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校报正在征集“名人故事”稿件,请你选择一位中国名人,写一篇短文,介绍其生平事迹和贡献。语句通顺,条理清晰,不少于5句话。
参考词汇:astronaut 宇航员,space 太空
参考句型:1. Who was he/she?
2. When was he/she born?
3. Where was he/she born?
4. What did he/she do?
5. Why was he/she famous?
校报正在征集“名人故事”稿件,请你选择一位中国名人,写一篇短文,介绍其生平事迹和贡献。语句通顺,条理清晰,不少于5句话。
参考词汇:astronaut 宇航员,space 太空
参考句型:1. Who was he/she?
2. When was he/she born?
3. Where was he/she born?
4. What did he/she do?
5. Why was he/she famous?
Yang Liwei is very famous in China. He was born in 1965 in Liaoning.
When he was young, he loved reading books. He worked hard.
And he wanted to be an astronaut. Then his dream came true.
He flew to space in 2003. He made a video in space.
He was the first Chinese who flew to space.
答案
One possible version:
Yang Liwei is very famous in China. He was born in 1965 in Liaoning. When he was young, he loved reading books. He worked hard. And he wanted to be an astronaut. Then his dream came true. He flew to space in 2003. He made a video in space. He was the first Chinese who flew to space.
Yang Liwei is very famous in China. He was born in 1965 in Liaoning. When he was young, he loved reading books. He worked hard. And he wanted to be an astronaut. Then his dream came true. He flew to space in 2003. He made a video in space. He was the first Chinese who flew to space.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇介绍中国名人的短文,需结合给定参考词汇(宇航员、太空)和句型,不少于5句话。解题思路:1. 选取贴合参考词汇的中国名人(如杨利伟);2. 按参考句型的5个核心问题(身份、出生信息、成长经历、成就、出名原因)组织内容;3. 补充细节使内容充实,确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】
写作时,先确定人物为杨利伟(中国首位进入太空的宇航员,贴合参考词汇);依次介绍:①身份(杨利伟在中国很有名);②出生信息(1965年生于辽宁);③成长经历(小时候爱读书、努力,梦想成为宇航员);④成就(2003年飞向太空,在太空拍视频);⑤出名原因(是中国首位进入太空的人);最后串联成通顺短文,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version: Yang Liwei is very famous in China. He was born in 1965 in Liaoning. When he was young, he loved reading books. He worked hard. And he wanted to be an astronaut. Then his dream came true. He flew to space in 2003. He made a video in space. He was the first Chinese who flew to space.
【知识点】
英语人物短文写作、中国航天名人事迹
【点评】
本题为开放性写作题,既考查学生运用英语介绍人物的写作能力,又融入中国航天正能量内容,契合校报“名人故事”的征集主题,引导学生关注中国名人贡献。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇介绍中国名人的短文,需结合给定参考词汇(宇航员、太空)和句型,不少于5句话。解题思路:1. 选取贴合参考词汇的中国名人(如杨利伟);2. 按参考句型的5个核心问题(身份、出生信息、成长经历、成就、出名原因)组织内容;3. 补充细节使内容充实,确保语句通顺、符合要求。
【解析】
写作时,先确定人物为杨利伟(中国首位进入太空的宇航员,贴合参考词汇);依次介绍:①身份(杨利伟在中国很有名);②出生信息(1965年生于辽宁);③成长经历(小时候爱读书、努力,梦想成为宇航员);④成就(2003年飞向太空,在太空拍视频);⑤出名原因(是中国首位进入太空的人);最后串联成通顺短文,满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version: Yang Liwei is very famous in China. He was born in 1965 in Liaoning. When he was young, he loved reading books. He worked hard. And he wanted to be an astronaut. Then his dream came true. He flew to space in 2003. He made a video in space. He was the first Chinese who flew to space.
【知识点】
英语人物短文写作、中国航天名人事迹
【点评】
本题为开放性写作题,既考查学生运用英语介绍人物的写作能力,又融入中国航天正能量内容,契合校报“名人故事”的征集主题,引导学生关注中国名人贡献。
【难度系数】
0.6
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