从2006年起,我国政府已经让所有孩子都有机会免费入学,但在很多乡村地区,孩子们的学习条件仍然很艰苦。假设你是Sam,请用英文给你们学校的学生会(the Students' Union)写信提一些建议。
内容包括:1. 根据你了解的慈善机构帮助失学儿童的事件谈谈你的感想;
2. 建议学生会组织同学们为当地一所乡村小学筹款,并增添图书和教学设备;
3. 希望乡村的孩子们能受到更好的教育,长大后为乡村服务。
要求:1. 语句通顺,建议合理;
2. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
思路引导
本题要求学生给学生会写一封关于乡村教育的信,可以从题干提示内容着手。写作时注意时态变化,提到过去的事可以用一般过去时,提出建议可以用一般现在时。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。
写作提纲
段落结构
第1段——介绍过去发生的事件并发表感想——① A girl named Xiao Juan was so poor that she couldn't go to school.
② Project Hope made the girl's wish of study come true./Project Hope realized the girl's wish of study.
第2段——提出自己的建议——I think the Students' Union can organize some activities to raise money for a primary school in the local village.
第3段——展望未来——I hope the children there can get better education.
妙笔生花
Dear the Students' Union,
I have just read an article on "Project Hope" in an English newspaper. ______________________________
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Sam
内容包括:1. 根据你了解的慈善机构帮助失学儿童的事件谈谈你的感想;
2. 建议学生会组织同学们为当地一所乡村小学筹款,并增添图书和教学设备;
3. 希望乡村的孩子们能受到更好的教育,长大后为乡村服务。
要求:1. 语句通顺,建议合理;
2. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
思路引导
本题要求学生给学生会写一封关于乡村教育的信,可以从题干提示内容着手。写作时注意时态变化,提到过去的事可以用一般过去时,提出建议可以用一般现在时。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。
写作提纲
段落结构
第1段——介绍过去发生的事件并发表感想——① A girl named Xiao Juan was so poor that she couldn't go to school.
② Project Hope made the girl's wish of study come true./Project Hope realized the girl's wish of study.
第2段——提出自己的建议——I think the Students' Union can organize some activities to raise money for a primary school in the local village.
第3段——展望未来——I hope the children there can get better education.
妙笔生花
Dear the Students' Union,
I have just read an article on "Project Hope" in an English newspaper. ______________________________
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Sam
答案
One possible version:Dear the Students' Union,I have just read an article on “Project Hope” in an English newspaper. A girl named Xiao Juan was so poor that she couldn't go to school. Project Hope made her wish of study come true. But there are thousands of children who cannot go to school either.I think the Students' Union can organize some activities to raise money for a primary school in the local village, and give away some books and teaching equipment.I hope the children there can get better education, and work for the village when they grow up.Best wishes!Yours truly,Sam
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