六、书面表达。
因为昨晚头疼没睡好,今天早上 Mike 去了医院。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文介绍 Mike 的就医经历。

注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯,词数 80 左右。短文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Mike didn't sleep well last night
In a word,let's do more sports to keep healthy.
因为昨晚头疼没睡好,今天早上 Mike 去了医院。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文介绍 Mike 的就医经历。
注意:
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯,词数 80 左右。短文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Mike didn't sleep well last night
because he had a headache. He went to hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that he didn't have a fever, but he had a cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest. At last, the doctor advised him to do exercise every day. Exercising will help him stay healthy.
In a word,let's do more sports to keep healthy.
答案
One possible version:
Mike didn’t sleep well last night because he had a headache. He went to hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that he didn’t have a fever, but he had a cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest. At last, the doctor advised him to do exercise every day. Exercising will help him stay healthy.
In a word, let’s do more sports to keep healthy.
Mike didn’t sleep well last night because he had a headache. He went to hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that he didn’t have a fever, but he had a cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest. At last, the doctor advised him to do exercise every day. Exercising will help him stay healthy.
In a word, let’s do more sports to keep healthy.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,需根据思维导图内容介绍Mike的就医经历。首先明确思维导图的核心信息:Mike的健康问题是头疼;医生诊断为不发烧、有点感冒,建议每天吃两次药,可适当拓展多喝水、休息、锻炼等合理建议;最后号召大家多运动。写作时要结合已给开头结尾,补充中间内容,确保语句连贯,词数符合要求,适当拓展不偏离主题。
【解析】
1. 承接开头说明Mike头疼没睡好去医院;2. 描述医生量体温后的诊断结果;3. 列出医生的具体建议(吃药、多喝水、休息、锻炼);4. 自然衔接结尾的号召,使内容连贯完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Mike didn’t sleep well last night because he had a headache. He went to hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that he didn’t have a fever, but he had a cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest. At last, the doctor advised him to do exercise every day. Exercising will help him stay healthy.
In a word, let’s do more sports to keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣思维导图内容,结合合理拓展信息,语句连贯,符合词数要求,完整介绍了Mike的就医经历,最后呼应号召,结构清晰。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题,需根据思维导图内容介绍Mike的就医经历。首先明确思维导图的核心信息:Mike的健康问题是头疼;医生诊断为不发烧、有点感冒,建议每天吃两次药,可适当拓展多喝水、休息、锻炼等合理建议;最后号召大家多运动。写作时要结合已给开头结尾,补充中间内容,确保语句连贯,词数符合要求,适当拓展不偏离主题。
【解析】
1. 承接开头说明Mike头疼没睡好去医院;2. 描述医生量体温后的诊断结果;3. 列出医生的具体建议(吃药、多喝水、休息、锻炼);4. 自然衔接结尾的号召,使内容连贯完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
Mike didn’t sleep well last night because he had a headache. He went to hospital this morning. After taking his temperature, the doctor told him that he didn’t have a fever, but he had a cold. Then the doctor gave him some medicine and asked him to take it twice a day. The doctor also told him that he should drink more hot water and have a good rest. At last, the doctor advised him to do exercise every day. Exercising will help him stay healthy.
In a word, let’s do more sports to keep healthy.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、健康话题写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣思维导图内容,结合合理拓展信息,语句连贯,符合词数要求,完整介绍了Mike的就医经历,最后呼应号召,结构清晰。
【难度系数】
0.6
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