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Ⅵ. 书面表达。
假如你校正在开展以“探索自然·敬畏生命”为主题的英语科普征文活动，旨在引导学生了解世界上的动植物，发现自然生物的独特之处，培养科学探索精神与生态保护意识。请你以“The amazing ”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿，描写你所了解的一种动物或植物，内容包括：
★What is the plant/animal?
★What makes it amazing?
★What is the plant/animal connected with us?
★What can we do to protect it?
要求：1. 内容完整，语句连贯；
2. 80词左右。
The amazing
假如你校正在开展以“探索自然·敬畏生命”为主题的英语科普征文活动，旨在引导学生了解世界上的动植物，发现自然生物的独特之处，培养科学探索精神与生态保护意识。请你以“The amazing ”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿，描写你所了解的一种动物或植物，内容包括：
★What is the plant/animal?
★What makes it amazing?
★What is the plant/animal connected with us?
★What can we do to protect it?
要求：1. 内容完整，语句连贯；
2. 80词左右。
The amazing
答案
One possible version：
The Amazing Giraffe
Giraffes live in the grasslands of Africa. They are the tallest animals on land. With a very long neck, an adult giraffe can grow to about five and a half metres tall. The giraffe feeds on plenty of plants. It can run very fast at a speed of about 60 kilometres per hour. However, because humans are polluting the environment, it has less and less land to live on. Also, some people hunt it. As a result, it is facing the danger of dying out.
We need to learn more about the giraffe. What's more, we should reduce pollution to protect the environment and provide it with a beautiful and peaceful home. We need to do whatever we can to help it.
The Amazing Giraffe
Giraffes live in the grasslands of Africa. They are the tallest animals on land. With a very long neck, an adult giraffe can grow to about five and a half metres tall. The giraffe feeds on plenty of plants. It can run very fast at a speed of about 60 kilometres per hour. However, because humans are polluting the environment, it has less and less land to live on. Also, some people hunt it. As a result, it is facing the danger of dying out.
We need to learn more about the giraffe. What's more, we should reduce pollution to protect the environment and provide it with a beautiful and peaceful home. We need to do whatever we can to help it.
解析
【分析】
本题为半命题英语征文，主题是“探索自然·敬畏生命”，需先补全题目（如选长颈鹿，因其特点鲜明易展开）。写作时要紧扣四个要求：明确所写动植物、阐述其神奇之处、说明与人类的联系、提出保护措施，同时要保证内容完整、语句连贯，控制在80词左右，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
1. 补全题目：选择“giraffe”作为补全内容，确定写作对象；
2. 按要求组织内容：①介绍长颈鹿的栖息地及基本身份（非洲草原、陆地最高动物）；②描述其神奇特征（长脖子、奔跑速度）；③说明其面临的生存危机（人类污染环境、捕猎导致栖息地减少、濒危）；④提出保护措施（减少污染、保护家园）；
3. 调整语言，确保语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version：
The Amazing Giraffe
Giraffes live in the grasslands of Africa. They are the tallest animals on land. With a very long neck, an adult giraffe can grow to about five and a half metres tall. The giraffe feeds on plenty of plants. It can run very fast at a speed of about 60 kilometres per hour. However, because humans are polluting the environment, it has less and less land to live on. Also, some people hunt it. As a result, it is facing the danger of dying out.
We need to learn more about the giraffe. What's more, we should reduce pollution to protect the environment and provide it with a beautiful and peaceful home. We need to do whatever we can to help it.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文写作；生态保护主题英语表达；话题类英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁流畅，既展现了长颈鹿的独特之处，又传递了生态保护意识，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为半命题英语征文，主题是“探索自然·敬畏生命”，需先补全题目（如选长颈鹿，因其特点鲜明易展开）。写作时要紧扣四个要求：明确所写动植物、阐述其神奇之处、说明与人类的联系、提出保护措施，同时要保证内容完整、语句连贯，控制在80词左右，符合英语写作规范。
【解析】
1. 补全题目：选择“giraffe”作为补全内容，确定写作对象；
2. 按要求组织内容：①介绍长颈鹿的栖息地及基本身份（非洲草原、陆地最高动物）；②描述其神奇特征（长脖子、奔跑速度）；③说明其面临的生存危机（人类污染环境、捕猎导致栖息地减少、濒危）；④提出保护措施（减少污染、保护家园）；
3. 调整语言，确保语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version：
The Amazing Giraffe
Giraffes live in the grasslands of Africa. They are the tallest animals on land. With a very long neck, an adult giraffe can grow to about five and a half metres tall. The giraffe feeds on plenty of plants. It can run very fast at a speed of about 60 kilometres per hour. However, because humans are polluting the environment, it has less and less land to live on. Also, some people hunt it. As a result, it is facing the danger of dying out.
We need to learn more about the giraffe. What's more, we should reduce pollution to protect the environment and provide it with a beautiful and peaceful home. We need to do whatever we can to help it.
【知识点】
英语半命题作文写作；生态保护主题英语表达；话题类英语应用文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语言简洁流畅，既展现了长颈鹿的独特之处，又传递了生态保护意识，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
