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七、书面表达(21 分)
亲爱的同学们,在最近的学习和生活中,你们一定结交到了许多好朋友。请根据下面表格中提供的信息,以“My Best Friend and I”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你和你最好的朋友 Nancy 之间的相同之处和不同之处。
要求:1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容;2. 不少于 80 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数),可适当发挥。
My Best Friend and I
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same.
亲爱的同学们,在最近的学习和生活中,你们一定结交到了许多好朋友。请根据下面表格中提供的信息,以“My Best Friend and I”为题,写一篇英语短文介绍你和你最好的朋友 Nancy 之间的相同之处和不同之处。
要求:1. 包括表格中提及的所有内容;2. 不少于 80 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数),可适当发挥。
My Best Friend and I
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same.
答案
One possible version:
My Best Friend and I
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. For example, both of us enjoy exercising because it keeps us healthy. We all study very hard and be good at every subject.
同义短语:do well in
Reading is our common hobby, and every weekend we go to the library to read together.
But in some ways, we are different from each other. Nancy is much taller than me and more outgoing than me, while I am a little shyer. And she is better at singing and dancing than me. When she has free time, she enjoys listening to concerts while I enjoy surfing the internet and travelling.
Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇记叙文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:文章开头以及要点已给出,注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,具体介绍自己与朋友的相同之处;第二步,具体介绍自己与朋友的不同之处;第三步,书写结尾,表达自己的愿望。
[词句积累]
①in some ways 在某些方面 ②be different from 与……不同
③When she has free time, she enjoys listening to concerts while I enjoy surfing the internet and travelling.(when引导时间状语从句;while连接并列句)
④Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends.(although引导让步状语从句)
My Best Friend and I
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. For example, both of us enjoy exercising because it keeps us healthy. We all study very hard and be good at every subject.
同义短语:do well in
Reading is our common hobby, and every weekend we go to the library to read together.
But in some ways, we are different from each other. Nancy is much taller than me and more outgoing than me, while I am a little shyer. And she is better at singing and dancing than me. When she has free time, she enjoys listening to concerts while I enjoy surfing the internet and travelling.
Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇记叙文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:文章开头以及要点已给出,注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息,并适当添加内容,使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,具体介绍自己与朋友的相同之处;第二步,具体介绍自己与朋友的不同之处;第三步,书写结尾,表达自己的愿望。
[词句积累]
①in some ways 在某些方面 ②be different from 与……不同
③When she has free time, she enjoys listening to concerts while I enjoy surfing the internet and travelling.(when引导时间状语从句;while连接并列句)
④Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends.(although引导让步状语从句)
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：需要覆盖表格全部内容，字数不少于80词，且开头已经给出无需自行创作。首先梳理行文逻辑：先写两人的相同点，再写不同点，最后补充收尾句升华友谊即可。首先处理相同点部分，依次把表格里的三个共性：喜欢运动、学习努力各科成绩好、热爱阅读周末同去图书馆，用合适的衔接词串联，用both of us这类表达突出两人的共性。之后用转折过渡句引出不同点，先介绍Nancy的三个不同特征，再介绍自己的两个不同爱好，描述差异时正确使用形容词比较级，用while衔接对比逻辑，最后补充收尾句，就能写出符合要求的完整作文，不会遗漏要点也能满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定的开头，展开相同点描述：先用for example引出第一个共性，说明两人都热爱运动，运动能帮助我们保持健康；接着点明两人都学习非常刻苦，所有科目都很擅长；最后补充两人都喜爱阅读，每周末都会相约去图书馆，完整覆盖全部相同点要点。
2. 用过渡句"But in some ways, we are different from each other."转到差异部分的描述：使用比较级体现Nancy比我高得多、性格更外向，也比我更擅长唱歌跳舞，空闲时她喜欢去听音乐会；再用while做对比，说明我的爱好是上网和旅游，把全部不同点要点都覆盖。
3. 最后补充收尾句"Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends."，让文章结构完整，情感表达自然，全文使用一般现在时符合描述日常爱好的语境，总字数远超80词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Best Friend and I
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. For example, both of us enjoy exercising because it keeps us healthy. We all study very hard and be good at every subject. Reading is our common hobby, and every weekend we go to the library to read together.
But in some ways, we are different from each other. Nancy is much taller than me and more outgoing than me, while I am a little shyer. And she is better at singing and dancing than me. When she has free time, she enjoys listening to concerts while I enjoy surfing the internet and travelling.
Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends.
【知识点】
形容词比较级，提纲作文写作，一般现在时
【点评】
本题是初中英语高频的人物介绍类书面表达，所有要点都通过表格明确给出，核心考察学生对形容词比较级的运用能力，以及梳理共性、对比差异的逻辑表达能力。写作时注意不要生硬逐字翻译表格内容，适当添加衔接词和细节补充，就能让行文流畅自然，拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：需要覆盖表格全部内容，字数不少于80词，且开头已经给出无需自行创作。首先梳理行文逻辑：先写两人的相同点，再写不同点，最后补充收尾句升华友谊即可。首先处理相同点部分，依次把表格里的三个共性：喜欢运动、学习努力各科成绩好、热爱阅读周末同去图书馆，用合适的衔接词串联，用both of us这类表达突出两人的共性。之后用转折过渡句引出不同点，先介绍Nancy的三个不同特征，再介绍自己的两个不同爱好，描述差异时正确使用形容词比较级，用while衔接对比逻辑，最后补充收尾句，就能写出符合要求的完整作文，不会遗漏要点也能满足字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定的开头，展开相同点描述：先用for example引出第一个共性，说明两人都热爱运动，运动能帮助我们保持健康；接着点明两人都学习非常刻苦，所有科目都很擅长；最后补充两人都喜爱阅读，每周末都会相约去图书馆，完整覆盖全部相同点要点。
2. 用过渡句"But in some ways, we are different from each other."转到差异部分的描述：使用比较级体现Nancy比我高得多、性格更外向，也比我更擅长唱歌跳舞，空闲时她喜欢去听音乐会；再用while做对比，说明我的爱好是上网和旅游，把全部不同点要点都覆盖。
3. 最后补充收尾句"Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends."，让文章结构完整，情感表达自然，全文使用一般现在时符合描述日常爱好的语境，总字数远超80词的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Best Friend and I
Nancy is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. For example, both of us enjoy exercising because it keeps us healthy. We all study very hard and be good at every subject. Reading is our common hobby, and every weekend we go to the library to read together.
But in some ways, we are different from each other. Nancy is much taller than me and more outgoing than me, while I am a little shyer. And she is better at singing and dancing than me. When she has free time, she enjoys listening to concerts while I enjoy surfing the internet and travelling.
Although we have many differences, we will always be good friends.
【知识点】
形容词比较级，提纲作文写作，一般现在时
【点评】
本题是初中英语高频的人物介绍类书面表达，所有要点都通过表格明确给出，核心考察学生对形容词比较级的运用能力，以及梳理共性、对比差异的逻辑表达能力。写作时注意不要生硬逐字翻译表格内容，适当添加衔接词和细节补充，就能让行文流畅自然，拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.7
