听第二篇短文,回答第16~20小题。
16. What does the mother do?
A. A teacher.
B. A farmer.
C. A worker.
17. What is the mother like?
A. She is tall and beautiful.
B. She is tall and fat.
C. Her hair is brown.
18. What does the mother like doing?
A. Fishing.
B. Swimming.
C. Planting flowers.
19. Who does the mother often give flowers to?
A. Her friends.
B. The teacher.
C. Her husband.
20. What is important to a student in the mother's opinion?
A. Playing.
B. Studying.
C. Exercising.
16. What does the mother do?
A. A teacher.
B. A farmer.
C. A worker.
17. What is the mother like?
A. She is tall and beautiful.
B. She is tall and fat.
C. Her hair is brown.
18. What does the mother like doing?
A. Fishing.
B. Swimming.
C. Planting flowers.
19. Who does the mother often give flowers to?
A. Her friends.
B. The teacher.
C. Her husband.
20. What is important to a student in the mother's opinion?
A. Playing.
B. Studying.
C. Exercising.
答案
16.C 17.A 18.C 19.A 20.B
[名师点评]
本文紧扣“Where there is a will, there is a way”这一主题,内容充实具体,以自身学习英语的真实经历为切入点,从谚语释义到实例叙述再到感悟升华,层层递进。
① 开篇直接引用谚语并清晰阐释其含义,点明主旨,紧扣主题。
② 用“With my English teacher's help, I made plans to improve it.”等句子清晰叙述自身经历,条理清晰,过渡自然流畅。
③ 使用含有条件状语从句的句子总结感悟,紧扣文章核心,强化中心思想。
④ 再次引用谚语收尾,与开头形成首尾呼应,结构完整严谨。
素材积累
[开头句]
1. Everyone may face difficulties in their life. (主题引入)
2. An unusual story deeply touches my heart recently. (故事引入)
3. His story made him a household name and an inspiration to all. (故事引入)
[中间句]
1. He fell into trouble, but he never lost his courage. (经历描写)
2. He did not want to disappoint his family as well as himself, so he always tried his best. (经历描写)
3. Little by little, he made great progress through hard work. (经历描写)
[结尾句]
1. Nothing can stop us if we hold on to our dreams. (道理归纳)
2. His story is a great example of never giving up. (道理归纳)
3. I will face challenges bravely and keep moving forward. (决心表达)
[名言警句]
1. Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.
我们最大的荣耀不是从不跌倒,而是每次跌倒后都能站起来。
2. All things in their being are good for something.
天生我材必有用。
写作演练
某英文网站正在开展以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你心中对你影响最大的人是谁,他/她做了什么
令人钦佩的事情,以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。内容提示:1. Who has influenced you most? 2. What did he/she do? 3. What can you learn from him/her?
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文;② 时态:以一般过去时为主;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先点明对自己影响最大的人;其次介绍他/她的优秀品质和事迹来说明从他/她身上学到了什么,对自己有什么影响;最后谈谈自己的感悟。
[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]
The person who has influenced me most
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
本文紧扣“Where there is a will, there is a way”这一主题,内容充实具体,以自身学习英语的真实经历为切入点,从谚语释义到实例叙述再到感悟升华,层层递进。
① 开篇直接引用谚语并清晰阐释其含义,点明主旨,紧扣主题。
② 用“With my English teacher's help, I made plans to improve it.”等句子清晰叙述自身经历,条理清晰,过渡自然流畅。
③ 使用含有条件状语从句的句子总结感悟,紧扣文章核心,强化中心思想。
④ 再次引用谚语收尾,与开头形成首尾呼应,结构完整严谨。
素材积累
[开头句]
1. Everyone may face difficulties in their life. (主题引入)
2. An unusual story deeply touches my heart recently. (故事引入)
3. His story made him a household name and an inspiration to all. (故事引入)
[中间句]
1. He fell into trouble, but he never lost his courage. (经历描写)
2. He did not want to disappoint his family as well as himself, so he always tried his best. (经历描写)
3. Little by little, he made great progress through hard work. (经历描写)
[结尾句]
1. Nothing can stop us if we hold on to our dreams. (道理归纳)
2. His story is a great example of never giving up. (道理归纳)
3. I will face challenges bravely and keep moving forward. (决心表达)
[名言警句]
1. Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.
我们最大的荣耀不是从不跌倒,而是每次跌倒后都能站起来。
2. All things in their being are good for something.
天生我材必有用。
写作演练
某英文网站正在开展以“The person who has influenced me most”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你心中对你影响最大的人是谁,他/她做了什么
令人钦佩的事情,以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。内容提示:1. Who has influenced you most? 2. What did he/she do? 3. What can you learn from him/her?
[思路点拨]
① 体裁:记叙文;② 时态:以一般过去时为主;③ 人称:以第三人称为主;④ 首先点明对自己影响最大的人;其次介绍他/她的优秀品质和事迹来说明从他/她身上学到了什么,对自己有什么影响;最后谈谈自己的感悟。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
He was very small, but he had a big dream—he wanted to play in the NBA.
He had been fighting for it since his childhood.
As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success?
First, he didn't give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height.
Second, he could take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot.
When I face difficulties, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
(更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”)
答案
写作专训
One possible version:
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. He was very small, but he had a big dream—he wanted to play in the NBA. He had been fighting for it since his childhood. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he could take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulties, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
One possible version:
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. He was very small, but he had a big dream—he wanted to play in the NBA. He had been fighting for it since his childhood. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he could take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulties, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求以“The person who has influenced me most”为题,属于人物介绍类记叙文。解题思路为:① 确定核心人物(如参考答案中的Spud Webb);② 围绕思维导图的三个维度展开:先介绍人物的外貌、梦想、成就等个人概况,再说明其成功的原因(如永不放弃),最后阐述人物对自己的影响;③ 注意时态以一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主,紧扣主题,结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明对自己影响最大的人物,介绍其外貌、梦想及成就,引出主题;
2. 分两点说明人物成功的原因,紧扣“永不放弃”等核心品质;
3. 阐述人物对自己的影响,结合自身面对困难时的感悟,升华主题。
【答案】
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. He was very small, but he had a big dream—he wanted to play in the NBA. He had been fighting for it since his childhood. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he could take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulties, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、人物介绍类作文、英语写作表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,从人物概况、成功原因到个人影响层层递进,运用谚语强化主旨,语言流畅自然,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的人物介绍类写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
本次写作要求以“The person who has influenced me most”为题,属于人物介绍类记叙文。解题思路为:① 确定核心人物(如参考答案中的Spud Webb);② 围绕思维导图的三个维度展开:先介绍人物的外貌、梦想、成就等个人概况,再说明其成功的原因(如永不放弃),最后阐述人物对自己的影响;③ 注意时态以一般过去时为主,人称以第三人称为主,紧扣主题,结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明对自己影响最大的人物,介绍其外貌、梦想及成就,引出主题;
2. 分两点说明人物成功的原因,紧扣“永不放弃”等核心品质;
3. 阐述人物对自己的影响,结合自身面对困难时的感悟,升华主题。
【答案】
The person who has influenced me most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. He was very small, but he had a big dream—he wanted to play in the NBA. He had been fighting for it since his childhood. As a saying goes, "Where there is a will, there is a way." In 1985, he became an NBA player.
What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn't give up even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he could take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulties, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、人物介绍类作文、英语写作表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,从人物概况、成功原因到个人影响层层递进,运用谚语强化主旨,语言流畅自然,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的人物介绍类写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
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