Ⅲ.Think and write.
Plato says "Happiness also springs from doing good and helping others." Please share two ways to grow happiness in your daily life. About 50 words

◇ How can you grow happiness?
◇ Why do you choose these ways?

Plato says "Happiness also springs from doing good and helping others." Please share two ways to grow happiness in your daily life. About 50 words
◇ How can you grow happiness?
◇ Why do you choose these ways?
答案
Ⅲ. One possible version:
In my opinion, there are two ways to grow happiness. Firstly, I can grow
happiness by helping my classmates to carry heavy things because they won't feel too
tired if we work together.
Secondly, I can grow happiness by sweeping the floor at home because my parents
will feel happy when they see a clean house.
In my opinion, there are two ways to grow happiness. Firstly, I can grow
happiness by helping my classmates to carry heavy things because they won't feel too
tired if we work together.
Secondly, I can grow happiness by sweeping the floor at home because my parents
will feel happy when they see a clean house.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语开放性小写作题,解题时首先要紧扣题干核心要求:围绕“行善、助人收获幸福感”的主题,给出2种日常生活中可实现的具体行为,同时对应说明选择该方式的原因,整体词数控制在50词左右。首先开篇可以简单总起引出主题,再分别列举两个贴近学生日常的场景,比如校园里帮同学、家里帮父母的小事,补充对应原因即可,不需要使用复杂句式,保证表意通顺、贴合主题即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇总述:先点明自己认为有两种收获幸福感的方式,开门见山呼应题干要求。
2. 第一个方式选取校园日常场景:写明通过帮同学搬重物获得幸福感,补充原因是共同分担后同学不会太累,符合助人收获愉悦的逻辑。
3. 第二个方式选取家庭日常场景:写明通过在家主动扫地获得幸福感,补充原因是父母看到整洁的家会心情愉悦,自己也能从中收获幸福,整体内容贴合主题,词数符合要求,逻辑清晰表意通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
In my opinion, there are two ways to grow happiness. Firstly, I can grow happiness by helping my classmates to carry heavy things because they won't feel too tired if we work together.
Secondly, I can grow happiness by sweeping the floor at home because my parents will feel happy when they see a clean house.
【知识点】
1. 英语小作文写作
2. 话题表达运用
3. 日常场景描述
【点评】
本题属于低门槛的生活化开放写作,没有严苛的标准答案限制,只要给出的两种行为符合“行善助人”的导向、搭配对应合理的原因即可得分,既考察学生的基础英语表意能力,也引导学生在生活中践行助人的理念,难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一道英语开放性小写作题,解题时首先要紧扣题干核心要求:围绕“行善、助人收获幸福感”的主题,给出2种日常生活中可实现的具体行为,同时对应说明选择该方式的原因,整体词数控制在50词左右。首先开篇可以简单总起引出主题,再分别列举两个贴近学生日常的场景,比如校园里帮同学、家里帮父母的小事,补充对应原因即可,不需要使用复杂句式,保证表意通顺、贴合主题即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇总述:先点明自己认为有两种收获幸福感的方式,开门见山呼应题干要求。
2. 第一个方式选取校园日常场景:写明通过帮同学搬重物获得幸福感,补充原因是共同分担后同学不会太累,符合助人收获愉悦的逻辑。
3. 第二个方式选取家庭日常场景:写明通过在家主动扫地获得幸福感,补充原因是父母看到整洁的家会心情愉悦,自己也能从中收获幸福,整体内容贴合主题,词数符合要求,逻辑清晰表意通顺。
【答案】
One possible version:
In my opinion, there are two ways to grow happiness. Firstly, I can grow happiness by helping my classmates to carry heavy things because they won't feel too tired if we work together.
Secondly, I can grow happiness by sweeping the floor at home because my parents will feel happy when they see a clean house.
【知识点】
1. 英语小作文写作
2. 话题表达运用
3. 日常场景描述
【点评】
本题属于低门槛的生活化开放写作,没有严苛的标准答案限制,只要给出的两种行为符合“行善助人”的导向、搭配对应合理的原因即可得分,既考察学生的基础英语表意能力,也引导学生在生活中践行助人的理念,难度较低。
【难度系数】
0.8
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