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五、书面表达。
假如你是上文中提到的小星(Xiaoxing)。这是一个晴朗的星期天的上午,你和家人来到公园。你们看到很多人,有的在慢跑,有的在散步,有的在唱歌,有的在跳舞,有的孩子在一起玩耍,有的学生在骑自行车……看到这么热闹的景象,你想把所见所想拍成短视频。请你展开想象,根据情景写一篇视频脚本(video script)。
要求:1.70词左右;
2.包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
假如你是上文中提到的小星(Xiaoxing)。这是一个晴朗的星期天的上午,你和家人来到公园。你们看到很多人,有的在慢跑,有的在散步,有的在唱歌,有的在跳舞,有的孩子在一起玩耍,有的学生在骑自行车……看到这么热闹的景象,你想把所见所想拍成短视频。请你展开想象,根据情景写一篇视频脚本(video script)。
要求:1.70词左右;
2.包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
3.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范。
It's a sunny Sunday morning. I'm in the park with my
parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of
people.
Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine
and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and
laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily.
There are also children having a great time playing
together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some
students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy.
What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so
excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember
these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful
place on this sunny day.
parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of
people.
Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine
and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and
laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily.
There are also children having a great time playing
together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some
students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy.
What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so
excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember
these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful
place on this sunny day.
答案
It's a sunny Sunday morning. I'm in the park with my
parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of
people.
Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine
and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and
laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily.
There are also children having a great time playing
together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some
students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy.
What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so
excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember
these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful
place on this sunny day.
parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of
people.
Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine
and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and
laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily.
There are also children having a great time playing
together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some
students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy.
What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so
excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember
these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful
place on this sunny day.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以小星的身份，撰写70词左右的公园场景视频脚本，需包含题目给出的各类人群活动（慢跑、散步、唱歌跳舞、孩子玩耍、学生骑车），并体现想拍短视频的想法。写作思路：1. 开篇点明时间（晴朗周日上午）、地点（公园）、人物（自己和家人），引出热闹场景；2. 分述公园里不同人的活动，将题目给出的活动逐一融入，适当补充细节让内容连贯；3. 结尾表达想拍短视频记录美好时刻的心情，呼应视频脚本主题。
【解析】
按照上述思路，运用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作，组织语言如下：It's a sunny Sunday morning. I'm in the park with my parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of people. Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily. There are also children having a great time playing together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy. What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful place on this sunny day.
【答案】
It's a sunny Sunday morning. I'm in the park with my parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of people. Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily. There are also children having a great time playing together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy. What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful place on this sunny day.
【知识点】
英语情景书面表达、现在进行时的运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，以第一人称视角清晰描述了晴朗周日上午公园内的热闹场景，涵盖了所有给定的人群活动，适当补充了合理细节，语句通顺、语法正确，结构完整，结尾点明拍短视频的想法，符合视频脚本的写作要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确写作任务：以小星的身份，撰写70词左右的公园场景视频脚本，需包含题目给出的各类人群活动（慢跑、散步、唱歌跳舞、孩子玩耍、学生骑车），并体现想拍短视频的想法。写作思路：1. 开篇点明时间（晴朗周日上午）、地点（公园）、人物（自己和家人），引出热闹场景；2. 分述公园里不同人的活动，将题目给出的活动逐一融入，适当补充细节让内容连贯；3. 结尾表达想拍短视频记录美好时刻的心情，呼应视频脚本主题。
【解析】
按照上述思路，运用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作，组织语言如下：It's a sunny Sunday morning. I'm in the park with my parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of people. Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily. There are also children having a great time playing together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy. What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful place on this sunny day.
【答案】
It's a sunny Sunday morning. I'm in the park with my parents. Look! The sun is shining and the park is full of people. Some people are jogging, enjoying the warm sunshine and fresh air. Some are taking a walk, chatting and laughing. Some people are singing and dancing happily. There are also children having a great time playing together. They are running around or flying a kite. Some students are riding bikes. It's a good way to keep healthy. What a lively and beautiful small world! I'm so excited that I can't wait to make a short video to remember these wonderful moments. This park is really a wonderful place on this sunny day.
【知识点】
英语情景书面表达、现在进行时的运用
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，以第一人称视角清晰描述了晴朗周日上午公园内的热闹场景，涵盖了所有给定的人群活动，适当补充了合理细节，语句通顺、语法正确，结构完整，结尾点明拍短视频的想法，符合视频脚本的写作要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.7
