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第三节 书面表达（共15分）
你是李华，最近收到了英国笔友Mike的来信。Mike在信中介绍了他的课后活动，并表示想了解你的课后活动。请结合以下要点提示，给Mike写一封回信，介绍你的课后活动。
1. What do you usually do after school?
2. What’s your favourite after-school activity? Why?
3. What do you think of your after-school activities?
注意：1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 60词左右（电子邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
你是李华，最近收到了英国笔友Mike的来信。Mike在信中介绍了他的课后活动，并表示想了解你的课后活动。请结合以下要点提示，给Mike写一封回信，介绍你的课后活动。
1. What do you usually do after school?
2. What’s your favourite after-school activity? Why?
3. What do you think of your after-school activities?
注意：1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 60词左右（电子邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about my after-school life, so let me share it with you.
On weekdays, I usually finish my homework first, and then I have time for different activities. I often play basketball with my friends because it’s exciting and helps me stay healthy. Besides sports, I also enjoy reading books and drawing. They make me feel relaxed.
My favourite activity is playing basketball. I love the teamwork and the fun we have together. It makes me happy and energetic.
I think my after-school life is balanced—I study, exercise, and relax. I’d love to hear more about your activities!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about my after-school life, so let me share it with you.
On weekdays, I usually finish my homework first, and then I have time for different activities. I often play basketball with my friends because it’s exciting and helps me stay healthy. Besides sports, I also enjoy reading books and drawing. They make me feel relaxed.
My favourite activity is playing basketball. I love the teamwork and the fun we have together. It makes me happy and energetic.
I think my after-school life is balanced—I study, exercise, and relax. I’d love to hear more about your activities!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，需按要求给英国笔友Mike回信介绍课后活动。解题思路：① 承接开头句引出介绍课后活动的内容；② 依次回应三个核心要点：平时课后的常规活动、最喜欢的活动及原因、对课后活动的看法；③ 补充想了解Mike的活动，符合书信交际语气，同时控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作时需注意：1. 书信格式正确，中间部分紧扣三个要点展开；2. 语言符合中学生身份，自然流畅，适当拓展细节；3. 词数控制在60词左右（开头结尾不计入）。具体写作步骤：① 承接开头，说明要分享课后生活；② 介绍平时课后先完成作业，再参与打篮球、阅读、画画等活动；③ 点明最喜欢打篮球，原因是能感受团队合作、带来快乐与活力；④ 表达课后生活平衡，兼顾学习、锻炼与放松；⑤ 补充想了解Mike的活动，呼应主题。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about my after-school life, so let me share it with you.
On weekdays, I usually finish my homework first, and then I have time for different activities. I often play basketball with my friends because it’s exciting and helps me stay healthy. Besides sports, I also enjoy reading books and drawing. They make me feel relaxed.
My favourite activity is playing basketball. I love the teamwork and the fun we have together. It makes me happy and energetic.
I think my after-school life is balanced—I study, exercise, and relax. I’d love to hear more about your activities!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语要点式写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求围绕指定要点展开内容，语言通顺，符合交际场景，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，能有效考察学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书信写作题，需按要求给英国笔友Mike回信介绍课后活动。解题思路：① 承接开头句引出介绍课后活动的内容；② 依次回应三个核心要点：平时课后的常规活动、最喜欢的活动及原因、对课后活动的看法；③ 补充想了解Mike的活动，符合书信交际语气，同时控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作时需注意：1. 书信格式正确，中间部分紧扣三个要点展开；2. 语言符合中学生身份，自然流畅，适当拓展细节；3. 词数控制在60词左右（开头结尾不计入）。具体写作步骤：① 承接开头，说明要分享课后生活；② 介绍平时课后先完成作业，再参与打篮球、阅读、画画等活动；③ 点明最喜欢打篮球，原因是能感受团队合作、带来快乐与活力；④ 表达课后生活平衡，兼顾学习、锻炼与放松；⑤ 补充想了解Mike的活动，呼应主题。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about my after-school life, so let me share it with you.
On weekdays, I usually finish my homework first, and then I have time for different activities. I often play basketball with my friends because it’s exciting and helps me stay healthy. Besides sports, I also enjoy reading books and drawing. They make me feel relaxed.
My favourite activity is playing basketball. I love the teamwork and the fun we have together. It makes me happy and energetic.
I think my after-school life is balanced—I study, exercise, and relax. I’d love to hear more about your activities!
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、英语要点式写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求围绕指定要点展开内容，语言通顺，符合交际场景，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，能有效考察学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
