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伟人之所以成为伟人，是因为他们创造了时代、影响了世界。那么是什么让他们成为伟人呢？请以“What Makes a Person Great”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈自己的看法。
What Makes a Person Great
★★★书面表达
伟人之所以成为伟人，是因为他们创造了时代、影响了世界。那么是什么让他们成为伟人呢？请以“What Makes a Person Great”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈自己的看法。
What Makes a Person Great
答案
What Makes a Person Great
In my opinion, great people share several important qualities. First of all, they have a strong mind and never give up when facing difficulties. Second, they are creative enough to make changes that push the world forward. Most importantly, they always choose to work for the public and make contributions to our society, not just for their own benefits. That is what makes a person truly great.
In my opinion, great people share several important qualities. First of all, they have a strong mind and never give up when facing difficulties. Second, they are creative enough to make changes that push the world forward. Most importantly, they always choose to work for the public and make contributions to our society, not just for their own benefits. That is what makes a person truly great.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，要求以“What Makes a Person Great”为题写80词左右的短文，阐述伟人成为伟人的原因。解题思路：首先确定采用总分总的结构，开头点明伟人具备共同的重要品质；接着分三点具体说明核心品质——坚强的意志（遇困难不放弃）、创造力（推动世界发展）、奉献社会（为公众而非私利）；最后总结呼应主题，同时注意控制词数，语言简洁通顺，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】按照总分总结构，依次组织内容：开头提出观点，中间分点阐述品质，结尾总结。具体内容如下：In my opinion, great people share several important qualities. First of all, they have a strong mind and never give up when facing difficulties. Second, they are creative enough to make changes that push the world forward. Most importantly, they always choose to work for the public and make contributions to our society, not just for their own benefits. That is what makes a person truly great.
【答案】In my opinion, great people share several important qualities. First of all, they have a strong mind and never give up when facing difficulties. Second, they are creative enough to make changes that push the world forward. Most importantly, they always choose to work for the public and make contributions to our society, not just for their own benefits. That is what makes a person truly great.
【知识点】英语书面表达、观点类短文写作、议论文结构
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，观点积极明确，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，是一篇规范的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照总分总结构，依次组织内容：开头提出观点，中间分点阐述品质，结尾总结。具体内容如下：In my opinion, great people share several important qualities. First of all, they have a strong mind and never give up when facing difficulties. Second, they are creative enough to make changes that push the world forward. Most importantly, they always choose to work for the public and make contributions to our society, not just for their own benefits. That is what makes a person truly great.
【答案】In my opinion, great people share several important qualities. First of all, they have a strong mind and never give up when facing difficulties. Second, they are creative enough to make changes that push the world forward. Most importantly, they always choose to work for the public and make contributions to our society, not just for their own benefits. That is what makes a person truly great.
【知识点】英语书面表达、观点类短文写作、议论文结构
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，观点积极明确，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，是一篇规范的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.6
