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你校的校报正在征集有关家庭的文章。假设你的朋友Helen来自加拿大，请根据以下提示，以“Helen’s Family”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍她的家庭成员。60词左右。
审题指导：
1. 体裁：记叙文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：第三人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Helen’s Family
Helen is my friend. She is from ① Canada. Look! This is her family. The tall man is her father, Thomas. He is a doctor and he is very busy. The woman is her mother, Mary. She is an English teacher in our school. Her students love her because she is a good teacher. ④ The girl is Helen. She’s a student now. She is
good friend. She’s 13 years old. Who is the boy? He is Helen’s brother, Jack. He is a student, too. He is 11 years old.
Helen’s mum and dad look after ② her brother and her very well. They often play sports ③ together.
This is Helen’s family. She loves her family.
亮点词块
① be from 来自
② look after 照顾
③ play sports 做运动
高分句子
④ Her students love her because she is a good teacher.（原因状语从句）她的学生们爱她，因为她是个好老师。
你校的校报正在征集有关家庭的文章。假设你的朋友Helen来自加拿大，请根据以下提示，以“Helen’s Family”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍她的家庭成员。60词左右。
审题指导：
1. 体裁：记叙文 2. 时态：一般现在时 3. 人称：第三人称
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Helen’s Family
Helen is my friend. She is from ① Canada. Look! This is her family. The tall man is her father, Thomas. He is a doctor and he is very busy. The woman is her mother, Mary. She is an English teacher in our school. Her students love her because she is a good teacher. ④ The girl is Helen. She’s a student now. She is
good friend. She’s 13 years old. Who is the boy? He is Helen’s brother, Jack. He is a student, too. He is 11 years old.Helen’s mum and dad look after ② her brother and her very well. They often play sports ③ together.
This is Helen’s family. She loves her family.
亮点词块
① be from 来自
② look after 照顾
③ play sports 做运动
高分句子
④ Her students love her because she is a good teacher.（原因状语从句）她的学生们爱她，因为她是个好老师。
答案
Helen’s Family
Helen is my friend and she is from Canada. There are four people in her family. Her father Thomas is a doctor, and her mother Mary is an English teacher. Helen is 13 and her 11-year-old brother Jack is her classmate too. They are good students. Helen loves her warm family very much.
Helen is my friend and she is from Canada. There are four people in her family. Her father Thomas is a doctor, and her mother Mary is an English teacher. Helen is 13 and her 11-year-old brother Jack is her classmate too. They are good students. Helen loves her warm family very much.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，任务是介绍朋友Helen的家庭成员，属于记叙文写作范畴。解题思路：①明确写作规则：体裁为记叙文，时态采用一般现在时，人称使用第三人称，字数控制在60词左右；②提取核心写作信息：Helen的国籍（加拿大）、家庭成员（父亲Thomas、母亲Mary、弟弟Jack）、父母职业、Helen及弟弟的年龄，以及对家庭的情感；③组织语言：用简洁通顺的英语串联信息，运用基础句式，确保内容完整、符合校报文章的正式性要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇介绍Helen的身份与国籍，引出家庭主题：Helen is my friend and she is from Canada. There are four people in her family.
2. 介绍父母的职业信息：Her father Thomas is a doctor, and her mother Mary is an English teacher.
3. 介绍Helen与弟弟的年龄及身份：Helen is 13 and her 11-year-old brother Jack is her classmate too. They are good students.
4. 结尾表达对家庭的喜爱之情：Helen loves her warm family very much.
整体内容紧扣要求，字数达标，语言通顺。
【答案】
Helen’s Family
Helen is my friend and she is from Canada. There are four people in her family. Her father Thomas is a doctor, and her mother Mary is an English teacher. Helen is 13 and her 11-year-old brother Jack is her classmate too. They are good students. Helen loves her warm family very much.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、家庭成员介绍、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题聚焦英语基础写作能力，要求学生准确传递人物家庭相关信息，运用规范的英语句式，符合校报文章的写作场景，是英语学习中常见的写作练习题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语应用文写作题，任务是介绍朋友Helen的家庭成员，属于记叙文写作范畴。解题思路：①明确写作规则：体裁为记叙文，时态采用一般现在时，人称使用第三人称，字数控制在60词左右；②提取核心写作信息：Helen的国籍（加拿大）、家庭成员（父亲Thomas、母亲Mary、弟弟Jack）、父母职业、Helen及弟弟的年龄，以及对家庭的情感；③组织语言：用简洁通顺的英语串联信息，运用基础句式，确保内容完整、符合校报文章的正式性要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇介绍Helen的身份与国籍，引出家庭主题：Helen is my friend and she is from Canada. There are four people in her family.
2. 介绍父母的职业信息：Her father Thomas is a doctor, and her mother Mary is an English teacher.
3. 介绍Helen与弟弟的年龄及身份：Helen is 13 and her 11-year-old brother Jack is her classmate too. They are good students.
4. 结尾表达对家庭的喜爱之情：Helen loves her warm family very much.
整体内容紧扣要求，字数达标，语言通顺。
【答案】
Helen’s Family
Helen is my friend and she is from Canada. There are four people in her family. Her father Thomas is a doctor, and her mother Mary is an English teacher. Helen is 13 and her 11-year-old brother Jack is her classmate too. They are good students. Helen loves her warm family very much.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、家庭成员介绍、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本题聚焦英语基础写作能力，要求学生准确传递人物家庭相关信息，运用规范的英语句式，符合校报文章的写作场景，是英语学习中常见的写作练习题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.7
