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[开头句]
1. Money matters in every family. (金钱观念)
2. I have some pocket money. I want to manage it well. (理财想法)
3. Lucky money is a traditional present that children get during the Chinese New Year. (介绍习俗)
[中间句]
1. I usually spend most of my lucky money on pens, books, food and music. (消费情况)
2. I also use some money to help children in need every year. (爱心用途)
3. It is important to save for a rainy day. (理财想法)
[结尾句]
1. I make a plan first. This helps me have good habits. (理财收获)
2. If we use lucky money in a good way, it will bring us joy and happiness. (积极影响)
[名言警句]
1. Waste not, want not.
勤俭节约,吃穿不缺。
2. It's not easy to make money, but it's easy to waste it.
赚钱不易,浪费容易。
写作演练>>
你们或多或少都有零用钱,但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花费零用钱吗?请根据提示,以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题,给出你的合理建议。

要求:1. 词数80左右,文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2. 意思连贯,表达清楚。
[思路点拨]
①时态:以一般现在时为主。②人称:以第二人称为主。③根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
[开头句]
1. Money matters in every family. (金钱观念)
2. I have some pocket money. I want to manage it well. (理财想法)
3. Lucky money is a traditional present that children get during the Chinese New Year. (介绍习俗)
[中间句]
1. I usually spend most of my lucky money on pens, books, food and music. (消费情况)
2. I also use some money to help children in need every year. (爱心用途)
3. It is important to save for a rainy day. (理财想法)
[结尾句]
1. I make a plan first. This helps me have good habits. (理财收获)
2. If we use lucky money in a good way, it will bring us joy and happiness. (积极影响)
[名言警句]
1. Waste not, want not.
勤俭节约,吃穿不缺。
2. It's not easy to make money, but it's easy to waste it.
赚钱不易,浪费容易。
写作演练>>
你们或多或少都有零用钱,但是你们思考过应该怎样理智地花费零用钱吗?请根据提示,以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题,给出你的合理建议。
要求:1. 词数80左右,文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2. 意思连贯,表达清楚。
[思路点拨]
①时态:以一般现在时为主。②人称:以第二人称为主。③根据图示信息依次给出你的具体建议。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
One possible version:
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题写一篇建议类英语短文,需用一般现在时、第二人称,结合素材信息,词数80左右,开头结尾已给出。解题思路:先明确中间段落要分点给出具体建议,对应素材中的理财计划、帮助他人、储蓄等核心内容,确保内容连贯、符合要求,避免偏离主题。
【解析】
1. 确定中间段落结构:分三点给出合理建议,对应素材中的关键信息;
2. 第一点建议做消费计划:对应素材“make a plan first”,说明花钱前要列清单买必需品;
3. 第二点建议帮助他人:对应素材“help children in need”,说明用零花钱帮助有需要的人;
4. 第三点建议储蓄:对应素材“save for a rainy day”,说明避免花光零花钱以备不时之需;
5. 注意时态和人称,控制词数,确保内容通顺,符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、建议类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,分点阐述了明智使用零花钱的方法,融入了素材中的理财观念、爱心行为等内容,语言简洁规范,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以“How to spend your pocket money wisely”为题写一篇建议类英语短文,需用一般现在时、第二人称,结合素材信息,词数80左右,开头结尾已给出。解题思路:先明确中间段落要分点给出具体建议,对应素材中的理财计划、帮助他人、储蓄等核心内容,确保内容连贯、符合要求,避免偏离主题。
【解析】
1. 确定中间段落结构:分三点给出合理建议,对应素材中的关键信息;
2. 第一点建议做消费计划:对应素材“make a plan first”,说明花钱前要列清单买必需品;
3. 第二点建议帮助他人:对应素材“help children in need”,说明用零花钱帮助有需要的人;
4. 第三点建议储蓄:对应素材“save for a rainy day”,说明避免花光零花钱以备不时之需;
5. 注意时态和人称,控制词数,确保内容通顺,符合题目要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to spend your pocket money wisely
You're always happy to get some pocket money. But how can you spend it wisely? Here is some advice.
First, make a list. When you get some pocket money, don't get too excited. Write down the things you really need and how much they will cost before you buy them.
Second, help others. We all know there are still many people in need of our help in the world. You can use your pocket money to do something useful and helpful for them.
Third, save as much as you can. If you spend all your pocket money soon, you won't have enough money when you really need it.
A piggy bank may be useful for you to save money. Someday when you look back, you'll get a strong sense of achievement by saving so much money by yourself!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、建议类表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,分点阐述了明智使用零花钱的方法,融入了素材中的理财观念、爱心行为等内容,语言简洁规范,符合题目要求,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
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