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假设你是李华，上周日你去旅游了。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“A Pleasant Trip”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
假设你是李华，上周日你去旅游了。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇题为“A Pleasant Trip”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
答案
A Pleasant Trip
Last Sunday, I went on a trip with my classmates. We met at the school gate early in the morning, then rode our bikes to the North Hill Park together.
We had a great time there. First, we tried to climb the hill, and we got to the top after about one hour. The view on the top was really beautiful. We had a picnic and enjoyed all kinds of delicious food at noon. After that, we played some interesting games in the open air. We went back home in the late afternoon.
I felt a little tired after the trip, but I was really happy and relaxed. It was such a pleasant trip that I will never forget it.
Last Sunday, I went on a trip with my classmates. We met at the school gate early in the morning, then rode our bikes to the North Hill Park together.
We had a great time there. First, we tried to climb the hill, and we got to the top after about one hour. The view on the top was really beautiful. We had a picnic and enjoyed all kinds of delicious food at noon. After that, we played some interesting games in the open air. We went back home in the late afternoon.
I felt a little tired after the trip, but I was really happy and relaxed. It was such a pleasant trip that I will never forget it.
解析
这是一篇游记类记叙文写作，要求以第一人称、一般过去时来叙述旅行经历，写作时需覆盖全部提示要点：1. 开篇点明旅行时间为上周日，同行人物可设定为自己的同学/好友；2. 按事件发展顺序依次描述前往北山公园的过程、爬山、野餐、做游戏等活动，适当补充细节让内容更生动；3. 结尾抒发自己的旅行感受，保证词数不少于80，语句通顺，不出现真实姓名校名即可。
