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三、书面表达。
青少年是祖国的未来，他们朝气蓬勃、心怀梦想。假如你们学校的英语社团正在开展以 “My Dream Job” 为题的英文演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的梦想职业。
内容包括：
1. What’s your dream job?
2. Why do you choose this job?
3. What/Who influenced (影响) you to make this decision(决定)?
4. How do you make it come true?
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数 70 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone!
Everyone has his or her own dream job, and so do I. Now let me share with you my dream job in the future.
That’s all! Thank you for listening.
青少年是祖国的未来，他们朝气蓬勃、心怀梦想。假如你们学校的英语社团正在开展以 “My Dream Job” 为题的英文演讲比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的梦想职业。
内容包括：
1. What’s your dream job?
2. Why do you choose this job?
3. What/Who influenced (影响) you to make this decision(决定)?
4. How do you make it come true?
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数 70 个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone!
Everyone has his or her own dream job, and so do I. Now let me share with you my dream job in the future.
I dreamed to be a teacher when I was a child, because I thought working as a teacher is a meaningful job and I enjoyed being with children.
My dream never changes. Now, I also want to be a teacher because of my English teacher—Miss Li.
She is a great teacher and teaches English well. I know it is not easy to be a good teacher, but I'll try my best to study hard to make my dream come true.
That’s all! Thank you for listening.
答案
I dreamed to be a teacher when I was a child, because I thought working as a teacher is a meaningful job and I enjoyed being with children. My dream never changes. Now, I also want to be a teacher because of my English teacher—Miss Li. She is a great teacher and teaches English well. I know it is not easy to be a good teacher, but I'll try my best to study hard to make my dream come true.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Dream Job”为题完成英文演讲短文，需围绕四个核心要点展开：明确自身梦想职业、说明选择该职业的原因、指出影响自己做出该决定的人/事、阐述实现梦想的方式，同时要遵循词数要求，不得出现真实个人信息，可适当发挥。解题时需先确定具体的梦想职业，再对应每个要点组织连贯的英语语句，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
首先确定梦想职业为教师；接着说明选择教师的原因：教师工作有意义，且自己喜欢与孩子相处；然后点明影响自己的是英语老师李老师，她教学出色，是优秀的教师；最后说明实现梦想的方式：努力学习。将这些内容用恰当的英语语句衔接，控制词数在70左右，补充到给定的开头和结尾之间，形成完整短文。
【答案】
I dreamed to be a teacher when I was a child, because I thought working as a teacher is a meaningful job and I enjoyed being with children. My dream never changes. Now, I also want to be a teacher because of my English teacher—Miss Li. She is a great teacher and teaches English well. I know it is not easy to be a good teacher, but I'll try my best to study hard to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本篇作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容连贯自然，用词准确恰当，符合词数要求，结构清晰，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“My Dream Job”为题完成英文演讲短文，需围绕四个核心要点展开：明确自身梦想职业、说明选择该职业的原因、指出影响自己做出该决定的人/事、阐述实现梦想的方式，同时要遵循词数要求，不得出现真实个人信息，可适当发挥。解题时需先确定具体的梦想职业，再对应每个要点组织连贯的英语语句，确保内容完整、逻辑清晰，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
首先确定梦想职业为教师；接着说明选择教师的原因：教师工作有意义，且自己喜欢与孩子相处；然后点明影响自己的是英语老师李老师，她教学出色，是优秀的教师；最后说明实现梦想的方式：努力学习。将这些内容用恰当的英语语句衔接，控制词数在70左右，补充到给定的开头和结尾之间，形成完整短文。
【答案】
I dreamed to be a teacher when I was a child, because I thought working as a teacher is a meaningful job and I enjoyed being with children. My dream never changes. Now, I also want to be a teacher because of my English teacher—Miss Li. She is a great teacher and teaches English well. I know it is not easy to be a good teacher, but I'll try my best to study hard to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
本篇作文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容连贯自然，用词准确恰当，符合词数要求，结构清晰，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
