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1. 写作任务
假如你是刘雅,今天你和一些美国来的朋友聚会。请根据下图中的内容提示,用英语写一篇60个词左右的自我介绍。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含上图中的所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)My name Liu Ya. 我的名字是刘雅。
(2)My name is Lucy. 我的英文名字是露西。
(3)My is Brown,and my is Jack. 我姓布朗,名杰克。
中间句:
(1) 12 . 我12岁。
(2)I like . 我喜欢阅读。
(3)My favourite sport is . 我最喜欢的运动是踢足球。
(4)I play football my classmates . 我经常周日和同学们踢足球。
结尾句:
(1)Do you want to me? 你想和我交朋友吗?
(2)Do you a friend? What is his or her name? 你有朋友吗? 他的/她的名字叫什么?
(3)As the saying goes...俗话说……
名言名句:
(1)A life without a friend is a life without the sun. 人生没有朋友就犹如生活没有太阳。
(2)Friendship is the greatest pleasure in life. 友谊是人生最大的快乐。
3. 范文品鉴
Hello. My name is Liu Ya. I am 12 years old. I’m in Class 10,Grade 7. I’m from Shenzhen. (基本情况)
I have many hobbies. I like reading books,and there are many books in my home. My favourite sport is football. I often play football with my classmates on Sundays. I love animals. I like keeping pets and I have a cute dog. Its name is Feifei. (爱好)
As the saying goes,a life without a friend is a life without the sun. Would you like to be my friend? (期待)
假如你是刘雅,今天你和一些美国来的朋友聚会。请根据下图中的内容提示,用英语写一篇60个词左右的自我介绍。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含上图中的所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)My name Liu Ya. 我的名字是刘雅。
(2)My name is Lucy. 我的英文名字是露西。
(3)My is Brown,and my is Jack. 我姓布朗,名杰克。
中间句:
(1) 12 . 我12岁。
(2)I like . 我喜欢阅读。
(3)My favourite sport is . 我最喜欢的运动是踢足球。
(4)I play football my classmates . 我经常周日和同学们踢足球。
结尾句:
(1)Do you want to me? 你想和我交朋友吗?
(2)Do you a friend? What is his or her name? 你有朋友吗? 他的/她的名字叫什么?
(3)As the saying goes...俗话说……
名言名句:
(1)A life without a friend is a life without the sun. 人生没有朋友就犹如生活没有太阳。
(2)Friendship is the greatest pleasure in life. 友谊是人生最大的快乐。
3. 范文品鉴
Hello. My name is Liu Ya. I am 12 years old. I’m in Class 10,Grade 7. I’m from Shenzhen. (基本情况)
I have many hobbies. I like reading books,and there are many books in my home. My favourite sport is football. I often play football with my classmates on Sundays. I love animals. I like keeping pets and I have a cute dog. Its name is Feifei. (爱好)
As the saying goes,a life without a friend is a life without the sun. Would you like to be my friend? (期待)
答案
思路点拨答案
第一步：审题
体裁：自我介绍类发言稿 人称：第一人称 时态：一般现在时
第二步：列提纲（参考合理示例）
My name is Liu Ya.
I'm 12 years old.
I'm in Class 4, Grade 7.
I'm from Nanjing.
I like reading. There are many books in my home.
My favourite sport is football. I often play football with my classmates after school.
I love animals. I like keeping pets and I have a cute dog. Its name is Duoduo.
As the saying goes, a life without a friend is a life without the sun. Would you like to be my friend?
第三步：句子积累答案
开头句：(1)is (2)English (3)last name; first name
中间句：(1)I am; years old (2)reading (3)playing football (4)often; with; on Sundays
结尾句：(1)make friends with (2)have
参考范文
Hello! Nice to meet you all. I'm Liu Ya, 12 years old. I'm from Nanjing and I'm in Grade 7. I love reading and playing football, and I have a cute pet dog. Hope we can become good friends!
第一步：审题
体裁：自我介绍类发言稿 人称：第一人称 时态：一般现在时
第二步：列提纲（参考合理示例）
My name is Liu Ya.
I'm 12 years old.
I'm in Class 4, Grade 7.
I'm from Nanjing.
I like reading. There are many books in my home.
My favourite sport is football. I often play football with my classmates after school.
I love animals. I like keeping pets and I have a cute dog. Its name is Duoduo.
As the saying goes, a life without a friend is a life without the sun. Would you like to be my friend?
第三步：句子积累答案
开头句：(1)is (2)English (3)last name; first name
中间句：(1)I am; years old (2)reading (3)playing football (4)often; with; on Sundays
结尾句：(1)make friends with (2)have
参考范文
Hello! Nice to meet you all. I'm Liu Ya, 12 years old. I'm from Nanjing and I'm in Grade 7. I love reading and playing football, and I have a cute pet dog. Hope we can become good friends!
解析
本题为人教版七年级上册自我介绍主题的写作训练题，旨在考查学生对介绍个人基本信息、爱好相关的基础句型的掌握，按照提示的三步法完成即可：①审题明确体裁、人称和时态，符合七年级基础写作要求；②先补全提纲和基础句型填空，再串联成通顺短文，注意规避真实校名人名，字数控制在60词左右即可。
