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假如你是陈红,在今天的班会上,同学们讨论了“我最喜爱的电影”,并针对在电影院里,如何做一个文明的(well-mannered)中学生交流了想法。你的班主任李老师对班会的内容很感兴趣,请你根据以下内容,给李老师写一封英语电子邮件,不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
写作要点:1. 所有同学都参加了今天的班会;2. 同学们最喜爱的电影:(1)黄平:喜剧片(2)周涛:功夫片;3. 说一说在电影院里,如何做一个文明的中学生。
Dear Mr Li,
How is everything going?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Chen Hong
假如你是陈红,在今天的班会上,同学们讨论了“我最喜爱的电影”,并针对在电影院里,如何做一个文明的(well-mannered)中学生交流了想法。你的班主任李老师对班会的内容很感兴趣,请你根据以下内容,给李老师写一封英语电子邮件,不少于100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
写作要点:1. 所有同学都参加了今天的班会;2. 同学们最喜爱的电影:(1)黄平:喜剧片(2)周涛:功夫片;3. 说一说在电影院里,如何做一个文明的中学生。
Dear Mr Li,
How is everything going?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Chen Hong
答案
思路点拨
1. 审体裁——用第一人称写一封电子邮件,汇报班会讨论情况。
2. 审内容——点明邮件目的,介绍同学们最喜爱的电影类型,分点说明在电影院如何做文明中学生,总结讨论收获,表达对公共礼仪的认识。
3. 审时态——以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主,描述班会讨论和日常行为规范。
4. 审篇幅——词数100左右;开头点明邮件目的,中间用状语从句、宾语从句、高级词汇、句型等串联,既清晰又高级。
范文欣赏
Dear Mr Li,
How is everything going? Now let me introduce today's class meeting to you.
All the students took part in the class meeting. The topic we discussed was "My favourite film". Huang Ping enjoys watching comedies because they make him feel relaxed. Zhou Tao likes kung fu films best because he thinks that they are very exciting. We also exchanged the ideas about how to be a well-mannered middle school student in the cinema. I think we should follow the rules in the cinema. People can't talk loudly or talk on the phone while watching a film. We should keep the cinema clean as well. The above are all about the class meeting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Chen Hong
1. 审体裁——用第一人称写一封电子邮件,汇报班会讨论情况。
2. 审内容——点明邮件目的,介绍同学们最喜爱的电影类型,分点说明在电影院如何做文明中学生,总结讨论收获,表达对公共礼仪的认识。
3. 审时态——以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主,描述班会讨论和日常行为规范。
4. 审篇幅——词数100左右;开头点明邮件目的,中间用状语从句、宾语从句、高级词汇、句型等串联,既清晰又高级。
范文欣赏
Dear Mr Li,
How is everything going? Now let me introduce today's class meeting to you.
All the students took part in the class meeting. The topic we discussed was "My favourite film". Huang Ping enjoys watching comedies because they make him feel relaxed. Zhou Tao likes kung fu films best because he thinks that they are very exciting. We also exchanged the ideas about how to be a well-mannered middle school student in the cinema. I think we should follow the rules in the cinema. People can't talk loudly or talk on the phone while watching a film. We should keep the cinema clean as well. The above are all about the class meeting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Chen Hong
解析
【解析】
这是一篇应用类英语邮件写作题，解题步骤如下：
1. 明确写作身份为陈红，受众是班主任李老师，文体为电子邮件，需用第一人称表述。
2. 梳理内容逻辑：开篇点明写邮件的目的，向老师介绍本次班会情况；首先说明所有同学都参与了本次班会，班会主题为“我最喜爱的电影”；接着分别介绍两位同学的喜好：黄平喜爱喜剧片，说明喜剧片能带来欢乐、缓解学习疲惫的原因，周涛喜爱功夫片，说明功夫片情节刺激、能了解中国传统文化的原因；之后阐述同学们交流的影院文明行为准则：严格遵守影院规则，观影时不大声交谈、不接打电话，不吃气味浓烈的食物，自觉维护影院卫生；最后收尾总结本次班会的全部内容，衔接已给出的邮件结尾。
3. 时态选择以一般过去时描述已完成的班会活动，以一般现在时表述客观的喜好和公共行为规范，保证语法准确，词数符合不少于100词的要求。
【答案】
Now let me introduce today's class meeting to you.
