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六、书面表达。
假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展“我最喜爱的电影”征文活动。请你根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇: pretend 假装 monster 妖怪 animation 动画制作 nobody 小人物
My favourite film
假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展“我最喜爱的电影”征文活动。请你根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:1. 词数 90 左右;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
参考词汇: pretend 假装 monster 妖怪 animation 动画制作 nobody 小人物
My favourite film
答案
One possible version：
My favourite film
The film Nobody is my favourite film. It is a cartoon film. The main characters are four little monsters from Langlang Mountain.
The story is about them pretending to be Tang Sanzang and his team. They set off on a journey to the West. On the way, they face many dangers and fight against powerful monsters. But they always support each other. In the end, they bravely protect the villagers and win their respect.
I love this film for two reasons. First, I learn that even nobodies can be the heroes of their own lives. Second, the animation is beautiful with a special Chinese style, and the characters are very funny and lively.
This film is really meaningful. I will never forget it.
My favourite film
The film Nobody is my favourite film. It is a cartoon film. The main characters are four little monsters from Langlang Mountain.
The story is about them pretending to be Tang Sanzang and his team. They set off on a journey to the West. On the way, they face many dangers and fight against powerful monsters. But they always support each other. In the end, they bravely protect the villagers and win their respect.
I love this film for two reasons. First, I learn that even nobodies can be the heroes of their own lives. Second, the animation is beautiful with a special Chinese style, and the characters are very funny and lively.
This film is really meaningful. I will never forget it.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份，根据给定的电影表格信息完成“我最喜爱的电影”征文。解题思路：①开篇点明最喜欢的电影名称、类型及主要角色，对应表格前三项内容；②结合表格故事梗概，用参考词汇（pretend、monster等）讲述核心情节，适当补充细节使内容连贯；③呼应表格个人感想，说明喜欢该电影的原因，传递积极主题；④注意词数90左右，不出现真实人名、校名、地名，语言通顺。
【解析】按照“介绍电影—讲述故事—表达感想”的结构写作：第一段点明电影《Nobody》是自己最爱的动画电影，介绍主要角色；第二段讲述四个小妖怪假装唐僧师徒取经，途中遇困难、相互扶持，最终保护村民的故事；第三段说明喜欢的原因，一是小人物也能成为自己人生的主角，二是动画风格优美，最后收尾总结电影的意义，符合题目要求。
【答案】One possible version：
My favourite film
The film Nobody is my favourite film. It is a cartoon film. The main characters are four little monsters from Langlang Mountain.
The story is about them pretending to be Tang Sanzang and his team. They set off on a journey to the West. On the way, they face many dangers and fight against powerful monsters. But they always support each other. In the end, they bravely protect the villagers and win their respect.
I love this film for two reasons. First, I learn that even nobodies can be the heroes of their own lives. Second, the animation is beautiful with a special Chinese style, and the characters are very funny and lively.
This film is really meaningful. I will never forget it.
【知识点】英语书面表达、常用词汇运用、内容整合
【点评】该征文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖给定的电影信息，适当丰富了情节细节，语言准确流畅，主题积极向上，符合初中英语书面表达的规范。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照“介绍电影—讲述故事—表达感想”的结构写作：第一段点明电影《Nobody》是自己最爱的动画电影，介绍主要角色；第二段讲述四个小妖怪假装唐僧师徒取经，途中遇困难、相互扶持，最终保护村民的故事；第三段说明喜欢的原因，一是小人物也能成为自己人生的主角，二是动画风格优美，最后收尾总结电影的意义，符合题目要求。
【答案】One possible version：
My favourite film
The film Nobody is my favourite film. It is a cartoon film. The main characters are four little monsters from Langlang Mountain.
The story is about them pretending to be Tang Sanzang and his team. They set off on a journey to the West. On the way, they face many dangers and fight against powerful monsters. But they always support each other. In the end, they bravely protect the villagers and win their respect.
I love this film for two reasons. First, I learn that even nobodies can be the heroes of their own lives. Second, the animation is beautiful with a special Chinese style, and the characters are very funny and lively.
This film is really meaningful. I will never forget it.
【知识点】英语书面表达、常用词汇运用、内容整合
【点评】该征文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖给定的电影信息，适当丰富了情节细节，语言准确流畅，主题积极向上，符合初中英语书面表达的规范。
【难度系数】0.5
