Ⅲ. 书面表达。
假设你是李华，你的15岁生日就要到了。你的美国网友John给你发来邮件，提前祝你生日快乐，并询问你每年如何过生日。请你根据下面的写作要点提示，给John回一封70词左右的邮件。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 妈妈会给你买一个蛋糕并准备丰盛的午餐；
2. 你邀请几个好朋友来庆祝；他们为你唱歌并送你礼物；
3. 饭后你们一起去看电影或者玩游戏。
4. ……
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整。
Dear John，
I’m happy to get your email. Thanks for your best wishes.



Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Hua

One possible version:
Dear John,
I’m happy to get your email. Thanks for your best wishes.
On my birthdays, my mother usually buys me a big birthday cake. She also makes a big lunch for me. We have a party at home. I usually ask some of my good friends to come to my party. At the party, they sing the song Happy Birthday for me. They give me nice presents. After lunch, we usually go to the movies or play games. We have a good time every year.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给美国网友John写一封回信，介绍自己每年的生日庆祝方式。解题思路：1. 明确邮件格式（开头结尾已给出，无需修改）；2. 必须覆盖所有写作要点：妈妈准备蛋糕和午餐、邀请朋友来庆祝（唱歌送礼物）、饭后看电影或玩游戏；3. 用一般现在时描述每年的习惯，语言通顺自然，符合初中生英语水平，字数控制在70左右。
【解析】
首先承接开头，说明妈妈的准备：On my birthdays, my mother usually buys me a big birthday cake. She also makes a big lunch for me. 接着写邀请朋友的环节：I usually ask some of my good friends to come. They sing the song Happy Birthday for me and give me nice presents. 最后写饭后活动：After lunch, we usually go to the movies or play games. We have a good time every year. 将这些内容连贯组织，确保所有要点都涵盖，语句语法正确。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear John,
I’m happy to get your email. Thanks for your best wishes.
On my birthdays, my mother usually buys me a big birthday cake. She also makes a big lunch for me. We have a party at home. I usually ask some of my good friends to come to my party. At the party, they sing the song Happy Birthday for me. They give me nice presents. After lunch, we usually go to the movies or play games. We have a good time every year.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，要点式书面表达，英语邮件写作
【点评】
本文严格按照题目要求，完整覆盖所有写作要点，内容连贯，语言通顺，时态正确，符合邮件的交际语境，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.4