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二、书面表达。
假如你是李明,你的好友Anna给你寄来了一封信。请根据来信内容给她回信,要求80词左右。
Dear Anna,
Yours,
Li Ming
假如你是李明,你的好友Anna给你寄来了一封信。请根据来信内容给她回信,要求80词左右。
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to receive your letter.
I agree that reading is very important to us. It
can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich
our knowledge. Some people say that money is the
best thing in the world, but I think reading is the
best. By reading you can get all kinds of knowledge.
Also, reading books makes your life enjoyable.
One of my favourite books is Treasure Island.
It tells us a story about a boy who goes out to sea
and finds an island full of treasures. It is a really
fantastic adventure. Have you ever read it? If not,
you can read it later. Hope we could be better
through reading.
I agree that reading is very important to us. It
can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich
our knowledge. Some people say that money is the
best thing in the world, but I think reading is the
best. By reading you can get all kinds of knowledge.
Also, reading books makes your life enjoyable.
One of my favourite books is Treasure Island.
It tells us a story about a boy who goes out to sea
and finds an island full of treasures. It is a really
fantastic adventure. Have you ever read it? If not,
you can read it later. Hope we could be better
through reading.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to receive your letter.
I agree that reading is very important to us. It
can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich
our knowledge. Some people say that money is the
best thing in the world, but I think reading is the
best. By reading you can get all kinds of knowledge.
Also, reading books makes your life enjoyable.
One of my favourite books is Treasure Island.
It tells us a story about a boy who goes out to sea
and finds an island full of treasures. It is a really
fantastic adventure. Have you ever read it? If not,
you can read it later. Hope we could be better
through reading.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to receive your letter.
I agree that reading is very important to us. It
can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich
our knowledge. Some people say that money is the
best thing in the world, but I think reading is the
best. By reading you can get all kinds of knowledge.
Also, reading books makes your life enjoyable.
One of my favourite books is Treasure Island.
It tells us a story about a boy who goes out to sea
and finds an island full of treasures. It is a really
fantastic adventure. Have you ever read it? If not,
you can read it later. Hope we could be better
through reading.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
首先梳理解题思路：第一步先通读Anna的来信，找出所有需要回应的核心问题：你的近况、你对阅读的看法、你最喜欢的书是什么、这本书的主要内容，回信必须全部覆盖这些要点，不能缺漏。第二步搭建行文逻辑：开头先礼貌回应收到来信，呼应对方的问候；接着结合Anna提到的“老师强调阅读重要性”的内容，阐述自己对阅读的态度和阅读的好处；之后介绍自己最喜欢的书，简要说明书籍的核心情节；最后收尾给出友好的祝愿，控制总词数符合要求，语气贴合好友日常交流的自然感即可。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 格式与时态把控：以李明的第一人称视角写作，整体以一般现在时为主，符合英文书信的书写规范。
2. 逐一覆盖所有要求要点：
① 开篇表达收到来信的愉悦心情，回应对方的近况问候；
② 明确表达自己认同阅读的重要性，说明阅读可以拓宽视野、丰富知识、增添生活乐趣等价值，呼应来信的相关内容；
③ 点明自己最喜欢的书籍，比如《金银岛》，简要介绍它讲述的男孩出海冒险、找到满是宝藏的岛屿的核心情节；
④ 结尾可以邀约对方后续也读一读这本书，表达两人共同在阅读中成长的美好祝愿。
3. 可适当使用not only...but also...这类亮点句型提升作文质量，调整内容长度让总词数符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to receive your letter.
I agree that reading is very important to us. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. Some people say that money is the best thing in the world, but I think reading is the best. By reading you can get all kinds of knowledge. Also, reading books makes your life enjoyable.
One of my favourite books is Treasure Island. It tells us a story about a boy who goes out to sea and finds an island full of treasures. It is a really fantastic adventure. Have you ever read it? If not, you can read it later. Hope we could be better through reading.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信写作，阅读话题表达，定语从句运用
【点评】
本题是回信类应用文写作，来信给出的提问指向非常明确，整体难度不高。学生写作时只要不遗漏任何要点，保证语句通顺、人称时态统一就能拿到基础分，适当加入亮点连接词和特色句式就可以拿到更高的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先梳理解题思路：第一步先通读Anna的来信，找出所有需要回应的核心问题：你的近况、你对阅读的看法、你最喜欢的书是什么、这本书的主要内容，回信必须全部覆盖这些要点，不能缺漏。第二步搭建行文逻辑：开头先礼貌回应收到来信，呼应对方的问候；接着结合Anna提到的“老师强调阅读重要性”的内容，阐述自己对阅读的态度和阅读的好处；之后介绍自己最喜欢的书，简要说明书籍的核心情节；最后收尾给出友好的祝愿，控制总词数符合要求，语气贴合好友日常交流的自然感即可。
【解析】
写作可按以下规范步骤完成：
1. 格式与时态把控：以李明的第一人称视角写作，整体以一般现在时为主，符合英文书信的书写规范。
2. 逐一覆盖所有要求要点：
① 开篇表达收到来信的愉悦心情，回应对方的近况问候；
② 明确表达自己认同阅读的重要性，说明阅读可以拓宽视野、丰富知识、增添生活乐趣等价值，呼应来信的相关内容；
③ 点明自己最喜欢的书籍，比如《金银岛》，简要介绍它讲述的男孩出海冒险、找到满是宝藏的岛屿的核心情节；
④ 结尾可以邀约对方后续也读一读这本书，表达两人共同在阅读中成长的美好祝愿。
3. 可适当使用not only...but also...这类亮点句型提升作文质量，调整内容长度让总词数符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to receive your letter.
I agree that reading is very important to us. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. Some people say that money is the best thing in the world, but I think reading is the best. By reading you can get all kinds of knowledge. Also, reading books makes your life enjoyable.
One of my favourite books is Treasure Island. It tells us a story about a boy who goes out to sea and finds an island full of treasures. It is a really fantastic adventure. Have you ever read it? If not, you can read it later. Hope we could be better through reading.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英文书信写作，阅读话题表达，定语从句运用
【点评】
本题是回信类应用文写作，来信给出的提问指向非常明确，整体难度不高。学生写作时只要不遗漏任何要点，保证语句通顺、人称时态统一就能拿到基础分，适当加入亮点连接词和特色句式就可以拿到更高的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
