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九、写作乐园。
下面是 Lily 每天的生活时间表,请以“My daily life”为题写一篇短文。
要求:1.内容必须包括信息表中的所有要点,可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,字迹工整；
3.不少于5句话。
下面是 Lily 每天的生活时间表,请以“My daily life”为题写一篇短文。
要求:1.内容必须包括信息表中的所有要点,可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,字迹工整；
3.不少于5句话。
答案
My daily life
Hello, I'm Lily. I have a nice and regular daily life.
I get up at 7:00 every morning. Then I have breakfast at 7:30 at home. At 8:00, I go to school with my classmates. I have lunch at 12:00 at school. I finish my classes at 4:30 in the afternoon, and then I go home. I love my daily life very much.
Hello, I'm Lily. I have a nice and regular daily life.
I get up at 7:00 every morning. Then I have breakfast at 7:30 at home. At 8:00, I go to school with my classmates. I have lunch at 12:00 at school. I finish my classes at 4:30 in the afternoon, and then I go home. I love my daily life very much.
解析
这是一篇命题小作文，写作思路如下：1. 以第一人称Lily的视角，使用一般现在时按照时间先后顺序展开叙述；2. 完整覆盖表格给出的全部要点：7点起床、7点半吃早餐、8点去上学、12点吃午餐、4点半回家；3. 可以适当补充简单的日常小细节，让内容连贯自然，满足不少于5句话的要求，选用五年级已学的词汇和基础句式即可。
