登录
（二）书面表达
假设你是中学生李华，你的英国笔友 John 来信询问你最喜欢的食物及它的制作步骤。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一封信回复他。
注意：语句连贯，词数 70 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
（2）思路构建
Dear John，
Yours，
Li Hua
假设你是中学生李华，你的英国笔友 John 来信询问你最喜欢的食物及它的制作步骤。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一封信回复他。
注意：语句连贯，词数 70 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
应用文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称
（2）思路构建
Dear John，
I'm glad that you're interested in cooking too. I like tomato beef noodles best because they're delicious and easy to make. Here is how to make the dish.
First, prepare two tomatoes, some beef and noodles.
Next, cut up the beef and tomatoes.
Then, pour some water into a pan, add some oil and boil it. When the water boils, put the noodles into it and cook for three minutes.
After that, add the beef and tomatoes to the noodles and cook for another minute.
Finally, add some salt and the tasty tomato beef noodles are done.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
（1）审题定调
文体：应用文；一般现在时；第一人称
One possible version:
Dear John,
I'm glad that you're interested in cooking too. I like tomato beef noodles best because they're delicious and easy to make. Here is how to make the dish.
First, prepare two tomatoes, some beef and noodles. Next, cut up the beef and tomatoes. Then, pour some water into a pan, add some oil and boil it. When the water boils, put the noodles into it and cook for three minutes. After that, add the beef and tomatoes to the noodles and cook for another minute. Finally, add some salt and the tasty tomato beef noodles are done.
Try it yourself and maybe you will fall in love with it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
文体：应用文；一般现在时；第一人称
One possible version:
Dear John,
I'm glad that you're interested in cooking too. I like tomato beef noodles best because they're delicious and easy to make. Here is how to make the dish.
First, prepare two tomatoes, some beef and noodles. Next, cut up the beef and tomatoes. Then, pour some water into a pan, add some oil and boil it. When the water boils, put the noodles into it and cook for three minutes. After that, add the beef and tomatoes to the noodles and cook for another minute. Finally, add some salt and the tasty tomato beef noodles are done.
Try it yourself and maybe you will fall in love with it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 审题定调：根据题目要求明确文体为书信（应用文），时态选用一般现在时（描述喜好与制作步骤），人称采用第一人称（以李华身份叙述）；2. 思路构建：开头回应John的询问，说明自己最喜欢的食物（番茄牛肉面）；中间用First、Next等连接词分步骤描述制作过程，确保逻辑清晰；结尾邀请John尝试该食物；3. 语言落实：控制词数在70左右，语句连贯，符合书信格式。
【解析】
首先审题确定：文体为应用文（书信），时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称。写作时，开头点明回应John对烹饪的兴趣，说明最喜欢番茄牛肉面的原因；中间依次写出制作步骤：准备食材、切配食材、煮水、煮面、加入食材、加盐，用连接词使步骤有序；结尾邀请John尝试，注意词数要求，语句通顺自然。
【答案】
（1）审题定调：文体：应用文；一般现在时；第一人称
One possible version:
Dear John,
I'm glad that you're interested in cooking too. I like tomato beef noodles best because they're delicious and easy to make. Here is how to make the dish.
First, prepare two tomatoes, some beef and noodles. Next, cut up the beef and tomatoes. Then, pour some water into a pan, add some oil and boil it. When the water boils, put the noodles into it and cook for three minutes. After that, add the beef and tomatoes to the noodles and cook for another minute. Finally, add some salt and the tasty tomato beef noodles are done.
Try it yourself and maybe you will fall in love with it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、步骤描述表达
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求学生能根据提示完成书信，涵盖喜好说明与制作步骤描述，注重语言连贯性与格式规范，是初中英语写作的常规考查题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，解题思路如下：1. 审题定调：根据题目要求明确文体为书信（应用文），时态选用一般现在时（描述喜好与制作步骤），人称采用第一人称（以李华身份叙述）；2. 思路构建：开头回应John的询问，说明自己最喜欢的食物（番茄牛肉面）；中间用First、Next等连接词分步骤描述制作过程，确保逻辑清晰；结尾邀请John尝试该食物；3. 语言落实：控制词数在70左右，语句连贯，符合书信格式。
【解析】
首先审题确定：文体为应用文（书信），时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称。写作时，开头点明回应John对烹饪的兴趣，说明最喜欢番茄牛肉面的原因；中间依次写出制作步骤：准备食材、切配食材、煮水、煮面、加入食材、加盐，用连接词使步骤有序；结尾邀请John尝试，注意词数要求，语句通顺自然。
【答案】
（1）审题定调：文体：应用文；一般现在时；第一人称
One possible version:
Dear John,
I'm glad that you're interested in cooking too. I like tomato beef noodles best because they're delicious and easy to make. Here is how to make the dish.
First, prepare two tomatoes, some beef and noodles. Next, cut up the beef and tomatoes. Then, pour some water into a pan, add some oil and boil it. When the water boils, put the noodles into it and cook for three minutes. After that, add the beef and tomatoes to the noodles and cook for another minute. Finally, add some salt and the tasty tomato beef noodles are done.
Try it yourself and maybe you will fall in love with it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、一般现在时、步骤描述表达
【点评】
本题考查初中英语应用文写作能力，要求学生能根据提示完成书信，涵盖喜好说明与制作步骤描述，注重语言连贯性与格式规范，是初中英语写作的常规考查题型。
【难度系数】
0.7
