写作指导
在冬天，哈尔滨的天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都做些什么？请根据提示写一篇60 词左右介绍哈尔滨天气的短文。
提示词语：戴帽子，穿毛衣，玩得高兴，在公园里唱歌、跳舞、踢足球、拍照








写作佳句
1. 天气多雪且有风。
It is .
2. 我和我的朋友们正玩得很开心。
My friends and I are .
3. 一些女孩正在堆雪人、滑冰、参观冰雕。
Some girls are , skating, and visiting ice sculptures.
4. 汤姆正在给一个雪人拍照。
Tom is of a snowman.
思路导引
1. 人称：第人称
2. 时态：
3. 体裁：
4. 列提纲

【写作佳句】
1. snowy and windy 2. having a good time
3. making snowmen 4. taking a photo
【思路导引】
1. 一、三 2. 现在进行时 3. 记叙文
写作范例
It's winter in Harbin. It is snowy and windy. People are wearing hats and sweaters. In the park，my friends and I are having a good time. Some girls are making snowmen，skating，and visiting ice sculptures. Some boys are playing soccer. My best friend Tom is taking a photo of a snowman.
How happy we are!

【解析】
需先补全写作佳句，明确写作的人称、时态与体裁，再依照给定提纲，结合提示词语，描述哈尔滨冬季的天气及人们的活动，完成一篇60词左右的短文。
【答案】
【写作佳句】
1. snowy and windy
2. having a good time
3. making snowmen
4. taking a photo
【思路导引】
1. 一、三
2. 现在进行时
3. 记叙文
写作范例
It's winter in Harbin. It is snowy and windy. People are wearing hats and sweaters. In the park，my friends and I are having a good time. Some girls are making snowmen，skating，and visiting ice sculptures. Some boys are playing soccer. My best friend Tom is taking a photo of a snowman.
How happy we are!
【知识点】
现在进行时运用、英语记叙文写作、天气词汇表达
【点评】
考查学生对天气类词汇和现在进行时的运用，结合生活场景写作，提升语言组织与表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6