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春节不仅是中国的传统节日，更成为全球广泛接受和欣赏的中华文化符号。假设你是李华，请结合下面提示，用英语写一封电子邮件向外国好友Sam介绍中国的春节，与他共享快乐。
注意：词数70左右。
审题指导：
1.体裁:电子邮件 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Sam,
Hi! I want to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.
The Spring Festival is Chinese New Year. It comes in January¹ or February. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal.⁵ We eat delicious food like fish and dumplings. We put up Spring Festival couplets² on our doors for good luck. Children are excited to³ get lucky money from elders⁴. We also watch dragon and lion dances. It's a fun and wonderful time for everyone.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点词块
①comes in January 在一月
②put up Spring Festival couplets 贴春联
③are excited to 很兴奋……
④get lucky money from elders 收到长辈的红包
高分句子
⑤It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal.（固定句型 It's a time for sb. to do sth.）这是家人聚在一起享受大餐的时间。
春节不仅是中国的传统节日，更成为全球广泛接受和欣赏的中华文化符号。假设你是李华，请结合下面提示，用英语写一封电子邮件向外国好友Sam介绍中国的春节，与他共享快乐。
注意：词数70左右。
审题指导：
1.体裁:电子邮件 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Dear Sam,
Hi! I want to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.
The Spring Festival is Chinese New Year. It comes in January¹ or February. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal.⁵ We eat delicious food like fish and dumplings. We put up Spring Festival couplets² on our doors for good luck. Children are excited to³ get lucky money from elders⁴. We also watch dragon and lion dances. It's a fun and wonderful time for everyone.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点词块
①comes in January 在一月
②put up Spring Festival couplets 贴春联
③are excited to 很兴奋……
④get lucky money from elders 收到长辈的红包
高分句子
⑤It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal.（固定句型 It's a time for sb. to do sth.）这是家人聚在一起享受大餐的时间。
答案
Dear Sam,
Hi! I want to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.
The Spring Festival is Chinese New Year. It comes in January or February. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal. We eat delicious food like fish and dumplings. We put up Spring Festival couplets on our doors for good luck. Children are excited to get lucky money from elders. We also watch dragon and lion dances. It's a fun and wonderful time for everyone.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
Hi! I want to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.
The Spring Festival is Chinese New Year. It comes in January or February. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal. We eat delicious food like fish and dumplings. We put up Spring Festival couplets on our doors for good luck. Children are excited to get lucky money from elders. We also watch dragon and lion dances. It's a fun and wonderful time for everyone.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给外国好友Sam写电子邮件介绍中国春节。解题思路：1. 明确体裁为电子邮件，需遵循邮件格式（开头称呼、结尾署名）；2. 确定时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称；3. 围绕“介绍春节+共享快乐”的核心，梳理内容：先点明写信目的，再介绍春节时间、核心习俗（家庭团聚、特色美食、贴春联、压岁钱、舞龙舞狮），最后发出邀请；4. 运用题目给出的亮点词块和高分句型，控制词数在70左右，确保语言准确流畅。
【解析】按照题目要求的体裁、时态、人称，结合春节核心习俗组织内容：开头用Dear Sam称呼，点明写信目的是介绍中国春节；接着说明春节时间在1月或2月，介绍春节是家人团聚、享用大餐的时刻，列举特色食物（鱼、饺子），提及贴春联求好运、孩子收长辈红包、看舞龙舞狮等习俗；最后邀请Sam来一起庆祝，结尾署名Li Hua，确保符合邮件格式，词数达标。
【答案】Dear Sam,
Hi! I want to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.
The Spring Festival is Chinese New Year. It comes in January or February. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal. We eat delicious food like fish and dumplings. We put up Spring Festival couplets on our doors for good luck. Children are excited to get lucky money from elders. We also watch dragon and lion dances. It's a fun and wonderful time for everyone.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语电子邮件写作、节日文化表达、英语常用句型运用
【点评】范文严格遵循题目要求，格式规范，时态人称准确，完整涵盖春节核心习俗，运用了指定的亮点词块和高分句型，语言自然流畅，词数符合要求，成功完成了向外国好友介绍春节并发出邀请的任务。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】按照题目要求的体裁、时态、人称，结合春节核心习俗组织内容：开头用Dear Sam称呼，点明写信目的是介绍中国春节；接着说明春节时间在1月或2月，介绍春节是家人团聚、享用大餐的时刻，列举特色食物（鱼、饺子），提及贴春联求好运、孩子收长辈红包、看舞龙舞狮等习俗；最后邀请Sam来一起庆祝，结尾署名Li Hua，确保符合邮件格式，词数达标。
【答案】Dear Sam,
Hi! I want to tell you something about the Spring Festival in China.
The Spring Festival is Chinese New Year. It comes in January or February. It's a time for families to get together and enjoy a big meal. We eat delicious food like fish and dumplings. We put up Spring Festival couplets on our doors for good luck. Children are excited to get lucky money from elders. We also watch dragon and lion dances. It's a fun and wonderful time for everyone.
I hope you can come and celebrate the Spring Festival with us one day!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语电子邮件写作、节日文化表达、英语常用句型运用
【点评】范文严格遵循题目要求，格式规范，时态人称准确，完整涵盖春节核心习俗，运用了指定的亮点词块和高分句型，语言自然流畅，词数符合要求，成功完成了向外国好友介绍春节并发出邀请的任务。
【难度系数】0.3
