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毫无疑问,运动可以使我们收获快乐和健康,也可以培养我们的意志品质。那么在你平时的运动中,有没有那么一刻让你收获颇丰、受益良多? 假如你是李辉,你校正在举办以"A sports moment"为主题的演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿,参加此次活动。内容要点如下:
(1)What was the event?
(2)What happened in the moment?
(3)What can you learn from the moment?
注意:
(1)词数80~100;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(1)What was the event?
(2)What happened in the moment?
(3)What can you learn from the moment?
注意:
(1)词数80~100;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hui.
I am honoured to share with you a sports
moment that has a great impact on me.
The event was a long-distance race in
our school sports meeting. I was struggling
in the middle of the race, almost out of
breath and nearly gave up. But when I heard
my classmates' passionate cheers, I tried to
quicken my pace and paid no attention to
my pain. Although I fell far behind others,
I didn't lose heart. With great effort, I
crossed the finishing line even if I was the
last one.
From this moment, I have learned that
winning is not everything. The key to
success is perseverance and the support
from others. It makes me understand that in
the face of difficulties, we should fight on
and never give up.
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hui.
I am honoured to share with you a sports
moment that has a great impact on me.
The event was a long-distance race in
our school sports meeting. I was struggling
in the middle of the race, almost out of
breath and nearly gave up. But when I heard
my classmates' passionate cheers, I tried to
quicken my pace and paid no attention to
my pain. Although I fell far behind others,
I didn't lose heart. With great effort, I
crossed the finishing line even if I was the
last one.
From this moment, I have learned that
winning is not everything. The key to
success is perseverance and the support
from others. It makes me understand that in
the face of difficulties, we should fight on
and never give up.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以李辉的身份参加以“A sports moment”为主题的演讲活动，需涵盖三个核心要点：具体运动事件、事件发生的过程、从该时刻获得的感悟，词数要求80~100。解题思路：1. 开头问候并自我介绍，引出演讲主题；2. 叙述具体运动时刻（如学校运动会长跑），描述中途疲惫想放弃、受同学鼓励后坚持到终点的过程；3. 总结感悟，点明从该时刻学到的道理，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】按照演讲稿的规范格式，依次完成：开头问候并自我介绍，引出要分享的运动时刻；接着具体讲述事件（学校运动会长跑），描述中途的困境（疲惫、想放弃），以及同学加油后坚持到终点的过程；最后阐述感悟，点明“赢不是一切，坚持和他人支持是成功关键，面对困难不放弃”的道理，严格控制词数，保证语言通顺、要点完整。
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hui.
I am honoured to share with you a sports moment that has a great impact on me.
The event was a long-distance race in our school sports meeting. I was struggling in the middle of the race, almost out of breath and nearly gave up. But when I heard my classmates' passionate cheers, I tried to quicken my pace and paid no attention to my pain. Although I fell far behind others, I didn't lose heart. With great effort, I crossed the finishing line even if I was the last one.
From this moment, I have learned that winning is not everything. The key to success is perseverance and the support from others. It makes me understand that in the face of difficulties, we should fight on and never give up.
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、记叙文写作、主题表达
【点评】这篇演讲稿紧扣主题，要点完整，情感真挚，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，清晰传达了从运动时刻中获得的成长感悟，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照演讲稿的规范格式，依次完成：开头问候并自我介绍，引出要分享的运动时刻；接着具体讲述事件（学校运动会长跑），描述中途的困境（疲惫、想放弃），以及同学加油后坚持到终点的过程；最后阐述感悟，点明“赢不是一切，坚持和他人支持是成功关键，面对困难不放弃”的道理，严格控制词数，保证语言通顺、要点完整。
【答案】One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. I'm Li Hui.
I am honoured to share with you a sports moment that has a great impact on me.
The event was a long-distance race in our school sports meeting. I was struggling in the middle of the race, almost out of breath and nearly gave up. But when I heard my classmates' passionate cheers, I tried to quicken my pace and paid no attention to my pain. Although I fell far behind others, I didn't lose heart. With great effort, I crossed the finishing line even if I was the last one.
From this moment, I have learned that winning is not everything. The key to success is perseverance and the support from others. It makes me understand that in the face of difficulties, we should fight on and never give up.
【知识点】英语演讲稿写作、记叙文写作、主题表达
【点评】这篇演讲稿紧扣主题，要点完整，情感真挚，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，清晰传达了从运动时刻中获得的成长感悟，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
