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五、书面表达
保持善良，传递爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以“The Spread of Love”为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟。
要求：1. 根据提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于80。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
保持善良，传递爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以“The Spread of Love”为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟。
要求：1. 根据提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于80。
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
The Spread of Love
Last winter, I saw an old grandma carrying a heavy bag on my way to school. She looked tired and could hardly walk. I ran over to help her carry the bag to her home. She thanked me again and again and gave me a warm smile. A few days later, I forgot my umbrella on a rainy afternoon. When I was waiting for the rain to stop, a classmate of mine shared her umbrella with me and walked me home.
These small things make me realize that love is like a chain. If we give love to others, it will spread and come back to us. We should always be ready to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
Last winter, I saw an old grandma carrying a heavy bag on my way to school. She looked tired and could hardly walk. I ran over to help her carry the bag to her home. She thanked me again and again and gave me a warm smile. A few days later, I forgot my umbrella on a rainy afternoon. When I was waiting for the rain to stop, a classmate of mine shared her umbrella with me and walked me home.
These small things make me realize that love is like a chain. If we give love to others, it will spread and come back to us. We should always be ready to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“传递爱心”，要求结合自身经历讲述帮助他人或受助的经历并谈感悟。解题思路：1. 紧扣主题选取亲身经历的日常小事（如帮助老人、同学互助等）；2. 搭建“事件叙述+感悟升华”的结构，先清晰交代事件的时间、地点、经过，再提炼核心感悟；3. 严格遵守词数要求，不使用真实姓名、校名，保证语言流畅规范。
【解析】
按照题目要求完成书面表达，以“传递爱心”为核心，通过两个具体事例体现爱心的传递，结构清晰、语言符合初中英语表达规范，具体内容如下：
The Spread of Love
Last winter, I saw an old grandma carrying a heavy bag on my way to school. She looked tired and could hardly walk. I ran over to help her carry the bag to her home. She thanked me again and again and gave me a warm smile. A few days later, I forgot my umbrella on a rainy afternoon. When I was waiting for the rain to stop, a classmate of mine shared her umbrella with me and walked me home.
These small things make me realize that love is like a chain. If we give love to others, it will spread and come back to us. We should always be ready to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
【答案】
The Spread of Love
Last winter, I saw an old grandma carrying a heavy bag on my way to school. She looked tired and could hardly walk. I ran over to help her carry the bag to her home. She thanked me again and again and gave me a warm smile. A few days later, I forgot my umbrella on a rainy afternoon. When I was waiting for the rain to stop, a classmate of mine shared her umbrella with me and walked me home.
These small things make me realize that love is like a chain. If we give love to others, it will spread and come back to us. We should always be ready to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题感悟表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣“传递爱心”主题，选取真实感强的日常小事展开叙述，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，结尾感悟升华主旨，符合题目各项要求，传递了积极正向的价值观。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“传递爱心”，要求结合自身经历讲述帮助他人或受助的经历并谈感悟。解题思路：1. 紧扣主题选取亲身经历的日常小事（如帮助老人、同学互助等）；2. 搭建“事件叙述+感悟升华”的结构，先清晰交代事件的时间、地点、经过，再提炼核心感悟；3. 严格遵守词数要求，不使用真实姓名、校名，保证语言流畅规范。
【解析】
按照题目要求完成书面表达，以“传递爱心”为核心，通过两个具体事例体现爱心的传递，结构清晰、语言符合初中英语表达规范，具体内容如下：
The Spread of Love
Last winter, I saw an old grandma carrying a heavy bag on my way to school. She looked tired and could hardly walk. I ran over to help her carry the bag to her home. She thanked me again and again and gave me a warm smile. A few days later, I forgot my umbrella on a rainy afternoon. When I was waiting for the rain to stop, a classmate of mine shared her umbrella with me and walked me home.
These small things make me realize that love is like a chain. If we give love to others, it will spread and come back to us. We should always be ready to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
【答案】
The Spread of Love
Last winter, I saw an old grandma carrying a heavy bag on my way to school. She looked tired and could hardly walk. I ran over to help her carry the bag to her home. She thanked me again and again and gave me a warm smile. A few days later, I forgot my umbrella on a rainy afternoon. When I was waiting for the rain to stop, a classmate of mine shared her umbrella with me and walked me home.
These small things make me realize that love is like a chain. If we give love to others, it will spread and come back to us. We should always be ready to help others, because helping others is helping ourselves.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题感悟表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣“传递爱心”主题，选取真实感强的日常小事展开叙述，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，结尾感悟升华主旨，符合题目各项要求，传递了积极正向的价值观。
【难度系数】
0.5
