登录
写作提优
单元写作要求
本单元以“家乡”为话题，谈论家乡的地理位置、旅游景点、人文特色。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写短文或写信，介绍自己的家乡。
写作方法策略 如何写介绍家乡类文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出话题，简要说明家乡的地理位置等信息并总体评价；主体部分需要详细介绍家乡的相关情况(如：知名景点、人文活动、特色美食、历史文化等)；最后抒情总结，表达个人情感。
思路导引
佳作展示
高分词句
My Hometown
引出话题
① Located in the middle of Jiangsu Province, my hometown, Yangzhou, covers an area of 6,591 square kilometers. As a beautiful city with a long history, it attracts ② millions of visitors every year.
详细介绍
In Yangzhou, there are many places of interest to visit. The Slender West Lake is a top attraction. When you walk around it, you'll be amazed by the clear water, winding paths, and lovely gardens. It is well worth a visit. You can also visit ancient streets ③ where you can get a taste of the local culture and local snacks. Remember to try the Yangzhou Fried Rice. ④ It's so delicious that once you taste it, you'll never forget it.
抒情总结
I love my hometown deeply. Welcome to Yangzhou to experience its beauty!
话题写作积累
1. 呈……形状
2. 划船
3. 紧挨着
4. 在城市漫步
5. 随着……的发展
6. 在……结束时
7. 我打算明天带这些交换学生参观大运河博物馆。
8. 天安门广场位于中国的首都北京，每天清晨都有许多游客去那里观看升旗仪式。
9. 作为中国四大园林之一，拙政园(the Humble Administrator's Garden)始建于公元 1509 年。
10. 家乡是萦绕在每个人心头的美好回忆。
单元写作要求
本单元以“家乡”为话题，谈论家乡的地理位置、旅游景点、人文特色。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写短文或写信，介绍自己的家乡。
写作方法策略 如何写介绍家乡类文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出话题，简要说明家乡的地理位置等信息并总体评价；主体部分需要详细介绍家乡的相关情况(如：知名景点、人文活动、特色美食、历史文化等)；最后抒情总结，表达个人情感。
思路导引
佳作展示
高分词句
My Hometown
引出话题
① Located in the middle of Jiangsu Province, my hometown, Yangzhou, covers an area of 6,591 square kilometers. As a beautiful city with a long history, it attracts ② millions of visitors every year.
详细介绍
In Yangzhou, there are many places of interest to visit. The Slender West Lake is a top attraction. When you walk around it, you'll be amazed by the clear water, winding paths, and lovely gardens. It is well worth a visit. You can also visit ancient streets ③ where you can get a taste of the local culture and local snacks. Remember to try the Yangzhou Fried Rice. ④ It's so delicious that once you taste it, you'll never forget it.
抒情总结
I love my hometown deeply. Welcome to Yangzhou to experience its beauty!
话题写作积累
1. 呈……形状
in the shape of
2. 划船
row a boat
3. 紧挨着
next to
4. 在城市漫步
take a city walk
5. 随着……的发展
with the development of
6. 在……结束时
at the end of …
7. 我打算明天带这些交换学生参观大运河博物馆。
I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. 天安门广场位于中国的首都北京，每天清晨都有许多游客去那里观看升旗仪式。
Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. 作为中国四大园林之一，拙政园(the Humble Administrator's Garden)始建于公元 1509 年。
As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. 家乡是萦绕在每个人心头的美好回忆。
Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
答案
写作提优
话题写作积累
1. in the shape of
2. row a boat
3. next to
4. take a city walk
5. with the development of
6. at the end of …
7. I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
话题写作积累
1. in the shape of
2. row a boat
3. next to
4. take a city walk
5. with the development of
6. at the end of …
