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假设你是 Millie，你的朋友 Sandy 下周会来兴化玩，请根据下表提示写一封信，邀请 Sandy 来兴化玩时住在你家里。
【要求】1. 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名。
2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
Yours,
Millie
【要求】1. 词数 100 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名。
2. 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre of Xinghua. It is near schools and shopping centres. There is a small supermarket in the neighbourhood. People can go there to buy what they need. There is also a small garden, so people can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighbours are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often help us fix things like broken bicycles. We students can also get help with our homework from college students. My home has four bedrooms. I am happy to have my own bedroom and study. The living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. I like the balcony best. I often sit there and enjoy the sunshine. I hope I can see you soon. Then we can have a good time together. Welcome to Xinghua! Welcome to my home!
Yours,
Millie
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre of Xinghua. It is near schools and shopping centres. There is a small supermarket in the neighbourhood. People can go there to buy what they need. There is also a small garden, so people can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighbours are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often help us fix things like broken bicycles. We students can also get help with our homework from college students.
My home has four bedrooms. I am happy to have my own bedroom and study. The living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. I like the balcony best. I often sit there and enjoy the sunshine.
I hope I can see you soon. Then we can have a good time together.
Welcome to Xinghua! Welcome to my home!
Yours,
Millie
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre of Xinghua. It is near schools and shopping centres. There is a small supermarket in the neighbourhood. People can go there to buy what they need. There is also a small garden, so people can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighbours are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often help us fix things like broken bicycles. We students can also get help with our homework from college students.
My home has four bedrooms. I am happy to have my own bedroom and study. The living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. I like the balcony best. I often sit there and enjoy the sunshine.
I hope I can see you soon. Then we can have a good time together.
Welcome to Xinghua! Welcome to my home!
Yours,
Millie
解析
【分析】
这是一篇邀请类英语书信写作，解题时首先要理清写作逻辑：第一步先承接开头的邀请，先介绍自己居住的小区基本信息，把区位优势（市中心、近学校和购物中心）自然引出；第二步补充小区的配套设施，说明小区生活的便利性；第三步介绍友善的邻居，按照要求补充两个具体的乐于助人的实例，让内容更真实；第四步介绍家中各个房间的特点，突出居住的舒适感；最后收尾表达期待和对方一起游玩的愿望。写作时注意不要逐条生硬翻译表格内容，用流畅的日常表达串联所有要点，控制总词数符合要求，不要出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定：本文是写给好友的邀请信，使用第一人称，以一般现在时为主要时态，语气亲切自然即可。
2. 分层整合所有要点：
① 小区介绍：开篇说明自己住在兴化市中心的城市花园，周边临近学校和购物中心，生活十分便利。
② 配套设施：补充小区内的便民设施，比如小超市可以购买日常所需，小花园可供居民饭后散步休闲。
③ 邻居部分：点明邻居都热心友善，举两个实例：有志愿者邻居帮忙修理损坏的自行车等物品，还有大学生邻居可以辅导学生完成作业。
④ 房间介绍：依次介绍卧室、宽敞的客厅、舒适的阳台的特点，体现居住的舒适感。
⑤ 收尾：表达期待和对方见面、一同游玩的美好愿望，完成书信。
3. 串联所有内容，保证语句连贯通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre of Xinghua. It is near schools and shopping centres. There is a small supermarket in the neighbourhood. People can go there to buy what they need. There is also a small garden, so people can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighbours are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often help us fix things like broken bicycles. We students can also get help with our homework from college students.
My home has four bedrooms. I am happy to have my own bedroom and study. The living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. I like the balcony best. I often sit there and enjoy the sunshine.
I hope I can see you soon. Then we can have a good time together.
Welcome to Xinghua! Welcome to my home!
Yours,
Millie
【知识点】
英文书信写作，一般现在时，信息整合
【点评】
本题属于初中英语常规应用文写作，给出的提示要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照从外到内的逻辑（小区-配套-邻居-家的房间）串联所有信息，适当补充细节避免生硬翻译，就能写出符合要求的短文，既考察了学生的基础词汇句式运用能力，也锻炼了学生的内容组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇邀请类英语书信写作，解题时首先要理清写作逻辑：第一步先承接开头的邀请，先介绍自己居住的小区基本信息，把区位优势（市中心、近学校和购物中心）自然引出；第二步补充小区的配套设施，说明小区生活的便利性；第三步介绍友善的邻居，按照要求补充两个具体的乐于助人的实例，让内容更真实；第四步介绍家中各个房间的特点，突出居住的舒适感；最后收尾表达期待和对方一起游玩的愿望。写作时注意不要逐条生硬翻译表格内容，用流畅的日常表达串联所有要点，控制总词数符合要求，不要出现真实个人信息即可。
【解析】
1. 文体与时态确定：本文是写给好友的邀请信，使用第一人称，以一般现在时为主要时态，语气亲切自然即可。
2. 分层整合所有要点：
① 小区介绍：开篇说明自己住在兴化市中心的城市花园，周边临近学校和购物中心，生活十分便利。
② 配套设施：补充小区内的便民设施，比如小超市可以购买日常所需，小花园可供居民饭后散步休闲。
③ 邻居部分：点明邻居都热心友善，举两个实例：有志愿者邻居帮忙修理损坏的自行车等物品，还有大学生邻居可以辅导学生完成作业。
④ 房间介绍：依次介绍卧室、宽敞的客厅、舒适的阳台的特点，体现居住的舒适感。
⑤ 收尾：表达期待和对方见面、一同游玩的美好愿望，完成书信。
3. 串联所有内容，保证语句连贯通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Sandy,
I'm happy to know that you will visit Xinghua next week. I'd like to invite you to stay at my home.
I live in a flat in City Garden in the centre of Xinghua. It is near schools and shopping centres. There is a small supermarket in the neighbourhood. People can go there to buy what they need. There is also a small garden, so people can take a walk there after dinner. Our neighbours are very kind and helpful. Some of them are volunteers. They often help us fix things like broken bicycles. We students can also get help with our homework from college students.
My home has four bedrooms. I am happy to have my own bedroom and study. The living room is very big. We can sit on the sofa and watch TV there. I like the balcony best. I often sit there and enjoy the sunshine.
I hope I can see you soon. Then we can have a good time together.
Welcome to Xinghua! Welcome to my home!
Yours,
Millie
【知识点】
英文书信写作，一般现在时，信息整合
【点评】
本题属于初中英语常规应用文写作，给出的提示要点清晰明确，学生只需要按照从外到内的逻辑（小区-配套-邻居-家的房间）串联所有信息，适当补充细节避免生硬翻译，就能写出符合要求的短文，既考察了学生的基础词汇句式运用能力，也锻炼了学生的内容组织能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
