佳作赏析
戴维(David)想加入“伙伴”俱乐部(Buddy Club)，他正在向俱乐部成员介绍自己。请根据图片提示，完成他的介绍。
——描述人物外貌特征

Hello, everyone! I am David. I am eleven. I am tall. My hair is short. My eyes are big. I like PE. I can play basketball very well. Let's have fun together.
小试身手

瑞秋(Rachel)也想加入“伙伴”俱乐部，请模仿戴维的个人介绍，帮助瑞秋完成她的个人介绍。
要求:1. 图片信息完整;2. 字母大、小写及标点符号规范。
Hello, everyone! I am Rachel.

One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I am Rachel. I am twelve. I am tall. My hair is long. My eyes are big. I like Music. I can sing songs very well. Let's have fun together.

【分析】
首先观察David的个人介绍结构，依次为：自我介绍姓名→年龄→身高→头发特征→眼睛特征→喜欢的科目→擅长的技能→邀请语。解题时需根据Rachel的对应信息，替换范例中匹配的内容，同时确保字母大小写、标点符号符合英语规范，完成符合要求的个人介绍。
【解析】
I am twelve.
I am tall.
My hair is long.
My eyes are big.
I like Music.
I can sing songs very well.
Let's have fun together.
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I am Rachel. I am twelve. I am tall. My hair is long. My eyes are big. I like Music. I can sing songs very well. Let's have fun together.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、形容词运用、个人信息表达
【点评】
本题为模仿写作题，考查学生对个人介绍类英语句式的掌握，要求学生依据范例结构替换对应信息，注重语言规范性，是基础英语写作练习。
【难度系数】
0.2