②典例赏析
学校英语社团发起“Communication Box”活动，每位同学需要在盒子里抽取一张关于“沟通”的话题卡片，根据卡片内容完成写作。假设你抽到以下卡片：
“Last month, you had a small fight with your best friend Amy, because she forgot to give back your favourite book. Write a note to her, saying sorry and explaining why communication is important in friendship.”
写作要点：1. 说明吵架的原因；2. 表达歉意并解释沟通的重要性；3. 提出和解建议。
写作要求：1. 内容须涵盖所有要点提示；2. 词数80—100，可适当添加细节（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Amy,
I’m sorry about the fight we had last month.



审题指导
1. 体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一、二人称
写作框架

优秀范文：

I got angry just because you forgot to return my favourite book. I didn't try to understand you then, which made both of us sad for quite a long time.
Now I truly realize that communication is the key to keeping a healthy friendship. When we have different ideas or misunderstandings, we should talk to each other instead of arguing. Only by communicating openly can we understand each other better.
I hope you can accept my apology. Let's have a good talk after class today. I'm looking forward to being your true best friend again.

【分析】这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求写一封道歉信，需完成三个核心要点：一是说明与Amy吵架的原因（她忘记归还自己最爱的书）；二是表达歉意并解释沟通在友谊中的重要性；三是提出具体的和解建议。写作时需注意时态（用一般过去时描述吵架事件，一般现在时阐述观点），人称以第一、二人称为主，词数控制在80-100，开头已给出，需衔接自然、逻辑连贯。
【解析】1. 承接开头说明吵架原因：因Amy忘记归还自己最爱的书，当时未尝试理解对方，导致双方难过许久；2. 表达歉意并点明沟通重要性：意识到沟通是维持健康友谊的关键，遇到分歧或误解时应交流而非争吵，只有开放沟通才能更好理解彼此；3. 提出和解建议：希望Amy接受道歉，课后一起聊聊，期待重归友谊。
【答案】I got angry just because you forgot to return my favourite book. I didn't try to understand you then, which made both of us sad for quite a long time.
Now I truly realize that communication is the key to keeping a healthy friendship. When we have different ideas or misunderstandings, we should talk to each other instead of arguing. Only by communicating openly can we understand each other better.
I hope you can accept my apology. Let's have a good talk after class today. I'm looking forward to being your true best friend again.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语话题写作
【点评】范文紧扣写作要求，覆盖所有要点，时态运用准确，逻辑清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，完美完成了道歉、解释沟通重要性及提出和解建议的任务。
【难度系数】0.6