四、提升题 书面表达。
假设你是李华,学校英语杂志社正在举办以“My Space Dream”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇短文投稿,分享你的太空梦想。
写作要点:
1. What is your space dream?
2. Why do you have this dream? (Give at least two reasons)
3. What will you do to make your dream come true?
要求:
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点,条理清晰,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数 80—120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My name is Li Hua.

My space dream is to build a space station on the moon one day.
I have this dream for two reasons. First, this space station can be a great place for scientists to do research and develop new technologies, and it will help us explore the moon and other planets. Second, I hope we can find new resources on the moon to solve Earth's energy problems.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will also read more books about space. I will never give up, and I believe my dream will come true one day.

【分析】首先审题，明确主题为“My Space Dream”，开头已给出“My name is Li Hua.”，需完成三个写作要点：1. 确定自己的太空梦想；2. 阐述至少两个拥有该梦想的原因；3. 说明实现梦想的具体行动。思考时先选定具体梦想（如建月球空间站），再构思合理原因（科研价值、解决地球能源问题），最后规划可行行动（努力学习、阅读太空相关书籍），同时注意行文连贯、词数80-120、不出现真实信息，确保覆盖所有要点。
【解析】根据写作要点，先点明太空梦想：My space dream is to build a space station on the moon one day. 再阐述两个原因：First, this space station can be a great place for scientists to do research and develop new technologies, and it will help us explore the moon and other planets. Second, I hope we can find new resources on the moon to solve Earth's energy problems. 最后说明实现梦想的行动：To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will also read more books about space. I will never give up, and I believe my dream will come true one day.
【答案】My space dream is to build a space station on the moon one day.
I have this dream for two reasons. First, this space station can be a great place for scientists to do research and develop new technologies, and it will help us explore the moon and other planets. Second, I hope we can find new resources on the moon to solve Earth's energy problems.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard. I will also read more books about space. I will never give up, and I believe my dream will come true one day.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点覆盖、语句连贯
【点评】本题为英语书面表达提升题，围绕太空梦想主题，明确要求三个写作要点，既考查学生的英语语言组织能力，又引导学生思考个人理想与科学探索的联系，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】0.5