五、书面表达。
30. 闲暇时光可以培养兴趣爱好,以趣促学。假如你是李华,作为一名中学生,你和上文中作者一样,拥有自己钟爱的闲暇活动。你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你的爱好。请参考图示要点,给他写一封回信,介绍你最喜欢的闲暇活动。要求:
1. 词数为80左右；

2. 内容可参考图示中的要点,并适当发挥,使行文连贯,书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Mike,
I'm really happy to tell you about my
favourite free-time activity.

30.Dear Mike,
I'm really happy to tell you about my
favourite free-time activity.
In my free time, I enjoy playing the
piano,which I find really enjoyable. I started
it four years ago. My music teacher played a
beautiful piece in class,and I wanted to learn
it right away. Now I practise for half an hour
every evening on weekdays at home,and learn
a new piece on weekends each month.
The best part for me is playing the piano
for my family. Their smiles make me proud
and happy. When I am stressed,it also helps
me relax. For me,the piano is not only an
instrument,but also a good way to express my
feelings and share joy with others. It feeds my
mood and mind,bringing peace and happiness
into my life.
Hope you can find your favourites in your
free time.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
拿到这道题首先要先审题：明确文体是写给笔友的回信，主题是介绍自己最爱的课余活动，人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主。接下来要对应图示给出的四个核心问题搭建内容框架：第一步先明确点明你最喜欢的课余活动具体是什么；第二步回忆并说明你当初是怎么开始这项活动的；第三步介绍你平时开展这项活动的时间和地点；第四步讲清楚你喜爱这项活动的原因，最后可以适当补充收尾的友好问候，控制总词数在要求范围内，注意不要出现真实的人名校名，保证行文连贯自然。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇句，直接点明自己最爱的课余活动是弹钢琴，点明自己对这项活动的初印象。
2. 对应要点“How did you start it?”：用一般过去时讲述四年前音乐老师在课堂上演奏优美曲目，自己当即萌生学习的想法，由此开启学琴的经历，交代爱好的起源。
3. 对应要点“When and where do you do it?”：说明日常的练习安排：工作日每晚在家练习半小时，每月周末学习新曲目，清晰交代活动的时间和地点。
4. 对应要点“Why do you like it?”：从两个维度说明喜爱的原因：一是给家人演奏获得的成就感，二是压力大时弹琴可以放松，还能抒发情绪、分享快乐，为生活带来幸福感，内容充实有真情实感。
5. 最后补充对笔友的祝福，加上规范的书信落款，整体行文流畅，符合所有题目要求。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I'm really happy to tell you about my favourite free-time activity.
In my free time, I enjoy playing the piano,which I find really enjoyable. I started it four years ago. My music teacher played a beautiful piece in class,and I wanted to learn it right away. Now I practise for half an hour every evening on weekdays at home,and learn a new piece on weekends each month.
The best part for me is playing the piano for my family. Their smiles make me proud and happy. When I am stressed,it also helps me relax. For me,the piano is not only an instrument,but also a good way to express my feelings and share joy with others. It feeds my mood and mind,bringing peace and happiness into my life.
Hope you can find your favourites in your free time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，爱好话题表达，定语从句运用
【点评】
本篇作文完整覆盖了题目给出的全部提示要点，内容细节丰富，逻辑层层递进，用到了非限制性定语从句、现在分词作伴随状语等高级表达，语言地道自然，情感真挚，完全符合给笔友写信的交流语境，满足词数和书写规范的全部要求。
【难度系数】
0.6