Ⅴ. 书面表达。
某英文杂志向中学生征稿,请同学们以 “My Favourite Animal” 为题,并根据以下提示,介绍自己最喜欢的动物。
提示:
1. What animal do you like best?
2. Why do you like it?
要求:
1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右。
My Favourite Animal
某英文杂志向中学生征稿,请同学们以 “My Favourite Animal” 为题,并根据以下提示,介绍自己最喜欢的动物。
提示:
1. What animal do you like best?
2. Why do you like it?
要求:
1. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 左右。
My Favourite Animal
答案
One possible version:
My Favourite Animal
Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal. I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends. They are so clever that they can understand us when we talk to them. Some dogs can help blind people in many ways, and even save our lives when we are in danger.
In a word, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are my friends in my heart.
My Favourite Animal
Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal. I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends. They are so clever that they can understand us when we talk to them. Some dogs can help blind people in many ways, and even save our lives when we are in danger.
In a word, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are my friends in my heart.
解析
【分析】本题为话题类英语书面表达,要求以“My Favourite Animal”为题,围绕“最喜欢的动物”和“喜欢的原因”两个核心要点写作,需适当发挥,词数约80。解题思路:1. 开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物;2. 从动物的功能、特质、情感陪伴等角度阐述喜欢的原因,结合具体事例拓展;3. 结尾总结,升华对该动物的喜爱之情,确保要点齐全、语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】写作时,首先确定核心动物为狗,开篇点题:“Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal.”;接着分述喜欢的原因:一是狗能看家,二是聪明可当朋友,能理解人类,三是能帮助盲人、救险;最后总结:“In a word, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are my friends in my heart.”,全程紧扣要点,适当拓展,控制词数在80左右。
【答案】Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal. I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends. They are so clever that they can understand us when we talk to them. Some dogs can help blind people in many ways, and even save our lives when we are in danger. In a word, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are my friends in my heart.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】本题考查中学生围绕指定话题组织英语语言、表达个人观点的能力,要求紧扣要点,合理拓展,符合中学生英语写作的基本要求,能有效锻炼学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时,首先确定核心动物为狗,开篇点题:“Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal.”;接着分述喜欢的原因:一是狗能看家,二是聪明可当朋友,能理解人类,三是能帮助盲人、救险;最后总结:“In a word, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are my friends in my heart.”,全程紧扣要点,适当拓展,控制词数在80左右。
【答案】Of all the animals, the dog is my favourite animal. I like dogs best because they can not only help guard our houses, but also be our good friends. They are so clever that they can understand us when we talk to them. Some dogs can help blind people in many ways, and even save our lives when we are in danger. In a word, dogs are my favourite animals, and they are my friends in my heart.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】本题考查中学生围绕指定话题组织英语语言、表达个人观点的能力,要求紧扣要点,合理拓展,符合中学生英语写作的基本要求,能有效锻炼学生的语言运用和逻辑表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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