2026年阳光学业评价九年级英语下册沪教版第128页答案
(二)
6月6日是全国爱眼日,爱护眼睛很重要。请你写一篇关于保护眼睛的演讲稿,在学校英语俱乐部上发言。
内容包括:1. 爱护眼睛的重要性;
2. 保护视力的方法:保持均衡饮食、勤做眼保健操、控制屏幕使用时间……
写作要求:演讲稿必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥。80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is "Protecting Our Eyes".

That's all. Thanks for your listening!

答案

(二)
Good morning, everyone! My topic today is "Protecting Our Eyes". Nowadays
more and more students are nearsighted. As we all know, the eyes are the windows to
the soul. If there is a problem with the eyes, there will be a lot of trouble in life and
study. So we should try our best to protect our eyes. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should keep a balanced diet. Having enough vegetables and eggs can help
protect our eyesight. Second, we should do eye exercises frequently. Third, it's
necessary to control screen time. Take a rest for ten minutes after we have watched
the screens for forty minutes. Finally, we also need to develop good living habits. In
a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them
healthy.
That's all. Thanks for your listening!

解析

【分析】本题为英语演讲稿写作任务,要求围绕“保护眼睛”主题完成发言,需涵盖爱护眼睛的重要性及保护视力的方法,词数80左右,开头结尾已给出。解题思路:1. 承接给定开头,先说明爱护眼睛的重要性(如眼睛是心灵的窗户,影响学习与生活);2. 列举具体保护方法(均衡饮食、勤做眼保健操、控制屏幕使用时间等);3. 结尾呼应主题,采用演讲稿的口语化表达,确保所有要点齐全,词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 承接开头,点明现状(如今越来越多学生近视),阐述眼睛的重要性(眼睛是心灵的窗户,视力问题会给学习生活带来诸多不便);2. 分点提出保护方法:①保持均衡饮食,多摄入蔬菜、鸡蛋等护眼食物;②坚持勤做眼保健操;③控制屏幕使用时间,每看屏幕40分钟休息10分钟;3. 总结呼吁大家重视护眼,语言简洁通顺,符合演讲稿的风格,控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】Good morning, everyone! My topic today is "Protecting Our Eyes". Nowadays more and more students are nearsighted. As we all know, the eyes are the windows to the soul. If there is a problem with the eyes, there will be a lot of trouble in life and study. So we should try our best to protect our eyes. Here are some suggestions. First, we should keep a balanced diet. Having enough vegetables and eggs can help protect our eyesight. Second, we should do eye exercises frequently. Third, it's necessary to control screen time. Take a rest for ten minutes after we have watched the screens for forty minutes. Finally, we also need to develop good living habits. In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy. That's all. Thanks for your listening!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点式英语表达
【点评】本题结合爱眼日主题考查英语应用文写作,要求学生掌握演讲稿的结构,覆盖所有给定要点,语言需通顺自然,既考查英语写作能力,又传递护眼知识,是一道贴合生活的实用写作题。
【难度系数】0.5
(三)
快要毕业了,你们的校刊开设了一个栏目,记录毕业班同学的在校点滴。你以“The Teacher I Will Never Forget”为题写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 介绍老师的外貌、性格和爱好;
2. 说明让你难忘之处;
3. 表示感谢。
写作要求:不少于80词。短文的标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Teacher I Will Never Forget
How time flies! It has been 3 years since I came to this school. I have happy
memories of the classmates and teachers. The teacher I will never forget is...

答案

(三)
The Teacher I Will Never Forget
How time flies! It has been 3 years since I came to this school. I have happy
memories of the classmates and teachers. The teacher I will never forget is Mr Zhang,
my English teacher. He is a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often
plays football and basketball with us. He is humorous and always makes his classes
lively and interesting. He is kind but he is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend
that we know what we don't know. He has helped me a lot with my English. He has
shown me many ways to memorize new words. My English has been greatly improved
with his help. I want to say thanks to him. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the
future.

