经典例题
Tony已经了解了中国的春节,但是他还想了解更多的中国传统节日。请你根据以下提示向他介绍一下中国的元宵节。
【提示】1.元宵节的时间为正月十五,通常在公历的二月或三月。
2.人们在这一天祈求新的一年能得到好运。
3.传统的庆祝方式有吃元宵、赏花灯、猜灯谜、放烟花等。
【要求】1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥。
2.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确,不少于60词。
【参考词汇】the Lantern Festival(元宵节),the 15th day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar(正月十五),guess lantern riddles(猜灯谜),set off fireworks(放烟花)
Tony已经了解了中国的春节,但是他还想了解更多的中国传统节日。请你根据以下提示向他介绍一下中国的元宵节。
【提示】1.元宵节的时间为正月十五,通常在公历的二月或三月。
2.人们在这一天祈求新的一年能得到好运。
3.传统的庆祝方式有吃元宵、赏花灯、猜灯谜、放烟花等。
【要求】1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥。
2.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确,不少于60词。
【参考词汇】the Lantern Festival(元宵节),the 15th day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar(正月十五),guess lantern riddles(猜灯谜),set off fireworks(放烟花)
答案
Dear Tony,
Now let me introduce the Lantern Festival to you. It is one of my favourite Chinese traditional festivals.
It falls on the 15th day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar, and it usually comes in February or March of the solar year. On this day, people all hope they can have good luck in the whole new year.
We have many fun activities to celebrate it. We eat warm sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao. In the evening, we go out to watch all kinds of lovely lanterns, guess interesting lantern riddles, and set off fireworks together. We always have a wonderful day with our family.
Now let me introduce the Lantern Festival to you. It is one of my favourite Chinese traditional festivals.
It falls on the 15th day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar, and it usually comes in February or March of the solar year. On this day, people all hope they can have good luck in the whole new year.
We have many fun activities to celebrate it. We eat warm sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao. In the evening, we go out to watch all kinds of lovely lanterns, guess interesting lantern riddles, and set off fireworks together. We always have a wonderful day with our family.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务是向Tony介绍中国元宵节,需覆盖所有提示信息(时间、祈愿、传统庆祝方式),同时做到条理清晰、语句通顺、语法正确。第一步用称呼Dear Tony开篇,点明要介绍元宵节;第二步说明元宵节的时间(农历正月十五,通常在公历二月或三月);第三步阐述当天人们的共同愿望(祈求新的一年获得好运);第四步列举传统庆祝方式(吃元宵、赏花灯、猜灯谜、放烟花),可适当补充与家人共度的温馨内容,确保满足字数要求。
【解析】按照上述思路,使用参考词汇,以一般现在时组织语言,将各要点连贯衔接,补充合理的温馨细节(如和家人共度),确保覆盖所有提示信息,语句通顺、语法正确,符合英语写作规范,满足不少于60词的要求。
【答案】
Dear Tony,
Now let me introduce the Lantern Festival to you. It is one of my favourite Chinese traditional festivals.
It falls on the 15th day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar, and it usually comes in February or March of the solar year. On this day, people all hope they can have good luck in the whole new year.
We have many fun activities to celebrate it. We eat warm sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao. In the evening, we go out to watch all kinds of lovely lanterns, guess interesting lantern riddles, and set off fireworks together. We always have a wonderful day with our family.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,节日介绍的英语表达
【点评】该作文准确覆盖所有提示信息,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,适当补充了与家人共度的温馨内容,符合写作要求,是一篇符合标准的节日介绍类应用文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照上述思路,使用参考词汇,以一般现在时组织语言,将各要点连贯衔接,补充合理的温馨细节(如和家人共度),确保覆盖所有提示信息,语句通顺、语法正确,符合英语写作规范,满足不少于60词的要求。
【答案】
Dear Tony,
Now let me introduce the Lantern Festival to you. It is one of my favourite Chinese traditional festivals.
It falls on the 15th day of the first month in the Chinese lunar calendar, and it usually comes in February or March of the solar year. On this day, people all hope they can have good luck in the whole new year.
We have many fun activities to celebrate it. We eat warm sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao. In the evening, we go out to watch all kinds of lovely lanterns, guess interesting lantern riddles, and set off fireworks together. We always have a wonderful day with our family.
【知识点】英语应用文写作,节日介绍的英语表达
【点评】该作文准确覆盖所有提示信息,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,适当补充了与家人共度的温馨内容,符合写作要求,是一篇符合标准的节日介绍类应用文。
【难度系数】0.6
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