7. I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
解析
【分析】
这是英语家乡主题写作的基础积累题型，解题时首先要对应中文释义，回忆介绍地点类话题的课标核心固定短语，保证短语表达地道符合写作常用习惯；完成短语后处理汉译英句子，要注意贴合英语表达逻辑，避免逐字直译，合理使用对应主题的高分搭配（比如show sb around、date from等），调整语序让句子通顺自然，适配介绍家乡的写作场景。
【解析】
1. 表“呈……形状”的地点描述常用固定短语为in the shape of，多用于介绍地域、建筑的外形特征。
2. 表出游场景“划船”的常用固定表达为row a boat。
3. 表方位关系“紧挨着”的常用短语为next to，多用于描述两个地点的相邻位置。
4. 表游玩行为“在城市漫步”的常用写作搭配为take a city walk。
5. 表城市发展相关的高频写作短语“随着……的发展”为with the development of。
6. 表时间/地点边界“在……结束时”的固定短语为at the end of …。
7. 句子翻译：“打算做某事”用一般将来时be going to结构，“带某人参观”用固定搭配show sb around，对应专有名词准确翻译后组合为：I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. 句子翻译：“位于”用描述地点的常用动词lie in，“中国的首都”作Beijing的同位语，“升旗仪式”译为the raising of the national flag，调整语序符合英语逻辑后得到：Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. 句子翻译：“作为……之一”用As one of...结构，“始建于”用描述历史建筑的常用搭配date from，组合后得到：As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. 句子翻译：用定语从句修饰“美好回忆”，把“萦绕在每个人心头”转化为符合英语表达习惯的that stays with everyone，得到：Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
【答案】
1. in the shape of
2. row a boat
3. next to
4. take a city walk
5. with the development of
6. at the end of …
7. I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
【知识点】
英语固定短语，汉译英翻译，地点话题写作
【点评】
本题是家乡主题写作的核心基础积累内容，覆盖了方位描述、游玩活动、城市发展相关的高频短语和高分句式，熟练掌握这些内容可以有效避免写作时出现中式英语问题，大幅提升介绍家乡类作文的流畅度和得分档次，解题时注意优先选用话题适配的常用写作表达，不用生硬直译。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是英语家乡主题写作的基础积累题型，解题时首先要对应中文释义，回忆介绍地点类话题的课标核心固定短语，保证短语表达地道符合写作常用习惯；完成短语后处理汉译英句子，要注意贴合英语表达逻辑，避免逐字直译，合理使用对应主题的高分搭配（比如show sb around、date from等），调整语序让句子通顺自然，适配介绍家乡的写作场景。
【解析】
1. 表“呈……形状”的地点描述常用固定短语为in the shape of，多用于介绍地域、建筑的外形特征。
2. 表出游场景“划船”的常用固定表达为row a boat。
3. 表方位关系“紧挨着”的常用短语为next to，多用于描述两个地点的相邻位置。
4. 表游玩行为“在城市漫步”的常用写作搭配为take a city walk。
5. 表城市发展相关的高频写作短语“随着……的发展”为with the development of。
6. 表时间/地点边界“在……结束时”的固定短语为at the end of …。
7. 句子翻译：“打算做某事”用一般将来时be going to结构，“带某人参观”用固定搭配show sb around，对应专有名词准确翻译后组合为：I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. 句子翻译：“位于”用描述地点的常用动词lie in，“中国的首都”作Beijing的同位语，“升旗仪式”译为the raising of the national flag，调整语序符合英语逻辑后得到：Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. 句子翻译：“作为……之一”用As one of...结构，“始建于”用描述历史建筑的常用搭配date from，组合后得到：As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. 句子翻译：用定语从句修饰“美好回忆”，把“萦绕在每个人心头”转化为符合英语表达习惯的that stays with everyone，得到：Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
【答案】
1. in the shape of
2. row a boat
3. next to
4. take a city walk
5. with the development of
6. at the end of …
7. I'm going to show the exchange students around the Grand Canal Museum tomorrow.
8. Tian'anmen Square lies in Beijing, the capital of China, and many visitors go there early in the morning to watch the raising of the national flag.
9. As one of the four great gardens of China, the Humble Administrator's Garden dates from 1509 CE.
10. Hometown is a beautiful memory that stays with everyone.
【知识点】
英语固定短语，汉译英翻译，地点话题写作
【点评】
本题是家乡主题写作的核心基础积累内容，覆盖了方位描述、游玩活动、城市发展相关的高频短语和高分句式，熟练掌握这些内容可以有效避免写作时出现中式英语问题，大幅提升介绍家乡类作文的流畅度和得分档次，解题时注意优先选用话题适配的常用写作表达，不用生硬直译。
【难度系数】
0.6