解析

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,要求以《The Teacher I Will Never Forget》为题投稿,需围绕三个核心要点展开:介绍老师的外貌、性格与爱好,说明难忘之处,表达感谢,且字数不少于80词,开头已给出。解题思路为:先确定写作对象(选印象深刻的老师,如英语老师),再按要求的三个要点组织内容,确保语句连贯、时态正确,符合校刊投稿的语境。
【解析】
1. 确定写作对象:选择英语老师Mr Zhang,贴合校园生活主题;
2. 围绕要点展开内容:①外貌(高个子、戴厚眼镜)、性格(幽默、课堂生动、善良但严格)、爱好(喜欢运动,常和学生踢足球、打篮球);②难忘之处:帮助提升英语,教授记单词的方法,英语成绩大幅进步;③表达感谢与祝福;
3. 衔接语句,确保流畅自然,满足字数要求,使用合适的时态(一般现在时、现在完成时)。
【答案】
The Teacher I Will Never Forget
How time flies! It has been 3 years since I came to this school. I have happy memories of the classmates and teachers. The teacher I will never forget is Mr Zhang, my English teacher. He is a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He is humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He is kind but he is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don't know. He has helped me a lot with my English. He has shown me many ways to memorize new words. My English has been greatly improved with his help. I want to say thanks to him. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、校园主题英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求,覆盖所有内容要点,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,时态运用准确,符合校刊投稿的规范,是一篇优秀的英语习作。
【难度系数】
0.3
(四)
你校英文报下期征稿的主题为“零废弃”。请根据以下征稿启事写一篇短文投稿。
Articles Wanted: Zero Waste Makes a Difference
● Zero waste: Making less rubbish and using everything around us in a smart way.
● Your article should include:
1. What is "zero waste"?
2. Why is it necessary?
3. What can we do?
Send your article to sunshineschoolweekly@123.com before July 3, 2026.
注意:1. 短文需包含征稿启事要求的三点内容,并可适当拓展信息;
2. 写作词数80左右。

答案

(四)
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
As life becomes easier, people often throw things away too quickly. Zero waste
means using less and being smart about how we use resources. It's important because
it helps protect the Earth and sets a good example for future generations.
Here are some ways to start. At home, instead of throwing broken items away,
we can learn to repair them—for example, mending clothes or fixing toys. At school,
students can organize events to exchange old books, toys, or clothes. Online, sharing
ideas about zero waste can also inspire others to help the planet.
Zero waste isn't just recycling; it's a way of life that shows how much we care
about our world. If we all make small changes to our daily lives, we can truly make a
difference.

解析

【分析】
本次任务是为英文报“零废弃”主题投稿,需覆盖三个核心要求:解释“零废弃”的定义、说明其必要性、列举具体可行的做法。解题思路:首先结合题目给出的定义(少制造垃圾、合理利用资源)开篇明确零废弃的含义;接着从环保、后代发展角度阐述其必要性;再选取家庭、学校、线上等贴近生活的场景,列举修理物品、交换旧物等具体做法;最后结尾升华,呼应主题,控制词数在80左右,语言符合征稿的正式易懂风格。
【解析】
写作步骤:1. 开篇:联系生活中人们乱扔物品的现象,引出零废弃的定义;2. 必要性:说明零废弃能保护地球、为后代树立榜样;3. 具体做法:分家庭(修理损坏物品)、学校(交换旧书/玩具)、线上(分享理念)三个场景,让内容具体;4. 结尾:总结零废弃是一种生活方式,强调小改变的作用,呼应主题。全程注意用词准确、句子通顺,词数达标。
【答案】
Zero Waste Makes a Difference
As life becomes easier, people often throw things away too quickly. Zero waste means using less and being smart about how we use resources. It's important because it helps protect the Earth and sets a good example for future generations.
Here are some ways to start. At home, instead of throwing broken items away, we can learn to repair them—for example, mending clothes or fixing toys. At school, students can organize events to exchange old books, toys, or clothes. Online, sharing ideas about zero waste can also inspire others to help the planet.
Zero waste isn't just recycling; it's a way of life that shows how much we care about our world. If we all make small changes to our daily lives, we can truly make a difference.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环保主题表达、要点整合写作
【点评】
范文严格遵循征稿要求,完整覆盖所有写作要点,结构清晰(定义-必要性-做法-总结),语言简洁流畅,符合80词左右的要求,主题突出,很好传递了“零废弃”的理念,是优秀的投稿范例。
【难度系数】
0.6