All the students took part in the class meeting. The topic we discussed was "My favourite film". Huang Ping enjoys watching comedies because they can bring him lots of joy and make him feel relaxed after long hours of study. Zhou Tao likes kung fu films best, because he thinks the actors' wonderful performances are very exciting and he can learn about Chinese traditional culture from this kind of film. We also exchanged the ideas about how to be a well-mannered middle school student in the cinema. We all agree that we should follow the cinema rules strictly. People can't talk loudly or talk on the phone while watching a film. We should not eat food that has strong smell, and we should keep the cinema clean as well. The above are all about today's class meeting.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，时态正确运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题是初中常见的应用类英语写作题，要求学生紧扣给定的全部写作要点，合理梳理内容逻辑，正确选用对应时态完成邮件撰写，同时可以通过使用定语从句、状语从句和高级词汇提升作文的表达质量，贴合日常校园生活场景，既考查基础写作能力，也引导学生了解公共文明礼仪规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇应用类英语邮件写作题，解题步骤如下：
1. 明确写作身份为陈红，受众是班主任李老师，文体为电子邮件，需用第一人称表述。
2. 梳理内容逻辑：开篇点明写邮件的目的，向老师介绍本次班会情况；首先说明所有同学都参与了本次班会，班会主题为“我最喜爱的电影”；接着分别介绍两位同学的喜好：黄平喜爱喜剧片，说明喜剧片能带来欢乐、缓解学习疲惫的原因，周涛喜爱功夫片，说明功夫片情节刺激、能了解中国传统文化的原因；之后阐述同学们交流的影院文明行为准则：严格遵守影院规则，观影时不大声交谈、不接打电话，不吃气味浓烈的食物，自觉维护影院卫生；最后收尾总结本次班会的全部内容，衔接已给出的邮件结尾。
3. 时态选择以一般过去时描述已完成的班会活动，以一般现在时表述客观的喜好和公共行为规范，保证语法准确，词数符合不少于100词的要求。
【答案】
Now let me introduce today's class meeting to you.
All the students took part in the class meeting. The topic we discussed was "My favourite film". Huang Ping enjoys watching comedies because they can bring him lots of joy and make him feel relaxed after long hours of study. Zhou Tao likes kung fu films best, because he thinks the actors' wonderful performances are very exciting and he can learn about Chinese traditional culture from this kind of film. We also exchanged the ideas about how to be a well-mannered middle school student in the cinema. We all agree that we should follow the cinema rules strictly. People can't talk loudly or talk on the phone while watching a film. We should not eat food that has strong smell, and we should keep the cinema clean as well. The above are all about today's class meeting.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作，时态正确运用，要点整合表达
【点评】
本题是初中常见的应用类英语写作题，要求学生紧扣给定的全部写作要点，合理梳理内容逻辑，正确选用对应时态完成邮件撰写，同时可以通过使用定语从句、状语从句和高级词汇提升作文的表达质量，贴合日常校园生活场景，既考查基础写作能力，也引导学生了解公共文明礼仪规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
巩固练习
电影,是光影的魔术,有的电影让人轻松快乐,有的电影给人内心触动,有的电影带领我们走过大千世界。你的学校正举办中外电影周活动,请你以"My favourite film"为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一部你最喜欢的电影。
要点:1. 你最喜欢的电影是什么;2. 这部电影讲述了什么;3. 你喜欢它的原因是什么。
注意:1. 电影名可用拼音表述;2. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
My favourite film
Dear friends, what kind of films do you like?
Thank you so much!
电影,是光影的魔术,有的电影让人轻松快乐,有的电影给人内心触动,有的电影带领我们走过大千世界。你的学校正举办中外电影周活动,请你以"My favourite film"为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一部你最喜欢的电影。
要点:1. 你最喜欢的电影是什么;2. 这部电影讲述了什么;3. 你喜欢它的原因是什么。
注意:1. 电影名可用拼音表述;2. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3. 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
My favourite film
Dear friends, what kind of films do you like?
I'm really into science fiction films because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favourite one is Interstellar. In this film, the earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching films is a great way to relax. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That's why I love films so much.
My favourite one is Interstellar. In this film, the earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching films is a great way to relax. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That's why I love films so much.
Thank you so much!
答案
One possible version:
My favourite film
Dear friends, what kind of films do you like? I'm really into science fiction films because they can take me to a world be into sth 对……感兴趣
full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favourite one is Interstellar. In this film, the earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching films is a great way to relax. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That's why I love films so much.
Thank you so much!
My favourite film
Dear friends, what kind of films do you like? I'm really into science fiction films because they can take me to a world be into sth 对……感兴趣
full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favourite one is Interstellar. In this film, the earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching films is a great way to relax. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That's why I love films so much.
