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得使用真实的姓名与校名。
Dear Friends,
It's a great honour to speak here. My topic is “The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”.
Thanks for listening.
答案
One possible version:
Dear Friends,
It's a great honour to speak here. My topic is "The importance and secrets of keeping healthy".
It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What's more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, if we get up early, we can breathe fresh air, which is good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
Thanks for listening.
Dear Friends,
It's a great honour to speak here. My topic is "The importance and secrets of keeping healthy".
It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What's more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, if we get up early, we can breathe fresh air, which is good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
Thanks for listening.
解析
【分析】
本题为提示类英语书面表达，要求围绕“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”完成报告，需用到exercise、regular life、balanced diet三个提示，词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出。解题思路：第一步，承接已给开头，点明健康对生活的重要性；第二步，分三点阐述保持健康的秘诀，分别对应三个提示，用简单句清晰说明；第三步，结尾总结呼应主题，完成报告。需注意避免真实信息，控制词数，保证语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 先点明健康的重要性：It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
2. 分三点阐述秘诀：First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What's more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, getting up early lets us breathe fresh air, good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
3. 结尾总结：In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Friends,
It's a great honour to speak here. My topic is "The importance and secrets of keeping healthy".
It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What's more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, if we get up early, we can breathe fresh air, which is good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、提示类作文、健康主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，覆盖所有提示要点，采用总-分-总结构，语言简洁流畅，符合报告的正式语气，词数达标，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为提示类英语书面表达，要求围绕“The importance and secrets of keeping healthy”完成报告，需用到exercise、regular life、balanced diet三个提示，词数80左右，开头与结尾已给出。解题思路：第一步，承接已给开头，点明健康对生活的重要性；第二步，分三点阐述保持健康的秘诀，分别对应三个提示，用简单句清晰说明；第三步，结尾总结呼应主题，完成报告。需注意避免真实信息，控制词数，保证语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 先点明健康的重要性：It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
2. 分三点阐述秘诀：First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What's more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, getting up early lets us breathe fresh air, good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
3. 结尾总结：In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Friends,
It's a great honour to speak here. My topic is "The importance and secrets of keeping healthy".
It is well known that health is the source of our energy. With a healthy body, we are more likely to lead a happy life. So it is important for us to keep healthy.
First of all, we should take enough exercise every day to build up our body. What's more, it is necessary for us to live a regular life. For example, if we get up early, we can breathe fresh air, which is good for our life. Thirdly, keeping a balanced diet is also a good way to keep healthy.
In short, health is so important to us that we should try our best to lead a healthy life.
Thanks for listening.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、提示类作文、健康主题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题，覆盖所有提示要点，采用总-分-总结构，语言简洁流畅，符合报告的正式语气，词数达标，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
