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五、V. 书面表达。
谚语有云：“健康胜于财富。”假如你叫李华，为了倡导健康饮食，你的学校正在举办题为“如何健康饮食”的英文征文比赛。请你围绕下面的写作要点，写一篇70词左右的短文参加比赛。
内容包括以下方面：
1. 你的饮食习惯（一日三餐，最喜欢的食物）；
2. 提出健康饮食的建议（至少2点）；
3. 呼吁大家养成健康的饮食习惯。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you ______ .
谚语有云：“健康胜于财富。”假如你叫李华，为了倡导健康饮食，你的学校正在举办题为“如何健康饮食”的英文征文比赛。请你围绕下面的写作要点，写一篇70词左右的短文参加比赛。
内容包括以下方面：
1. 你的饮食习惯（一日三餐，最喜欢的食物）；
2. 提出健康饮食的建议（至少2点）；
3. 呼吁大家养成健康的饮食习惯。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you ______ .
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits
with you.
I am a healthy boy with some healthy eating habits. It is very important for us students
to keep healthy. I drink milk every day because my mother says it's good for my health. As
the Chinese saying goes, food is the first necessity of people. Let me introduce my favourite
daily three meals for you. In the morning, I like to take some dumplings and drink some
soybean milk for my breakfast. I like to eat some rice and vegetables for my lunch. In the
evening, I like to eat some porridge.
I never eat junk food because it is unhealthy. In my opinion, we should try to develop
healthy eating habits to keep healthy. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating
healthy food is good for the growth of our teenagers.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat healthy food and avoid eating junk food.
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits
with you.
I am a healthy boy with some healthy eating habits. It is very important for us students
to keep healthy. I drink milk every day because my mother says it's good for my health. As
the Chinese saying goes, food is the first necessity of people. Let me introduce my favourite
daily three meals for you. In the morning, I like to take some dumplings and drink some
soybean milk for my breakfast. I like to eat some rice and vegetables for my lunch. In the
evening, I like to eat some porridge.
I never eat junk food because it is unhealthy. In my opinion, we should try to develop
healthy eating habits to keep healthy. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating
healthy food is good for the growth of our teenagers.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat healthy food and avoid eating junk food.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先先明确审题要求：主题是“如何健康饮食”的英文征文，需要覆盖三个指定要点，开头已经给出。首先第一步先承接开头，自然引出自己的饮食习惯，清晰交代早中晚三餐的安排以及自己喜爱的食物，完成第一个要点；第二步结合生活常识提出2条以上切实可行的健康饮食建议，完成第二个要点；最后顺理成章发出呼吁，号召大家共同养成健康饮食习惯，完成第三个要点。写作过程中注意使用第一人称、一般现在时，保证语句通顺，要点无遗漏，字数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍自身的饮食习惯：说明自己有良好的健康饮食习惯，依次介绍早餐吃饺子配豆浆、午餐吃米饭配蔬菜、晚餐喝粥的日常安排，点明自己从不吃垃圾食品，清晰交代自己喜爱的健康食物，覆盖第一个写作要点。
2. 给出健康饮食建议：第一点建议大家主动培养健康饮食习惯，好的身体能帮助我们更好地学习；第二点建议多吃健康食物，助力青少年身体成长，满足至少2条建议的要求，覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 收尾发出倡议：呼吁所有人一起选择健康食物，远离垃圾食品，共同保持健康，完成第三个写作要点。
全程注意用词准确，语法正确，逻辑连贯，符合征文的分享语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
I am a healthy boy with some healthy eating habits. It is very important for us students to keep healthy. I drink milk every day because my mother says it's good for my health. As the Chinese saying goes, food is the first necessity of people. Let me introduce my favourite daily three meals for you. In the morning, I like to take some dumplings and drink some soybean milk for my breakfast. I like to eat some rice and vegetables for my lunch. In the evening, I like to eat some porridge.
I never eat junk food because it is unhealthy. In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to keep healthy. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating healthy food is good for the growth of our teenagers.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat healthy food and avoid eating junk food.
【知识点】
英文征文写作；健康话题表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个写作要点，内容逻辑连贯，先清晰介绍了自身一日三餐的饮食安排和偏好的健康食物，之后给出了贴合学生生活的合理健康饮食建议，最后发出明确的健康饮食倡议，还适当加入了相关谚语提升文采，语句通顺无语法错误，完全符合本次征文的写作要求，很适合学生参考仿写。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先先明确审题要求：主题是“如何健康饮食”的英文征文，需要覆盖三个指定要点，开头已经给出。首先第一步先承接开头，自然引出自己的饮食习惯，清晰交代早中晚三餐的安排以及自己喜爱的食物，完成第一个要点；第二步结合生活常识提出2条以上切实可行的健康饮食建议，完成第二个要点；最后顺理成章发出呼吁，号召大家共同养成健康饮食习惯，完成第三个要点。写作过程中注意使用第一人称、一般现在时，保证语句通顺，要点无遗漏，字数符合要求即可。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 承接给定开头，先介绍自身的饮食习惯：说明自己有良好的健康饮食习惯，依次介绍早餐吃饺子配豆浆、午餐吃米饭配蔬菜、晚餐喝粥的日常安排，点明自己从不吃垃圾食品，清晰交代自己喜爱的健康食物，覆盖第一个写作要点。
2. 给出健康饮食建议：第一点建议大家主动培养健康饮食习惯，好的身体能帮助我们更好地学习；第二点建议多吃健康食物，助力青少年身体成长，满足至少2条建议的要求，覆盖第二个写作要点。
3. 收尾发出倡议：呼吁所有人一起选择健康食物，远离垃圾食品，共同保持健康，完成第三个写作要点。
全程注意用词准确，语法正确，逻辑连贯，符合征文的分享语气。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
I am a healthy boy with some healthy eating habits. It is very important for us students to keep healthy. I drink milk every day because my mother says it's good for my health. As the Chinese saying goes, food is the first necessity of people. Let me introduce my favourite daily three meals for you. In the morning, I like to take some dumplings and drink some soybean milk for my breakfast. I like to eat some rice and vegetables for my lunch. In the evening, I like to eat some porridge.
I never eat junk food because it is unhealthy. In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to keep healthy. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating healthy food is good for the growth of our teenagers.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat healthy food and avoid eating junk food.
【知识点】
英文征文写作；健康话题表达；一般现在时运用
【点评】
本篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干要求的全部三个写作要点，内容逻辑连贯，先清晰介绍了自身一日三餐的饮食安排和偏好的健康食物，之后给出了贴合学生生活的合理健康饮食建议，最后发出明确的健康饮食倡议，还适当加入了相关谚语提升文采，语句通顺无语法错误，完全符合本次征文的写作要求，很适合学生参考仿写。
【难度系数】
0.7
