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八、书面表达(满分25分)
随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes”。请根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
要求：
1. 内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90左右，文章的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Changes
In the past few years，great changes have taken place around us.
随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes”。请根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。
要求：
1. 内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数90左右，文章的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Changes
In the past few years，great changes have taken place around us.
答案
One possible version:
Changes
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Before, I used to be shy and not to talk much, but now I'm more outgoing and confident. I've also started to like studying more and work harder towards my goals. The changes in my hometown are very noticeable. Before, we mainly used buses, but now we have high-speed railways that quickly and comfortably connect us to nearby cities. The improvements across the country are deep. Before, we had problems with dirty water and empty hills, but now we have beautiful green scenery and clean water. Finally, we feel that the environment has become better and people have become happier.
In a word, we look forward to a better future.
Changes
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Before, I used to be shy and not to talk much, but now I'm more outgoing and confident. I've also started to like studying more and work harder towards my goals. The changes in my hometown are very noticeable. Before, we mainly used buses, but now we have high-speed railways that quickly and comfortably connect us to nearby cities. The improvements across the country are deep. Before, we had problems with dirty water and empty hills, but now we have beautiful green scenery and clean water. Finally, we feel that the environment has become better and people have become happier.
In a word, we look forward to a better future.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“Changes”，要求结合给定思维导图的三个核心方向（学习方式、出行方式、生活环境）完成写作。解题思路：1. 承接已给出的开头句，引出具体变化；2. 围绕思维导图要点，分别从学习、出行、环境等方面列举具体变化，让内容充实；3. 结尾总结并表达对未来的期待，确保语言通顺、词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 直接使用题目给定的标题和开头句；2. 主体部分：① 学习变化：描述自身学习方式的改变，比如从被动学习变为主动多阅读、参与小组合作；② 出行变化：讲述家乡出行方式的变化，比如从乘坐普通车辆变为高铁、自驾，更便捷；③ 环境变化：提及生活环境的改善，比如从环境一般变为绿水青山；3. 结尾用总结句呼应主题，控制词数在90左右，语言符合初中英语水平，避免复杂句式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Before, I used to be shy and not to talk much, but now I'm more outgoing and confident. I've also started to like studying more and work harder towards my goals. The changes in my hometown are very noticeable. Before, we mainly used buses, but now we have high-speed railways that quickly and comfortably connect us to nearby cities. The improvements across the country are deep. Before, we had problems with dirty water and empty hills, but now we have beautiful green scenery and clean water. Finally, we feel that the environment has become better and people have become happier.
In a word, we look forward to a better future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、思维导图写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图设置写作要点，降低了话题作文的难度，贴近学生生活实际，考查学生围绕主题组织语言、表达具体事例的能力，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题书面表达，主题是“Changes”，要求结合给定思维导图的三个核心方向（学习方式、出行方式、生活环境）完成写作。解题思路：1. 承接已给出的开头句，引出具体变化；2. 围绕思维导图要点，分别从学习、出行、环境等方面列举具体变化，让内容充实；3. 结尾总结并表达对未来的期待，确保语言通顺、词数符合要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 直接使用题目给定的标题和开头句；2. 主体部分：① 学习变化：描述自身学习方式的改变，比如从被动学习变为主动多阅读、参与小组合作；② 出行变化：讲述家乡出行方式的变化，比如从乘坐普通车辆变为高铁、自驾，更便捷；③ 环境变化：提及生活环境的改善，比如从环境一般变为绿水青山；3. 结尾用总结句呼应主题，控制词数在90左右，语言符合初中英语水平，避免复杂句式。
【答案】
One possible version:
Changes
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us.
Before, I used to be shy and not to talk much, but now I'm more outgoing and confident. I've also started to like studying more and work harder towards my goals. The changes in my hometown are very noticeable. Before, we mainly used buses, but now we have high-speed railways that quickly and comfortably connect us to nearby cities. The improvements across the country are deep. Before, we had problems with dirty water and empty hills, but now we have beautiful green scenery and clean water. Finally, we feel that the environment has become better and people have become happier.
In a word, we look forward to a better future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、思维导图写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图设置写作要点，降低了话题作文的难度，贴近学生生活实际，考查学生围绕主题组织语言、表达具体事例的能力，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
