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九、书面表达
假设你是校学生会的一员,请你选择一种你最喜欢的野生动物,根据下方思维导图的提示,从外貌、食物、能力、特性、危险处境等方面介绍它,并以校学生会的名义发出倡议,号召更多的同学加入保护野生动物的队伍。
注意:
1. 文章须包括思维导图中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 思维导图中的省略号部分需作适当发挥;
3. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems.
Students' Union
假设你是校学生会的一员,请你选择一种你最喜欢的野生动物,根据下方思维导图的提示,从外貌、食物、能力、特性、危险处境等方面介绍它,并以校学生会的名义发出倡议,号召更多的同学加入保护野生动物的队伍。
注意:
1. 文章须包括思维导图中所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 思维导图中的省略号部分需作适当发挥;
3. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems.
Students' Union
答案
One possible version:
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers like living in groups. They are very brave. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat small animals, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on. However, these big cats are in great danger now. Many of them don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
Students' Union
Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers like living in groups. They are very brave. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat small animals, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on. However, these big cats are in great danger now. Many of them don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
Students' Union
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题，要求以校学生会名义介绍一种野生动物，需结合思维导图的外貌、特性、能力、食物、危险处境五个方面，最后发出保护倡议。解题思路：1. 选定熟悉的野生动物（如老虎）；2. 对应思维导图各模块补充内容：外貌（黄皮毛带黑条纹）、特性（勇敢、群居）、能力（短距离快跑、游泳、爬树）、食物（小型动物）、危险（栖息地缩小、食物不足）；3. 衔接给定开头，加入保护倡议，确保语句通顺、词数符合要求。
【解析】写作步骤：① 承接开头，说明要介绍自己喜欢的野生动物（老虎）；② 依次描述其外貌、特性、能力、食物，覆盖思维导图提示内容；③ 说明其面临的危险处境；④ 发出保护倡议，结尾标注学生会名称。需注意内容完整、适当发挥、语句连贯，词数约90。
【答案】Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers like living in groups. They are very brave. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat small animals, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on. However, these big cats are in great danger now. Many of them don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
Students' Union
【知识点】英语书面表达、野生动物话题、应用文写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的书面表达能力，要求内容覆盖思维导图所有要点，逻辑连贯，同时渗透保护野生动物的意识，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：① 承接开头，说明要介绍自己喜欢的野生动物（老虎）；② 依次描述其外貌、特性、能力、食物，覆盖思维导图提示内容；③ 说明其面临的危险处境；④ 发出保护倡议，结尾标注学生会名称。需注意内容完整、适当发挥、语句连贯，词数约90。
【答案】Dear friends,
Wild animals play an important part on our planet. But they are facing many problems. I am writing to call on everyone to do something for them.
I like tigers best among all the wild animals. They have yellow fur with black stripes. Tigers like living in groups. They are very brave. They can run fast, but only for a short while. They can also swim and climb trees. Tigers eat small animals, like rabbits, deer, wolves and so on. However, these big cats are in great danger now. Many of them don't have enough food to eat and their living areas are becoming smaller and smaller.
I think everybody should act to protect wild animals. Let's take action now!
Students' Union
【知识点】英语书面表达、野生动物话题、应用文写作
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查学生的书面表达能力，要求内容覆盖思维导图所有要点，逻辑连贯，同时渗透保护野生动物的意识，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.5
