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B. 书面表达
作为中学生,在日常的学习和生活中我们会遇到各种烦恼或压力。假如你是李华,当你感到烦恼或压力很大时,父母、老师或朋友会给予你很多关爱和帮助。请你用英语给你最想感谢的人写一封感谢信。
要点:
(1)表达对他/她的感谢。
(2)回顾过去暖心的经历。
(3)传达对他/她的美好祝愿。
注意:
(1)内容要包含上述要点,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
(2)词数80左右。
作为中学生,在日常的学习和生活中我们会遇到各种烦恼或压力。假如你是李华,当你感到烦恼或压力很大时,父母、老师或朋友会给予你很多关爱和帮助。请你用英语给你最想感谢的人写一封感谢信。
要点:
(1)表达对他/她的感谢。
(2)回顾过去暖心的经历。
(3)传达对他/她的美好祝愿。
注意:
(1)内容要包含上述要点,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
(2)词数80左右。
Dear Ms Lee,
I want to say "thank you" to you. You always took the time to help me, although you were very busy.
I never liked English until I took your class. When I was in trouble, you always encouraged me. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset.
You cheered me up and gave me some good advice. Now I have made great progress in English.
Thank you for being so kind to me.
Wish you all the best!
答案
参考范文：
Dear Ms Lee,
I want to say "thank you" to you. You always took the time to help me, although you were very busy.
I never liked English until I took your class. When I was in trouble, you always encouraged me. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and gave me some good advice. Now I have made great progress in English.
Thank you for being so kind to me. Wish you all the best!
Dear Ms Lee,
I want to say "thank you" to you. You always took the time to help me, although you were very busy.
I never liked English until I took your class. When I was in trouble, you always encouraged me. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and gave me some good advice. Now I have made great progress in English.
Thank you for being so kind to me. Wish you all the best!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的感谢信写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作要求，需以李华的身份给最想感谢的人写感谢信，要包含表达感谢、回顾暖心经历、传达美好祝愿三个要点；其次确定写作对象（参考范文选了老师Ms Lee，贴合中学生日常），采用标准书信格式；最后围绕要点组织内容，用具体事例（如英语学习遇困获老师帮助）让行文连贯，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 确定书信格式：开头写称呼Dear Ms Lee，结尾表达祝愿；
2. 开篇点明感谢：直接说明想对Ms Lee表达感谢，提及老师平时的帮助；
3. 回顾暖心经历：结合自身英语学习的真实经历，如考试失利时老师鼓励并给出建议，后来取得进步，体现老师的帮助；
4. 结尾再次感谢并送上祝愿，确保覆盖所有要点，语言符合中学生表达习惯，词数达标。
【答案】
参考范文：
Dear Ms Lee,
I want to say "thank you" to you. You always took the time to help me, although you were very busy.
I never liked English until I took your class. When I was in trouble, you always encouraged me. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and gave me some good advice. Now I have made great progress in English.
Thank you for being so kind to me. Wish you all the best!
【知识点】
英语感谢信写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题贴近中学生日常学习生活，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求学生围绕指定要点组织内容，运用恰当的书信格式，同时考查语言表达的连贯性和真情实感，是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达中的感谢信写作题，解题思路如下：首先明确写作要求，需以李华的身份给最想感谢的人写感谢信，要包含表达感谢、回顾暖心经历、传达美好祝愿三个要点；其次确定写作对象（参考范文选了老师Ms Lee，贴合中学生日常），采用标准书信格式；最后围绕要点组织内容，用具体事例（如英语学习遇困获老师帮助）让行文连贯，控制词数在80左右。
【解析】
1. 确定书信格式：开头写称呼Dear Ms Lee，结尾表达祝愿；
2. 开篇点明感谢：直接说明想对Ms Lee表达感谢，提及老师平时的帮助；
3. 回顾暖心经历：结合自身英语学习的真实经历，如考试失利时老师鼓励并给出建议，后来取得进步，体现老师的帮助；
4. 结尾再次感谢并送上祝愿，确保覆盖所有要点，语言符合中学生表达习惯，词数达标。
【答案】
参考范文：
Dear Ms Lee,
I want to say "thank you" to you. You always took the time to help me, although you were very busy.
I never liked English until I took your class. When I was in trouble, you always encouraged me. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and gave me some good advice. Now I have made great progress in English.
Thank you for being so kind to me. Wish you all the best!
【知识点】
英语感谢信写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本题贴近中学生日常学习生活，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求学生围绕指定要点组织内容，运用恰当的书信格式，同时考查语言表达的连贯性和真情实感，是常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