Thank you so much!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先审题，明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点：点明自己最喜欢的电影名称、简要介绍电影的核心剧情、说明喜爱这部电影的原因，同时还要注意题目给出的限制要求：词数100左右，开头结尾已经给出不计入总词数，不能出现校名、师生姓名等隐私信息。接下来梳理行文思路：先承接开头的问句，简单铺垫自己的观影偏好，自然引出最爱的电影，之后用简洁的语言讲清电影的背景和主要情节，最后从内容亮点、精神内核、个人收获等角度说明喜欢的原因，收尾点出观影的意义，衔接给定的结尾即可，写作时尽量用已学的亮点短语，规避语法错误，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文是校园电影周的发言稿，属于说明类应用文，整体以一般现在时为主，介绍电影剧情也可以用一般现在时表述，人称以第一人称为主。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 承接给定开头：说明自己对科幻类电影的喜爱，顺势引出最喜欢的电影《Interstellar》（星际穿越）。
② 剧情介绍部分：交代电影核心背景——地球面临环境危机，宇航员受命出发寻找新的宜居星球，穿越虫洞经历各类冒险，同时提及电影特效十分震撼的特点。
③ 收尾部分：点明观影的价值，既可以放松身心，还能拓宽视野、丰富知识，了解不同的文化与价值观，呼应喜爱电影的主题。
3. 核查调整：写完后核对三个要点是否全部覆盖，确认词数符合要求，检查没有出现隐私信息，修正语法错误，保证行文流畅自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite film
Dear friends, what kind of films do you like? I'm really into science fiction films because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favourite one is Interstellar. In this film, the earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching films is a great way to relax. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That's why I love films so much.
Thank you so much!
【知识点】
1. 英语发言稿写作
2. 电影话题表达
3. 语篇逻辑组织
【点评】
本题结合校园真实活动场景命题，贴合学生日常的观影兴趣，给出的写作要点清晰明确，有效降低了写作门槛。参考范文逻辑连贯自然，完整覆盖所有要求的要点，用到了be into、broaden horizons等亮点短语，兼顾简单句和复合句，表达地道，词数完全符合题目要求。学生写作时也可以选择自己更熟悉的国产电影如《流浪地球》等进行创作，能更好地规避生僻词汇错误，拿到更高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步先审题，明确三个必须覆盖的核心要点：点明自己最喜欢的电影名称、简要介绍电影的核心剧情、说明喜爱这部电影的原因，同时还要注意题目给出的限制要求：词数100左右，开头结尾已经给出不计入总词数，不能出现校名、师生姓名等隐私信息。接下来梳理行文思路：先承接开头的问句，简单铺垫自己的观影偏好，自然引出最爱的电影，之后用简洁的语言讲清电影的背景和主要情节，最后从内容亮点、精神内核、个人收获等角度说明喜欢的原因，收尾点出观影的意义，衔接给定的结尾即可，写作时尽量用已学的亮点短语，规避语法错误，控制词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文是校园电影周的发言稿，属于说明类应用文，整体以一般现在时为主，介绍电影剧情也可以用一般现在时表述，人称以第一人称为主。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 承接给定开头：说明自己对科幻类电影的喜爱，顺势引出最喜欢的电影《Interstellar》（星际穿越）。
② 剧情介绍部分：交代电影核心背景——地球面临环境危机，宇航员受命出发寻找新的宜居星球，穿越虫洞经历各类冒险，同时提及电影特效十分震撼的特点。
③ 收尾部分：点明观影的价值，既可以放松身心，还能拓宽视野、丰富知识，了解不同的文化与价值观，呼应喜爱电影的主题。
3. 核查调整：写完后核对三个要点是否全部覆盖，确认词数符合要求，检查没有出现隐私信息，修正语法错误，保证行文流畅自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite film
Dear friends, what kind of films do you like? I'm really into science fiction films because they can take me to a world full of imagination and advanced technology.
My favourite one is Interstellar. In this film, the earth is facing a serious environmental crisis. A group of astronauts are sent on a mission to find a new habitable planet for humanity. They travel through a wormhole and experience various adventures in different galaxies. The special effects are extremely stunning, making the space scenes look so real.
Watching films is a great way to relax. It can not only broaden our horizons but also enrich our knowledge. We can also learn different cultures and values from them. That's why I love films so much.
Thank you so much!
【知识点】
1. 英语发言稿写作
2. 电影话题表达
3. 语篇逻辑组织
【点评】
本题结合校园真实活动场景命题，贴合学生日常的观影兴趣，给出的写作要点清晰明确，有效降低了写作门槛。参考范文逻辑连贯自然，完整覆盖所有要求的要点，用到了be into、broaden horizons等亮点短语，兼顾简单句和复合句，表达地道，词数完全符合题目要求。学生写作时也可以选择自己更熟悉的国产电影如《流浪地球》等进行创作，能更好地规避生僻词汇错误，拿到更高分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
